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October 14, 2021 at 8:34 pm #105564
@koshka That’s was good! lol 🤣
You will love what you spend time with.
October 14, 2021 at 9:11 pm #105604Here’s some epic quotes from Ryo from a story I wrote when I was 8.
Why the story I wrote when I was 8, and not a more recent story? Well, 8 years was when I peaked. Ever since then, both my writing and my cuteness declined. My face is kinda like cryptocurrency sometimes. Meaning, it goes up in value, down in value, and Elon Musk wants to send it to the moon….
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Let’s just move on to the quotes.
“If you guys eat Oreos for breakfast, what do you eat for lunch?”
“Sweet! Money.”
“Bu- ky- uhb- bope- eh- beh?”
“Hmm, torture does sound pretty fun. Funner than anything. Funner than King’s Island. And Disney World.”
“I’m so glad those ninjas tarred and feathered me!”
“Uh. Uh. Uh. Eh. In Colorado, no, Florida! The tallest mountain in Florida! The snowy one. But you have to be careful because it’s guarded by fire-breathing flamingos with glowing tridents who wear sunglasses and eat blueberry-flavored chewing gum and Bleeble Berry soap.”
Flawless and handsome (as ruled by my grandmother.)
October 14, 2021 at 9:20 pm #105621@not-so-secret-secret-assassin I wish I had know you when you were eight.
You will love what you spend time with.
October 14, 2021 at 9:26 pm #105623Yeah, you wouldn’t want to know me now.
Now all I do is worry about my swag.
Flawless and handsome (as ruled by my grandmother.)
October 14, 2021 at 9:48 pm #105695@power
I’m stealing your character’s catchphrases
@elishavet-pidyon
This is very thought out for a book with smol a draft. What’s the books genre?
@koshka
Idk why, this sounds Russian to me, I love it XD
@not-so-secret-secret-assassinThose quotes are perfect XD
Swag ain’t to be worried B)- This reply was modified 3 years, 2 months ago by Anatra.
October 14, 2021 at 9:52 pm #105699October 14, 2021 at 9:58 pm #105701October 14, 2021 at 10:20 pm #105703Considering that was my answer, and how many times today I was used by a two-year-old as a human snot rag, that should give you an idea of what my swag looks like at the moment.
October 14, 2021 at 11:50 pm #105724@anatra23 I’m not sure, it’s little like Green Ember with humans, or the Ranger’ Apprentice but cleaner, or Wingfeather with no “magic”: is that fantasy? As for the thought out part, I’m writing my first draft, and although I have only the prologue and part of the first chapter, I have made up scenes all throughout the book. That’s how I make up my plot. If you have any tips for writing, I need them. (That’s one reason I joined KP)
Note: Ruben is the main character’s cousin, who although I don’t want him to die… I think he does.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
October 14, 2021 at 11:53 pm #105725Thanks?
Otto’s accent is supposed to be German influenced, but my more recent book is Russian and may have bled over in the rewrite. Both German and Russian have a ‘v’ sound instead of a ‘w’, and no ‘th’ sound. I don’t speak German, so I’m not as familiar with it. They do sound similar to most people. Russian is spoken from the middle-back of mouth, while German is more throaty.
And once again the homeschooled nerd pops out. Sorry. =|
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Fork the GorkOctober 14, 2021 at 11:57 pm #105726Are you familiar with or know Russian? I’m still learning, but it’s a beautiful language!
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkOctober 15, 2021 at 12:05 am #105728Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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October 15, 2021 at 8:19 pm #105892Oooooo what a fun idea!!!!!!! (Also, I just LOVE LOVE LOVE your quotes!!!!!!!!)
Alrighty, here’s mine. It’s for my character Keenum in my YA fantasy novel, Heir to His Crown.
If you’re waiting for my blessing, then all I have to say is pray your death comes soon. Then the world would be very blessed indeed.
I’d never ask for mercy from that coward. I’m taking Cedulnia back for my people. We’re tired of Valdork’s reign. It is time to end this.
But what about me? I’m broken, flawed, scarred. I’m not a king. I’m nothing.
Okay, dunno if those are any good but there ya go. 😉
God gives His hardest battles to His strongest soldiers.
TeenWritersNook.comOctober 16, 2021 at 3:24 pm #106170October 16, 2021 at 6:05 pm #106182Ooo… Asor sounds very intriguing… I especially like that last line… I have a feeling I’d be a big fan of his. 😉
That first line… XD *chef’s kiss* Love it!
How cool! He sounds like a fun character.
Oh. my. Goodness!!! Those are hilarious, and I love them!!! XD (I’m already a huge fan of Braxton…)
Ooo, this sounds like a fun story… XD
I feel ya… I know some people my age are already published, and I am a LONG way away from that happening. Lord willing, I’ll get there, though, and you will, too! 😀
@joy-caroline
Wow… Those are some amazing lines! I already like Arianelli! 😉
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