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Awesommme, I’m glad that worked. For me, I want to add description in longer paragraphs because they have a softer sense of time, and you can afford to give the information in a solid chunk. And then like you said, actions and dialogue are shorter.
Not that I always follow my own thoughts! Buuut verbalizing this might help me stay consistent.
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I have some idea of how each character would act in a survival scenario, and everyone wants to survive, buuuuuut I don’t know what each character would wish for.
tbh I’m not sure what my guys would wish for either. They’re confusing.
plus it all depends on where you caught them in their arcs.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
Yeah, that makes so much sense!
Oh yeah, I get that. I have a lot of writing knowledge, I just don’t always apply it ??
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
@whalekeeper Could you tag me when you post the next sections? I don’t have a character in this but I still enjoyed reading it. ?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
plus it all depends on where you caught them in their arcs.
I’m planning to use creative liberties because of this, lol. After all, if some of these people turn violent in the game, that’s not accurate to their canon internal values. This is alternate noncanon; the most moral, innocent character might defenestrate their values.
Yep :’)
Of course, thank you so much for the interest!! :]
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yeah, true.
and haha, unlike some of the other authors, my characters abandoning their half-baked resemblances of morals isn’t gonna be surprising to me, especially if they go against each other at any point.
I let my charries on a loose leash ok??? lol
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
Ah the way I gasped? that was perfect for what I’ve been planning for Dylan’s character arc ?
“…Love?” someone asked.
“Yes, my dear, delectable Dylan.”
And you’re such a good writer girl!! I love reading this!! ?
#HugRikerSquad
yoooo this still a thing?
also I updated Mundy’s dragon design if anyone cares
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
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Wow… this looks really cool! I will watch from a distance! (I bet you’ve already started writing ?)
yoooo this still a thing?
The answer is… complicated. I dropped most of my writing over this last school year because of senior year craziness, and because I wanted to prioritize my friends (of which I have nine immediate ones who all need my love and care because they are beautiful human beings).
But I still have the full outline for this thing and every once in a while, I write a scene. Just out of order. So I have a couple Mundy scenes, for example, they’re just in the farther future of the story. ? I’ve also written some of the dramatic deaths so I can foreshadow them.
Now that ✨SuMmeR iS UpOn mE✨ there is a greater chance of me picking this up again.
also I updated Mundy’s dragon design if anyone cares
You can describe his design update if you want!
@the_lost-journal
I have in fact already written the beginning. ?
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@whalekeeper all righty, cool!
Got some scenes for Crosshair too? Or is he dead in the first ten minutes? LOL in that case sorry Cross
You can describe his design update if you want!
I have a picture, just let me find it….
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
He now has a more Night Fury-like tail, which does still have the sharp venom spike on the end. He also has black on his wings, as well as a black “sock” kinda pattern, if you know what I mean, on his talons and ringing his wrists.
Still mostly yellow and brown though.
I believe I also told you earlier I reduced his age from my original estimate, but I’m not sure if it matters lol
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
Got it, good to know. I didn’t remember what color he was before anyway, so this helps.
Got some scenes for Crosshair too? Or is he dead in the first ten minutes? LOL in that case sorry Cross
NO comment. ?
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@whalekeeper lol
well at least I know one of my guys probably makes it a decent way through.
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I have in fact already written the beginning. ?oki doki… wait! I said the cursed word!!!!
NOW MONIKA WILL HACK MY COMPUTER- wait…. I didn’t say the full thing!!! PHEW! I almost said Doki Doki Literature Club-… AHHHH!! I SAID IT!!!!!!!!!
:I
….. Don’t ask me what that was… Do you like my cute little face? ^
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