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lol could be anybody but it made me think of them
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
Crosshair also could’ve been the guy who said “No” to breakfast, although that could easily have been Alpha as well.
Or anyone, really, but it seems like a Crosshair thing to do.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
I’m leaving the dialogue up to interpretation. XD Although I have my own idea of who was speaking
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Crosshair also could’ve been the guy who said “No” to breakfast, although that could easily have been Alpha as well.
That person was addressed by the president as Markus Haziair
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@whalekeeper lol missed that
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
@whalekeeper ohh ok, in other words it could be your character speaking if you want, there’s no confimation so it’s up to the reader.
although hats are a THING in Mundy’s home world. You do NOT mess with someone’s hat. So it stand to reason he’d be ticked off at them for taking it.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
it could be your character speaking if you want, there’s no confimation so it’s up to the reader.
Yeah totally. I saw the hat line as my own character’s line, since he has a hat, but it works for more than one character.
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also what generator did you use to decide who lives and who dies? I’d love to try it out and see what happens lol
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
@whalekeeper kind of a cool writer’s choice, everyone sees the lines as from different characters.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
I used Simublast, it was the first website I could find that didn’t take forever to load. 😌
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@whalekeeper Cool, I’ll check it out.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
“My microwave lasagna…”
Everyone stopped to stare at a slouched man in sunglasses, Joe. He shrugged. “I’m still hungry.”
Hehe I love it
Now I’m really curious what all the characters want their wishes to be. I think I know Dante’s maybe.
And Joe would probably just ask for a cup of coffee or for a mute button for his overly talkative coworkers.
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Love it!! I love your writing style so much actually! I’m not sure what it is, but something about it makes it easy and engaging to read 🤩
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Yaayyy the Loops likey
Now I’m really curious what all the characters want their wishes to be. I think I know Dante’s maybe.
So, as it happens, I am curious too. XD I have some idea of how each character would act in a survival scenario, and everyone wants to survive, buuuuuut I don’t know what each character would wish for. I have guesses. I might ask everyone for ideas, since you guys know your characters best.
And Joe would probably just ask for a cup of coffee or for a mute button for his overly talkative coworkers.
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Oh… Thank you so much! 😅😌 I was concerned, I truly thought this section wasn’t well written. Thanks for the reinforcement.
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No girl, I love it! I think the key to writing chaotic scenes is pacing. Like if you have a lot of long sentences people are going to get confused, but in your case, you stuck to shorter/mid-length sentences and sprinkled in only a few long ones. It worked really well 👌
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