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August 28, 2022 at 2:25 pm #116268
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 anyone wanna rp?
ik u did Koshka but as Zlatan or Vulkasin?? Idk lol
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#ProtectSebAugust 29, 2022 at 12:18 pm #116277@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Trauma club! I’m in, and so are most of my charries! I sorta like chopping characters’ arms off….Or blinding/half-blinding them…..You get the idea…..
Luckily for them and for you, Jareth and Crosshair haven’t gotten really mutilated yet. Unless you count the time Crosshair was stabbed in the stomach…..or the burn that gave him his scar (although I didn’t write that one)
And y’know what? I’m just going to start rp’ing now…. (gahh my computer thinks the word “rp’ing” is a misspelling and the word it wants to change it to is NOT a good word…..)
Crosshair
He’d been out the minute his head hit the cold stone ground. Which was weird. He hadn’t thought he was tired.
Light shot through the window and through his eyelids, prompting them to open. He felt for his rifle, which he’d dropped beside him.
Good. It was still there.
The others were waking up also; most of them weren’t a problem, but Riker’s father…the quite-possibly-drunk one…..
If he wasn’t restrained, they might have a situation on their hands.
As Crosshair looked around the room, he noticed there were only the men and boys there. The girls must’ve been somewhere else. He hadn’t seen or heard them leaving.
Maybe he had been exhausted after all.
He stretched his long legs and stood up. “We’re in the tower we were looking for. Now what?” he asked.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
August 29, 2022 at 12:24 pm #116279Anonymous
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@keilah-h. @godlyfantasy12. @elishavet-pidyon. @koshka. Alright, so…it’s not in color, but I made this to show Riker and Naja side by side. To see them together, y’know? Also, I have a pic of Franz if anyone wants to see it. (Not gonna blame anyone for not wanting to see it. XD)
August 29, 2022 at 12:29 pm #116280@freedomwriter76 Nice! Najaâs really cute. And I wouldnât mind seeing FranzâŚ.gives me someone to visualize when I want to smack himâŚ..
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
August 29, 2022 at 12:40 pm #116281Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. @elishavet-pidyon. @koshka. @keilah-h. I’ll RP so Franz can wake up. đ
Riker
The night had been long. At least everyone else had slept.
Riker glanced over at Viktor and November, who were starting to wake.
âWeâre in the tower we were looking for. Now what?â Crosshair asked.
Ezra stood and shrugged. “Guess we need to look for a way out of this place.”
Riker nodded and stood. He’d go get Naja as soon as everyone was ready.
Riker would be ready to tackle the day.
Riker yawned.
Good luck with only an hour of sleep.Â
Riker shrugged that thought away. So what if he only slept for an hour.
“What time is it?” November mumbled, getting out from under the cloak he and Viktor had been given for a blanket.
Riker glanced out. “Not sure the exact time.”
A groan and a curse.
Shifting.
Riker looked around.
Oh no.
Franz
He’d last remembered a hallway.
An argument, slapping Riker, getting attacked by some crazy man.
He remembered things before then, finally.
He hadn’t been able to…yesterday, he supposed it was.
Franz’s eyes slowly fluttered open. Groaned and cursed when pain shot to his head.
Oh. It was bandaged.
He glanced around.
There were people…everywhere.
Men and boys only, he noticed.
The girls must have been somewhere else.
They had slept then…Franz muttered another curse. Just his stupid luck.
Now what was he supposed to do?
He glanced around.
Suddenly, a face stopped in front of him.
“Father…you’re awake.” Riker whispered.
“What. Happened!?”
“That’s a long story. Maybe it won’t happen again if you back off and leave people alone.”
Franz stood and glared at the man with the burn scar. “Is that what you think!?”
Naja
Everyone was still asleep?
Naja slowly slid out from underneath Alyona’s shawl.
Draped it over Alyona.
Hmm…everyone was still sleepy!
Naja wouldn’t wake them.
She needed to be polite like Mama always said to do.
She stepped around the room, careful to make sure her shoes were quiet.
Like a kitty!
Naja paused.
She almost thought she heard someone crying!
She went towards the direction of the sound, in the corner of the room, and stopped.
A little boy?
“Hello.”
The boy startled and looked up at her. “I’m sorry. I scared you.”
The little boy didn’t move, merely stared at her.
Naja sat down in front of him. “I’m Naja! What’s your name? Wanna play with me?”
She noticed he had an animal in his arms. “Your puppy!? He’s cute!”
She wasn’t sure if it was a puppy or not though…it looked a little weird.
All she knew was that she loved Nyx. She wanted to give him another hug when he woke up!
August 29, 2022 at 12:43 pm #116282Anonymous
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@keilah-h. SHE IS!!! So, so cute! ??? (also, hope you don’t mind me talking as Crosshair for a moment. I just thought he’d respond like that to Franz. ?)
Okay then! (yes, smack him for me please! ?)
August 29, 2022 at 1:27 pm #116283AWWW NAJAâs POV IS ADORABLE!!!!!
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76November
November heard Crosshair speak gruffly to someone. His ears were still a bit stuffy from just waking up, and he yawned, rubbing the sleep from his eyes.
What was wrong with him?
November sat up and his blood ran cold as he spotted Franz, who was now awake.
âIs that what you think!?â Franzâs voice echoed. He was still mad, though November hoped he wasnât stillâŚinfluencedâŚ.
Riker seemed to be taking in the situation with a bit of unease, but he didnât react right away.
The twins were waking now. Theyâd probably be alert quickly. That made November feel better.
Ezra and Mikkel were already awake as well, and Viktor was stirring.
âWhat..?â The boy beside him groaned, sitting up as well.
November swallowed, feeling better that they are least outnumbered the grouchy man.
And he was thankful the girls werenât with them. Heâd hate to have Arabella in here. Or little Naja.
AndâŚNyx might have made things worse.
Franzâs eyes flared with anger as he glared at each of them, his eyes resting on them all for a few seconds. November shuddered when they landed on him, and he looked away.
Franz seemed pleased at the sign of weakness. November tugged at his curls.
He was not going to enjoy having this man traveling with themâŚ.
Nyx
LynâŚtricked himâŚ.bahâŚ.stupidâŚ.trickâŚ..
Nyxâs ears flicked in his sleep and he purred gently, his chest rising and lowering with each breath. He nuzzled against Lynâs chest, feeling her warmth.
His nose scrunched as something tickled his senses, and his ears pricked.
StrangeâŚsmellâŚ.
SoundsâŚ.
VoicesâŚ.
His eyes flicked open and his tails flicked. Slowly, he raised his head. He gave a slowly look around, his vision impeccable in the dark.
He counted off in his head everyone in the room, and his mind blared in warning as he realized; someone was missing.
The girl.
That one whoâd nearly strangled him to death.
He released a low hiss of annoyance.
She would get into trouble.
Careful not to disturb Lyn, Nyx got up from his position, and jumped away from her arms. He slowly peered around the room, listening carefully for anything other then the sounds of breathing.
He quickly heard voices.
Najaâs andâŚ.
Someone elseâsâŚ
Nyxâs fur bristled.
Stranger.
He hissed, drawing closer to the voices. He spotted Naja, bent over in a corner, and he hissed slightly.
What had she gotten herself into?
The girl turned, all smiles.
For a moment, she reminded Nyx of Jocelyn. Did the girl not realize she could be in danger?!
âNyx!!â Naja whisper-yelled, her eyes lighting up. âThis is my new friend!â
Moving slightly, Nyx could make out the strange behind her.
He relaxed slightly, realizing it was a child, much like her.
A little boy.
But he didnât let his guard down; he could still be dangerous.
And that wasnât all he sawâŚ
The strange creature he held in his arms was like none Nyx had seen before.
He sniffed the air.
The creatures smelledâŚunnaturalâŚ
Just plain weird.
And he didnât like it.
Unable to control himself, Nyx was on the little creature in a matter of seconds, fur bristled, and canines bared.
Naja shrieked, as did the little boy, waking up the rest of the girls.
(WellâŚ..that escalated.)
also @keilah-h so Nyx is 10, and his instincts are pretty wild, heâs also really protective (especially of Lyn, but he can be of anyone, so forgive him for his overreacting, but he is also a kid himself lol)
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#ProtectSebAugust 29, 2022 at 1:51 pm #116285@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Just going to do Jarethâs POV for now.
Jareth
“Iâm Naja!” said the girl whoâd found him. “Whatâs your name?”
“Jareth,” he said, but she didnât seem to pay attention and was instead focused on Crow.
“Your puppy! Heâs cute!”
Crow squirmed, indignant at being called a puppy, but Jareth ignored him.
Naja led him to where a few other people were. He noticed he was the only boy in the room.
He saw a womanâor a girlâwho looked something like his mother, but then realized she definitely wasnât before calling out to her and waking her up.
She had an animal, a little fox of some sort. Naja called it Nyx.
Nyx bared his teeth and leaped at Crow. Crow screeched back and attacked. Fur and scales flew.
Naja shrieked.
“Crow, stop it!!” shouted Jareth.
The other people woke up.
Oops.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
August 29, 2022 at 1:53 pm #116286@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Aww, Naja is adorable. And she even looks a little like Riker!
I’ll go ahead and respond.
Viktor
Morning was here. Viktor lay perfectly still, watching the sunlight soak the walls.
His back ached, but his head had escaped injury.
He’d woken once in the… Earlier morning, just as he was thrust into the flames, screaming for his father and mother – he knew they had been who he had called for, although he hadn’t called them that. He never did, in his dreams.
But it had been a dream. Only a dream. And he’d lain with his eyes closed, reciting psalms to himself until peace returned and with it, sleep.
Now, he felt like he was waking up from the dead. This is what I get for over sleeping.
November was just stirring, disrupting their tent of warmth. That was fine; Viktor needed to get up anyway.
Still, he stayed there, absorbing the quiet of the room.
Three children sat, playing together. Rain was pattering against the windows.
Then a loud noise jolted Viktor awake.
“What?”
Franz was awake as well as every other person in the room.
Trouble was afoot.
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August 29, 2022 at 2:02 pm #116288@keilah-h hey so could u describe Crow once more for me? And also how he would attack just so Ik if he injures Nyx some or not? Also Nyx wouldnât injure him much, probably just a few nips (or like warning nips) mainly just like a âWho are you? What are you?â/warning attack. But obviously Crow doesnât know that
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#ProtectSebAugust 29, 2022 at 2:12 pm #116289@godlyfantasy12 He wonât hurt Nyx too bad. Heâll claw him, that sort of thing, but his claws are too small to scratch deeply because heâs so young. Heâs black, and looks a little like this:
(This is a different creature of the same type, called Stormcloud)
His eyes are on the stripe on his face ; theyâre an orange-ish color although the drawing doesnât show them.

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August 29, 2022 at 2:18 pm #116290@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Yes, I’d say this has escalated. XD
Alyona
Screeches and hisses filled Alyona’s ears, driving rest from her mind. She flew to her feet, heart pounding, looking for a broom – anything really.
Two animals were locked together in feirce combat. Around them hovered two children, faced stricken with fright and anxiety.
The little girl, it was Naja, reached to grab a wild spitting Nyx from the fight.
“No!” Alyona pulled the lass away before she could get hurt. “He won’t see you.”
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
August 29, 2022 at 2:20 pm #116291K thx!
@freedomwriter76 @koshka yâall wanna go next?
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#ProtectSebAugust 29, 2022 at 2:36 pm #116292@koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
Jocelyn
As soon as the sound reached her ears, Lyn knewâŚ.
She bolted from her sleeping spot and found herself towering above the two fighting creatures. Nearby was Naja, behind held by Alyona, and another child, a boy Lyn hadnât seen before.
He looked extremely frightened by everyone around him and at the sight of his creature in this fight. Lyn shot him a reassuring smile and wink before returning her sight to the ball of fur and feathers.
âNyx! Enough!â
The fight didnât stop.
âNyx!â Lyn yelled again. âLOVE! ENOUGH!â Lynâs tone was forceful, and she reached her hand towards the sparring creatures.
âJocelyn! Donât!â Ara cried, now standing with Eva.
âYouâll get hurt darli-â But Eva didnât finish her sentence.
Nyx immediately stopped his fighting, his ears plastering themselves to his head as Lyn let out a hiss of pain. The other, black little creature scurried back to itâs owner, the littler boy, itâs feathers ruffled. It too looked extremely perturbed.
Each creature looked worse for wear, but thankfully not too injured, just a few scratches and nips.
 âLynnie!â Nyx cried, his ears still plastered to his head. He crouched on his haunches, his large eyes glistening.
Lyn frowned, staring at a small scratch mark on her palm.
âD-Did I-â Nyx was shaking now, his tails flicking furiously.
Lynâs eyes lifted from her hand and she looked at her little friend. Her eyes softened and she smiled. âItâs alright, love. IâŚhonestly donât know who did it.â
That didnât make Nyx feel any better though, and he frowned, crouching even lower. His ears seemed to be glued to his skull at this point.
Lyn frowned and knelt next to him, âNyx itâs okay, really. I promiseâŚâ she reached for him, but he backed away, whimpering.
 âI-Iâm sorryâŚI-I didnât mean toâŚI-I didnâtâŚ.â She could see a small trail of tears running down his fur now.
Lyn felt her heart break.
âOh, NyxieâŚItâs okâŚ.shhâŚI donât even know if it was you who scratched me! Come on, darling.â She gently reached out and picked him up, pulling him close.
She heard him sniff and it took everything to keep herself composed.
NyxâŚnever showed this side of himselfâŚ
Especially not aroundâŚ
Lyn looked around. Everyone was staring, and looked at a loss for words. Even though they all couldnât hear him, they obviously understood what was taking place.
âI-Is Nyx okay?â Naja asked, walking up to Lyn.
Lyn have a small smile. âYeaâŚheâll be okay.â
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#ProtectSebAugust 29, 2022 at 2:37 pm #116293I enjoyed writing that! Iâve never written that side of Nyx before and I must say I enjoyed it!!
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