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August 24, 2022 at 4:08 pm #115866Anonymous
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@queen_of_alvastia. @godlyfantasy12. Oh, if Sorren dares to touch ANYONE in the other group, HE WILL GET IT! AND IF HE DARES TO TOUCH PRECIOUS NAJA, OHHH, HE’S A DEAD MAN. Riker doesn’t want to kill anyone if he can help it, but you touch his family, y’all, you’re dead meat. He would kill Sorren without a second thought.
August 24, 2022 at 4:12 pm #115867@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 OH HE BETTER NOT!!
He would disappear from my story and never be heard from again….languishing in a dungeon in a KP character castle….
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August 24, 2022 at 4:16 pm #115868Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. Sure…if Riker doesn’t get to him first. 😏
August 24, 2022 at 4:18 pm #115869@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Verity
Verity aimed a kick at Sorren’s prone body. Anger coursed through her veins. She couldn’t remember ever feeling like this before.
She ran over to Jayden. He was curled up on the floor. His sobs cut to her heart.
She knelt down on the floor beside him and put a hand on his shoulder.
“Hey,” she whispered, “Are you okay?”
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August 24, 2022 at 4:19 pm #115870@freedomwriter76
Riker, please make my life and story easier by getting rid of him XD
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August 24, 2022 at 4:20 pm #115871Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. Good job, Verity! *claps*
August 24, 2022 at 4:21 pm #115872Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. If Sorren touches November, anyone, almost, and especially Naja, oh, trust me, he will. XD
August 24, 2022 at 4:21 pm #115873Bruh it glitched with my RP
@queen_of_alvastia @freedomwriter76Corvina
Well, this had escalated quickly.
Asher had attacked like a mad man, and was now being held back by another person, Michael, from what Corvina had caught of all the names being thrown around.
Jayden was crumpled on the floor in a fetal position, crying. It made her…uncomfortable, and she shifted on her feet.
Yeesh…emotions were running high, that was for sure.
But hey, Sorren was unconscious, and she definitely liked that. She smirked as she gazed at his body, lying on the stone floor. Blood dripped from his head where it had hit the wall.
Asher….he’d been an animal…
Whatever his relationship with Jayden; family or friend, he was definitely protective.
Corvina raised her brows. She didn’t know exactly what his problem was, but she knew she definitely didn’t wanna mess with Jayden now, unless she wanted on his bad side.
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebAugust 24, 2022 at 4:22 pm #115874@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Yeah I’m with you Corvina, no way am I getting on Asher’s bad side.
Then again, I would NEVER hurt Jayden NEVER
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August 24, 2022 at 4:35 pm #115876I would hope Sorren wouldn’t touch Naja!! But I don’t think he’d have any problem hurting November the terrible guy!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebAugust 24, 2022 at 4:39 pm #115877@godlyfantasy12 If November ever gave him the opportunity…..I’m sorry to say Sorren might attack him too…
SORRY!!
Sorren, you villain, you deserve everything you got!!!!
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August 24, 2022 at 4:42 pm #115878Well, it would probably go down like Sorren somehow insults Ara (or even Jocelyn) and November is NOT gonna let that bode so then he replies with a comment like Jayden did and it’s allll downhill from there…..
yeaaaaaaa
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#ProtectSebAugust 24, 2022 at 4:44 pm #115879Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Oof, it does that sometimes. XD Also, no one wants to be on Asher’s bad side. That man also knows hand to hand combat. XD
@godlyfantasy12. @queen_of_alvastia.Jayden
A hand on his shoulder.
“Hey,” Verity whispered, “Are you okay?”
Jayden sobbed.
‘”Stop crying, boy, or I’m going to give you something else to cry about, understand me!?”
Jayden still cried. His cheek hurt. His ribs hurt. His heart hurt. His everything hurt.
Grayson was his little brother. The precious little boy that went with Jayden wherever he went. The little, roly-poly bundle of smiles and laughter. And he was gone.
“I want Grayson back!”
Maria’s backhanded blow came, suddenly and painfully.
“You can’t get him back, boy! Stop. Crying.”’ (wow. I hate his mother. XD)
Jayden still sobbed. Another hand rested on his shoulder. “Hey…you’re safe now.”
He sniffed.
No.
He.
Wasn’t.
Safe.
Not yet.
Not here.
Not now.
Maybe not ever.
Verity’s arms wrapped around him. Jayden held her close. But he still sobbed.
He couldn’t stop.
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! MY BABY!!!!! *sobs forever*
Asher
Sorren hurt Jayden.
Asher had almost killed Sorren.
He wouldn’t have regretted it, no sir.
But Michael’s question did still hit him hard.
Maybe he wouldn’t have regretted it immediately, in his rage, he would have later.
Sorren was horrid…he choked Payton…hurt Jayden, Asher’s little brother.
“But I say to you, Love your enemies and pray for those who persecute you…”
Oh, how difficult that was. Impossible for Asher, almost.
Oh Lord, give me strength.
He glanced back over at Jayden, the fury finally…slightly…subsiding.
He went over to his brother, who had Verity’s arms wrapped around him and Leon’s hand on his shoulder.
“Little brother…Jayden…I’m here.”
Jayden looked up at him, tears still falling, eyes red rimmed, face pale, and so much fear in his blue eyes. “Asher?”
Asher’s own tears fell at the sight of his brother in so much pain and fear. “Yeah, it’s me.”
He pulled Jayden, along with Verity, into his embrace.
“It’s okay now, Jayden, little brother, I’m here. You’re safe.”
Leon
Leon’s own body shook slightly.
He’d never seen something like that.
Not in his life.
Sure, he’d heard of people dealing with sudden moments of panic. (panic attacks, they just don’t know what it’s called yet.)
But he’d never seen a man go through that much in only a moment.
Leon understood Asher.
If anyone hurt his family, though Leon didn’t have any siblings, Leon would do the same.
Except, if it was his wife and kids, he wouldn’t have let anyone stop him from killing the person.
It was horrible, he knew.
But true.
Leon stood.
Glanced over at the girl who had come into the room.
He still didn’t know her name. (did she ever say it? I already can’t remember. XD)
Leon carefully, cautiously, with a smile, went over close to her. But not too close. If anything, these past few moments had given him some trust issues. (Haha, I’d be the same, Leon. We get you, bro. XD)
“I’m Leon. I’m sorry…this…was the first thing you had to walk into.” He smiled softly. “What’s your name?”
August 24, 2022 at 4:46 pm #115880Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. @queen_of_alvastia. I don’t think Sorren would have a problem against hurting anyone, to be fair. 🤷🏻♀️
August 24, 2022 at 4:58 pm #115882Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. @queen_of_alvastia. SORREN BETTER NOT DARE TO TOUCH NOVEMBER! *grabs and hugs November tight, shielding him from evil, EVIL Sorren*
#NovemberProtectionSquad. 🤜🤛🙎♀️💪
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