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August 24, 2022 at 3:25 pm #115850Anonymous
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@queen_of_alvastia. ME TOOO!!!!! đđđ
She’s Riker’s oldest daughter. Aged 5. đ„° I love her. She’s probably my fav of his kids, but then again, she’s just like her father in so many ways, so…bias! đ But she’s also just so sweet and loving and caring. đđđ
August 24, 2022 at 3:28 pm #115851AGH NAJAAAAAAAA I NEED A HUUUUUG!!!! *hugs and squeezes her!!*
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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#ProtectSebAugust 24, 2022 at 3:29 pm #115852CAN I JOIN YOU?!?!?!?!
(I need a change from crying my eyes out)
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August 24, 2022 at 3:32 pm #115853Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. @godlyfantasy12. *pulls you both into a group hug with sweet little Naja*
August 24, 2022 at 3:37 pm #115854@queen_of_alvastia @freedomwriter76
Corvina
Sheâd made Trevyn extremely nervous, that much was obvious. It took him quite a while before he answered, and when he did, he was a  stuttering mess.
âN â no.â The poor boy was so pale and wide-eyes Corvina felt a bit sorry for him. Finally he met her gaze, biting his lip. âI â I just saw you looking- at me â like â y â you knew â knew me or â something.â
Panic flooded Corvinaâs chest. She felt as though she wanted to heave forward and vomit, but she stood her ground, though her face paled considerably.
She was positive the look on her face gave her away, because Verity and Trevynâs expressions seemed to turn into concern, and she hissed at herself inwardly for her reaction.
What was she supposed to say now?
She met Trevynâs eyes again. Saw his face.
Once more, it began to morph before her eyes.
She tore her eyes away from the two, shutting down any and all feelings. Just like sheâd had to do many times before. Just like always.
She balled her hands into fists and bit her cheek until it drew blood. Anything to distract her.
Why had she even opened her mouth?
âIt was a stupid move, wasnât it?â
Shut. Up.
She decided to focus instead on the conversation taking place with the group of men before her.
Sorren, the man she now thoroughly dislike, was staring menacingly at Jayden. This was causing him to receive some not so pleasant looks from another man, who was standing next to Jayden.
He seemedâŠprotective of Jayden.
Were they family? They didnât necessarily look alike. Perhaps just friends. She wasnât sure. Either way, this didnât seem like it was going to end wellâŠ.and Michael had yet to put his weapon down.
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#ProtectSebAugust 24, 2022 at 3:39 pm #115855Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. I feel like Ara would get along well with Angelina, Riker’s younger sister, who honestly probably DOES hate her father for what he did to Riker and her mother. Franz rarely ever abused her, though. (Probably because Riker often took the blame for her. My brave, protective baby. đ) But she hates him for what he did and, possibly even tells Riker that if she were him, she’d probably leave her father to fend for himself and basically let him die. đ€·ââïžđ But Riker responds by say9ng even after everything Franz did to him, he still. Loves. Him. đđ Riker’s a better person than me, that’s for sure. đ
August 24, 2022 at 3:44 pm #115856Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. @queen_of_alvastia. When I listen to the song I’m listening to right now, now I think about Trevyn, Riker, Jayden, November, Corvina, etc, all our broken characters. And now I may just cry. đđ Anywho, the song is “Wanted” by Danny Gokey. đ
August 24, 2022 at 3:44 pm #115857@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 This is going to get a little crazy….Short but not so sweet….
Sorren
âAnd if you want him to put it down, your highness, then put yours down first.â
It was the quiet one. Very well. The quiet ones were generally the easiest to control.
In a single move, he shoved Michael aside and took a menacing step towards Jayden.
****
JAYDEN I’M SO SORRY!!!
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He grabbed the man’s collar, feeling him flinch, on the verge of collapse.
“You open your mouth like that to me one more time, and I will not be responsible for what happens next.”
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August 24, 2022 at 3:45 pm #115858Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. I think I know exactly who’s giving Sorren the death looks. đ
August 24, 2022 at 3:53 pm #115859@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
He did more than just put his foot in it now….
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August 24, 2022 at 3:55 pm #115860ALSO I NEED TO MAKE A NOVEMBER RP REAL QUICK!â BecauseâŠCorvinaâs hand hurting and Novemberâs scratch relate to each otherâŠ..
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @keilah-h @freedomwriter76November
âAh!â November cried, slapping the hand that had previously been tangled in his curls, over the left side of his face.
âNovember?â Araâs eyes widened in concern.
He winced, rubbing his hands over his scars. The left side of his face slowly began to grow numb, as if it had fallen asleep, and then it felt like it were being pricked with pins.
âNovember, whatâs wrong?â Ara gasped, releasing his hand and moving to stand in front of him.
He shook his head. âI-Itâs nothing.â He grimaced.
He helped as heat filled the left side of his face. A scalding heat, like someone was branding him. He groaned, pushing against his skin to make the pain stop, but it was no use.
A few others were now looking at the two as well, and November blushed at the attention.
âNovember?â Lyn had noticed too, and her eyes were also wide with concern.
âI-I-.â He stuttered, his scars beginning to pulse with heat under his fingers.
He groaned as another wave of pain hit him. By this time someone had made their way over from the group, but with one hand covering his eye, he wasnât sure who it was.
At last, the pain began to subside, and he let out a breath of relief. He felt someone, Ara, remove his hand from his face, and glance at his scars. Her brows were creased with worry.
âNovemberâŠw-what just happened?â
November swallowed, averting his eyes. He really didnât want to get into this. Least of all now.
Arabella seemed to realize as she frowned. âH-Has this happened before?â
November winced, hating the hurt look in her eyes. He hadnât meant to hurt her, justâŠprotect her.
He knew she already felt bad about his scarsâŠhe didnât want to make her feel worse.
âI-Iâm sorr-â his apology was cut off by her hand on his face, making the words escape him. Her eyes were still sad, but she was offering a small smile now.
âIâm sorryâŠâ
W-Why was she apologizing?
âI shouldâve noticed.â
November wanted to correct her, to stop her, but with her hand on his face, he couldnât find the words. She looked up at whoever was standing over them (idk who, but I was thinking Mikkel since heâs kinda been the doctor of the group so far).
November followed her gaze and flushed, embarrassed at the attention as he glanced to the others, who were also staring in concern.
âHehâŠumm..I-Iâm okay. ReallyâŠâ He smiled awkwardly and scratched the back of his neck.
Ara let out a small laugh.
It sounded like music to him.
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#ProtectSebAugust 24, 2022 at 3:57 pm #115861OH ALSO @freedomwriter76 I REALLY WANT U TO MENTION THAT JAYDEN IS UR LITTLE BROTHER like âput my LITTLE brother downâ or something because if Corvina realizes itâs his little brotherâŠ.
wellâŠ.
thereâs some trauma in that area so Sorren better be prepared for some Dark Corvina XD
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#ProtectSebAugust 24, 2022 at 3:58 pm #115862Also if Sorren had done that to November also, Arabella (who is not a fighter) wouldâve been like
AWW HECK TO THE NO. XD
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#ProtectSebAugust 24, 2022 at 4:02 pm #115863Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. @godlyfantasy12. NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! MY BABY!!!!!!!!! đđđ Asher is literally going to kill him. *cracks knuckles* And I’LL HELP. đ€
Jayden
âYou open your mouth like that to me one more time, and I will not be responsible for what happens next.â
Sorren’s steel gray eyes were meeting Jayden’s blue.
Jayden’s body trembled, head to toe.
‘”Think I’d ever want you!? You’re a clumsy, stupid, crybaby, and I never wanted you!” Maria smacked him, hard, and let go of his collar, throwing him onto the floor.’
“Want to say anything else?”
Jayden couldn’t get his lips to move.
Couldn’t get his throat to open.
But his body continued to tremble, and tears even began to course down his face.
‘”We’d all be better off if you were dead just like your brother.”‘
Jayden’s lips finally opened. “Please…don’t…don’t hit me.”
Asher
Blinding fury.
Asher rushed forward.
Slammed Sorren against the wall.
Jayden, broken free, crumpled to the floor and curled himself into a protective ball, sobbing.
Asher hit Sorren, hard, in the head.
Sorren groaned.
Blood was on his head.
“DON’T YOU DARE LAY A FINGER ON HIM!” Asher screamed.
His brother’s sobs rang in his ears, over. And over. And over again.
Only fueling his fury.
“NO ONE TOUCHES MY LITTLE BROTHER!”
He rushed at Sorren again, attacking him.
No one.
No one dared to even touch Jayden.
Sorren’s body went almost completely still, but his chest still rose and fell.
Jayden still sobbed.
Asher kept his gaze on Sorren. “No one. No one…touches…Jayden.”
Michael
“No one. No one…touches…Jayden.”
Michael quickly put his gun on his back. He saw, out of the corner of his eye, Leon, Payton, and Verity rush to Jayden.
Asher’s body was trembling in rage.
Michael rushed forward. Grabbed him around the waist.
“Asher, don’t!”
Asher struggled against Michael’s grip.
Thank goodness for Marine muscles.
Michael grabbed him tighter.
“Let me KILL. HIM!”
“No! Do you want his blood on your head?”
“He touched Jayden! He hurt him! Michael, let me go. LET. ME. KILL. HIM.” Asher snarled. Michael held him tighter.
“No…Asher…no.”
Asher struggled. “Please…let…me…”
Michael shook his head. “…No.”
Asher struggled more. But after a few moments…his body went limp in Michael’s arms. He slid to the floor.
Michael crouched down beside him.
Wrapped his arms around Asher, his countryman, his friend. “It’s okay Asher…shh…”
August 24, 2022 at 4:02 pm #115864XDXD Verity’s about to go on a rampage as well….
Sorren WATCH YOUR BACK YOU HAVE INCURED THE WRATH OF PRETTY MUCH EVERYONE HERE!!!!
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