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August 24, 2022 at 1:16 pm #115813
Verity & Trevyn
“Hey, boys.”
Verity huffed. She wasn’t going to let anyone just push her off like that. She tossed a piece of hair behind her shoulder and was about to walk right up to this girl and let her know what she thought…
Trevyn grabbed her sleeve and yanked her to a stop. Corvina had him seriously scared. And not just the way normal people scared him. Verity couldn’t do this.
“Verity, wait, let’s – let’s just stay here, OK?”
She shook him off but he clutched her arm again in a vise like grip. But she was still stronger than Trevyn and broke free again.
She stared down Corvina with fire in her bright blue eyes. Then she saw something in the older girl’s eyes she didn’t understand….
“Are you okay?”
Payton
Payton was glad the attention was off him and on this black-haired girl with the swirling cloak and dark eyes. (IDK what color they are. Just a guess. Correct me if I’m wrong XD) HAd she been there this whole time?
He didn’t know.
He didn’t care.
And if she had been here, and had just been blending in with the shadows, that was a talent he wanted. Right now.
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August 24, 2022 at 1:25 pm #115816@freedomwriter76 do u wanna go?
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#ProtectSebAugust 24, 2022 at 1:25 pm #115817Also she has blue-grey eyes but they’re described as dark sometimes or grey-blue so ur good 😊
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#ProtectSebAugust 24, 2022 at 1:27 pm #115818Whew! It was a total stab in the dark XD😊😊😊
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August 24, 2022 at 1:31 pm #115819So I did find these pics for Corvina on my phone.
except a bit paler skin
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#ProtectSebAugust 24, 2022 at 1:31 pm #115820And here’s one for feel if that makes sense lol
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#ProtectSebAugust 24, 2022 at 1:34 pm #115822Oooooh! Interesting!!! I love her too! 🤗😊
(And yes the feel makes sense XD)
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August 24, 2022 at 1:50 pm #115824I just saw about Sorren “dominating” corvina
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *GASPS FOR AIR.* SORRY…SORRY….
*snorts…* sorry….I…I just….
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA…..
Yea. No. XD 🤣 she be like “Boi shut up.”
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#ProtectSebAugust 24, 2022 at 1:53 pm #115826Btw @freedomwriter76 u wanna go or u want me to go??
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#ProtectSebAugust 24, 2022 at 1:58 pm #115827@godlyfantasy12 LOL 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Sorren: Who do you think you’re telling to shut up!?!
The two of them….this could be….umm….well…..
*words fail me*
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August 24, 2022 at 2:00 pm #115828Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. @queen_of_alvastia. Sorry Y’all. I’m back. 😉
Jayden
The woman in black and dark eyes stepped out of the shadows.
Jayden’s eyes widened and he stepped back. Tapped Asher’s shoulder. “What?”
Asher turned.
Stopped right in his tracks.
“Hey, boys.”
Jayden glanced at his brother.
Asher blinked a few times.
Jayden turned his attention back to the girl. She had been hiding in the shadows, obviously trying to not get discovered.
Maybe she wanted to just be alone.
Or maybe…being alone made her feel safer.
Jayden smiled faintly. It was forced, but maybe the smile could make her feel a little welcome.
He knew what it was like to feel safer being alone.
“I’m Jayden.” He took one, small step forward, “Don’t worry, we won’t hurt you.”
August 24, 2022 at 2:03 pm #115829Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Jayden’s being brave now! 😉 @godlyfantasy12. Poor Payton! Can I join y’all in your tissue fort? *sobs* and @queen_of_alvastia, if Sorren doesn’t stop Asher will slam him into the wall. Or, better yet, Michael. He can have a temper. XD But if Sorren DARES to touch Jayden, ohhhh….Sorren will be done for. XD Also, girl, you saw the moodboards? THEY ARE SO SAD!!! *sobs forever*
August 24, 2022 at 2:09 pm #115830@freedomwriter76 Yay Jayden!! I’m sorry, Payton!! I didn’t know this would happen when I put you here!! Okay….I am so tempted to let Sorren keep going then…. XD Sorry in advance if anything happens to Jayden! JAYDEN I’D NEVER HURT YOU ON PURPOSE!!!
Aaah! The moodboards…. my poor heart…..😭😭😥😪😢
*hands you a tissue box and carefully extricates another one from the wall for myself*
Yeah, we’re at the point of just using whole boxes not just one tissue…
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August 24, 2022 at 2:13 pm #115831Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@koshka. @elishavet-pidyon. @godlyfantasy12. @keilah-h.
Eva
“If one of you men goes up first, Vulkasin can lift the sleepers up to you.”
Eva bit her lip.
Vulkasin had jumped up there with so, so much ease.
And now Viktor was suggesting one of the men go first so they could lift Franz and Naja?
Dear Lord, don’t let anyone get hurt.
“I’ll go.” Eva blinked. Everyone glanced at Riker.
He began loosening Naja’s grip from around his neck. “I’ll go first. And Vulkasin can lift Naja or Franz up, whoever he wants to send first.”
He got Naja to let go.
He seemed so kind…so compassionate…he even begged his father, who had slapped him not just once, but twice, to stay alive.
“Eva, can you hold Naja for me?”
She blinked again.
“What? Oh…Of…of course.” Eva carefully, tenderly, took Naja, still sleeping, from Riker’s arms.
She stirred but didn’t wake.
Riker smiled and kissed Naja’s cheek.
Then rolled up the sleeves on his uniform and walked over to Viktor and Vulkasin, asking how they wanted to get it done.
Eva rocked Naja in her arms, bouncing on her heels.
Riker was nothing like the SS officers she’d seen in propaganda films. Nothing like the ones she’d heard about that worked in the Concentration Camps.
He actually…cared. And unlike his own father, he…loved his child.
With a kind of love Eva had never seen.
From any father.
Eva smiled and held Naja closer.
Sent up a prayer to the heavens for Riker.
God knew the man needed it.
August 24, 2022 at 2:17 pm #115832Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. Sorren might need to watch out for Asher then. NO ONE MESSES WITH HIS LITTLE BROTHER! 😤
IKR!? THEY ARE SO SAD!!!!! 😭😢🥺😫
*takes the box and grabs a huge handful of tissues* OUR POOR BABIES!!! 😭😭😭
I NEED A WHOLE BOX! THANK YOU! 🤧🤧🤧
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