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August 23, 2022 at 5:41 pm #115744
Oh also yall Corvina is like 16 would Trevyn and Verity be younger then that?
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#ProtectSebAugust 23, 2022 at 5:53 pm #115746@freedomwriter76 JAYDEN! AAAAWWW!!! I’M IN TEARS AGAIN!!
@godlyfantasy12 Glad Corvina could join. Wow this is quite the group…Payton
Payton glanced up at Leon then back at the floor.
Why did Sorren have to bring up his father in front of all these people.
“Ummm, I’m fine.”
Why did Sorren have to ruin this? Already Payton could feel himself retreating inwardly like he hadn’t done since he and Leon talked earlier. He hated that feeling but he couldn’t help it.
Sorren
Sorren considered rolling his eyes but didn’t.
“Alright then. Now just lower your weapon, buddy.” His voice dripped with sarcasm. All these people were so clearly below him, but he wasn’t about to get himself killed.
He wasn’t a fool.
Bide your time.
You’ll get even yet.
“And tell that little traitor he’s better watch his back. Oh and speaking of watching backs, you might want to turn around. There’s another person behind you. A girl. She wasn’t with you earlier was she?”
Verity
“Verity, wait.” Someone’s hand on her arm. She wanted to whirl and yell,
“No way! He is too a dirty bully and a leach.” Payton had just increased her vocabulary on that one.
But she didn’t. Because she saw who it was. The man she’d wanted to rush over to earlier. Jayden. She looked at Michael’s gun. Then back at Jayden.
Don’t yell. Don’t scare him. Remember how Trevyn’s always saying you can kind of startle people on accident if they don’t know you and know how crazy you are?
“I guess your friend has it all under control. And if I got choked, Trevyn would die of grief probably. And he wouldn’t have anyone else to talk to.” She lowered her voice,
“He’s really, REALLY scared of people. He’s gotten better though. I think.”
Then she smiled.
“Thanks for not letting me get my head chopped off.”
Trevyn
Trevyn heard Sorren’s words and whirled around. No one was going to sneak up behind his back.
Oh no.
Another person.
A girl.
She’s looking at me…
Verity? Where are you when I need you? Stop talking to him and get over here!!!
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August 23, 2022 at 5:54 pm #115747@freedomwriter76 AAAWW!!! I LOVE JAYDEN’S RESPONSE!!
Thanks Jayden for not letting my sweet impulsive spitfire end up in the hands of a treacherous villain!!
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August 23, 2022 at 6:26 pm #115748Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Yeah, we got cartful’s of tissues. XD
August 23, 2022 at 6:29 pm #115749Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. Jayden says you’re welcome! 😉
Jayden
“Thanks for not letting me get my head chopped off.”
Jayden smiled faintly. She was such a cute little kid. Feisty, but adorable. “You’re welcome. And yeah, I think Michael’s got this.” He glanced at Michael, who was giving Sorren a death glare.
“Don’t accuse a man of being a traitor unless you can provide proof.” Asher said with a smirk. “That’s just common sense.” (Haha, I love him. XD)
Sorren glared at Asher.
Jayden bit his lip. Asher needed to be careful. They all did. This man he just…he seemed…unpredictable.
He heard something.
Jayden turned, and saw a young woman’s face peeking out from behind the shadows. But just as quickly as it had appeared, it disappeared.
He shook his head.
Hold yourself together, Jayden. Now you’re just seeing things. Don’t go mad.
Michael took another step towards Sorren. “Surrender, Sorren. You’re way outnumbered and surrounded.”
August 23, 2022 at 7:36 pm #115752@freedomwriter76 @queen_of_alvastia
Corvina
They’d seen her!
Curses!
Stupid man, had to go and point her out!
She ducked her head back into the shadows, but not before catching eyes with a young boy. He was shaking like a leaf, his eyes, which she noticed were two different colors, were wide with anxiety. She couldn’t help but smirk to herself at that.
She supposed she did bring a bit of a…dark presence wherever she went. The black cape and dress didn’t help, much less her pale skin and ebony hair. And the way shadows seemed to follow her as she walked.
Still, the quick image of the brown-haired boy’s terrified expression stuck to her mind and her smirk quickly faded as his face slowly began to morph.
Began to…to change….
Into someone younger…
Someone she couldn’t quite make out yet….at the same time….she could almost feel every feature of his face.
Her heart nearly beat out of her chest and her legs grew weak as darkness clawed at the edge of her eyes.
No. No….
S-Stop…
Stop!
The blurry face had started to become more prominent in her mind’s eye, until it was almost too much for her to bear. She wanted to rip the image from her skull. To tear it to pieces with her bare hands.
She bit back a scream, her throat dry, and clawed at her scalp, struggling against the sudden onslaught of pain in her own head.
Tears streamed down her face and she hated them. Oh…how she despised them.
Please…Please stop…I don’t want to see…I-I can’t-
“Shhh…..” A whisper filled her ears and rattled through head as she slumped against the wall, the image fading into oblivion once more. Once again being buried into her subconscious.
Locked inside of the dark castle she called her own mind. In a room she never dared to enter-lest she never escape.
Her own mind seemed to speak to her as she leaned her head back against the wall. The voice sighed, “Memories are a painful thing…aren’t they?”
Corvina sucked in a shaky breath, biting the inside of her cheek till it bled. Until the memory, the image…
The face, was entirely gone from her memory.
And then she wiped her eyes and straightened, preparing herself to be discovered.
Once again her feelings went into that castle room. Into that box that she locked away, deep down inside.
Never to come out.
She didn’t have time for them.
Didn’t have need of them.
And she never would.
She let out her breath and squared her shoulders, looking as though nothing had happened.
The voice in her mind ticked, “Ha…I suppose there’s no rest for the weary, is there my dear?”
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#ProtectSebAugust 23, 2022 at 7:50 pm #115754Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Noooooooooooooo….poor Corvina! *sobs*😭😭😭 Why do I feel like Jayden would be so nice to her and they’d actually get along? 😅 (maybe because she’s an antagonist, not a villain. 😂)
August 23, 2022 at 8:10 pm #115755@freedomwriter76 😊 he’d have to get past her sarcasm heh…she’s pretty pessimistic and distrusting cuz of everything she’s been through (which is funny cuz her personality type has a strong point of being optimistic)….
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#ProtectSebAugust 23, 2022 at 8:11 pm #115756@freedomwriter76 @queen_of_alvastia also yall can have the group meet her now since she’s kinda been discovered by Sorren and Trevyn (and she was sorta seen by Jayden)
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#ProtectSebAugust 23, 2022 at 8:12 pm #115757maybe they’re like COME OUTTA THERE XD idk I have a feeling she’d be like
ya whatever 😒 BOOM *epic entrance* 🤣 JK JK but she would be like “Whatever… stupid guy for pointing me out….”
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#ProtectSebAugust 23, 2022 at 8:19 pm #115758@elishavet-pidyon heeey u on?
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#ProtectSebAugust 23, 2022 at 8:29 pm #115759Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Well, funny you should say that, because, though he hasn’t shown it yet, Jayden is sarcastic. XD Haha, Jayden didn’t mean to point her out. XD
August 23, 2022 at 8:32 pm #115760Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Oh, what personality type does she have, btw? 🤔
August 23, 2022 at 9:04 pm #115763@freedomwriter76 She’s an
Turbulent ISTP
also u wanna RP? Or @queen_of_alvastia
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#ProtectSebAugust 23, 2022 at 10:07 pm #115766OH ALSO @freedomwriter76 she’s talking about Sorren when she’s speaking of the man who pointed her out lol
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