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May 3, 2022 at 7:58 pm #110299
@denali-christianson WE MISS UR CHARRIE BTW XD
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#ProtectSebMay 3, 2022 at 7:59 pm #110300It’s been a few scenes 🤣
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#ProtectSebMay 3, 2022 at 8:10 pm #110303@denali-christianson @godlyfantasy12
Definitely! I’m still waiting to see how the courtyard scene continues.
- This reply was modified 2 years, 6 months ago by Koshka. Reason: Goof?
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Fork the GorkMay 3, 2022 at 8:34 pm #110306Meet Zoe. She is a submissive, traumatized, extremely shy young girl with major trust issues but who latches onto strong people and was cursed to be a werewolf by a sorcerer along with two boys (I forget their names, atm) around the age of 14, and as a result has glowing purple eyes. She cannot control when she switches, and cannot resist the phases of the moon; she avoids speaking as much as she can; if given an order, she obeys because since being cursed, she has always been punished when she disobeys an order, so it’s kind of a knee jerk reaction for her, now.
She was stolen from her bed and imprisoned by the sorcerer, cursed, and forced to do what he wanted, namely terrorize her village and family and friends without being able to stop. If she resisted, very bad things happened.
Poor girl.(She’s from an old project I stopped because my parents definitely would’ve been shocked if they found me writing about magic, and werewolf replicas, and such traumatized people at 12. 😅)
I’ll get around to doing a part with her soon. (These dishes ain’t gonna do themselves, you know.)
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May 3, 2022 at 8:37 pm #110307*A soft moan drifts from the court yard*
Kilied, where are you? We neeeeed you! 😉
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You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
May 3, 2022 at 9:01 pm #110309@koshka, btw u can go on and write another scene. U can write a longer scene if u want. Or we can write back and forth if you have time
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#ProtectSebMay 3, 2022 at 9:02 pm #110310@emilysf POOR ZOE!!! Yikes!! Sounds like she’s had it rough!! Tho some of my charries have too soooooo lol
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#ProtectSebMay 3, 2022 at 9:12 pm #110311I have time!
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Fork the GorkMay 3, 2022 at 9:14 pm #110312Ok course, at this point I have no idea what to write…so you have any?
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkMay 3, 2022 at 9:20 pm #110313@koshka ROFL I feel that.
HERRRMMM.
OK @denali-christianson whenever u come back
yall….someone needs to introduce a villain eventually….because at some point we’re all gonna find each other and…then what??
Also @denali-christianson can u tell us kinda a few things they do on story embers? I went and looked but…they’ve kinda escalated to a place I’m not comfortable with so….maybe just like what they did when u started or whatever XD
but yea.
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#ProtectSebMay 3, 2022 at 9:22 pm #110314So, I have an antagonist but…I call her an antagonist and not a villain. Because I’m the very end of the series she is redeemed but yes she is the “bad girl” and not sure if she could hold a whole like plan for everyone on her own, but she might could “team up” (not that she works well with others 🤣) with another villain while at the Charrie castle
but I feel like I make too many posts 🤣 and have too many charries 🤣
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#ProtectSebMay 3, 2022 at 9:28 pm #110315I too feel that I have spoken much on this thread. However, I concur: we need a villain.
My “villains” are a high ranking prince (official, not son of a king) and a couple vague ideas concerning generational curses, addictions, fears, and the father of lies.
I doubt any of the latter would work, but maybe the first may in a pinch. He sure does need some work.
If someone else has one that may be better.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
May 3, 2022 at 9:29 pm #110316I have a villian, a horrible villian who was literally inspired from a history book, but he may not be a good, ah, antagonist for this castle, as I know practically nothing of his character besides the stone and ice shell he has apparently become. No, he can never be redeemed. In fact I believe he is executed in the end for war crimes.
We do need a villian though. Does anyone have a fun one?
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Fork the GorkMay 3, 2022 at 9:40 pm #110317Oh….mine is definitely fun….😏
Althought she definitely has those moments where she goes mad and ur like “OH U POOR TORMENTED THING” and then she goes back to her sarcastic little pessimistic self.
I just dunno if she can hold over a huge plot against everyone on her own. See her role in the books is mainly she works for the bigger evil (The Dark One, Eder,) and her goal is to destroy Ara and the Destined, pretty much do Eder’s bidding. So she may or may not be able to kill Ara yet according to the timeline cuz it may not be in Eder’s plan yet, if that makes sense.
But she could DEFINITEKY be fun….and if we add in Elishavet’s villain I think we might have something…we can see! What ya think? Let’s try it!!
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#ProtectSebMay 3, 2022 at 9:47 pm #110318SO, meet…Corvina. My dear sarcastic girl. She is 16, has Raven black hair, blue-grey eyes, wears black, (btw all my female characters wear skirts and dresses XD) and a black cape. Also, she’s a Shifter. A human with the ability to transform into an animal.
she can transform into a Raven.
She also has some limited shadow abilities, but they’re not Genetic, they’re given to her from her master, Eder, and it’s not finite in my mind yet soooo XD.
She’s sarcastic, pessimistic, distrusting, rebellious and harbors a deep anger for Eder, life and herself. She’s been through a lot and has a tortured past, mostly one memory that tortures her and she tries to lock it away (she always talk to herself a lot, so she’ll often sometimes talk aloud to herself when she’s alone. Almost like she’s schizophrenic or something, but in person she seems perfectly fine.
ISN’T SHE GREAT?! XD.
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