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@freedomwriter76 this little girl makes me want my Paxton 😭 but I can’t add him cuz the timeline isn’t right….
SOB….
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Payton
“Let’s just go down then, since that’s the way we were already going.”
This sounded like good common sense to Payton. Also, he became so excited about what they were doing and dashed off down the open hallway. Then he skidded to a halt, and cocked his head, glancing at Leon.
“Did you hear that sound?”
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@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76 soooo I actually dunno what to RP rn lol…anyone wanna go?
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Leon
Payton dashed down the hallway.
Leon chuckled to himself. So excited.
It was good. Payton seemed happier…already. Somehow. Someway. Payton skidded to a halt. Cocked his head. And glanced at Leon.
“Did you hear that sound?”
Leon paused, waiting, listening.
“No. What sound?” Leon asked quietly.
Was someone else in the castle?
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@elishavet-pidyon. @godlyfantasy12. @koshka. @keilah-h. Alright, so…I know our poor Characters need some sleep first, but when they separate, I know we have Eva, Zlatan, Crosshair, and Nyx. And also, Riker, November, and Viktor. But other groups…I have no clue. XD
I kinda want Naja and Riker to get separated and I kinda want Naja to be with Ezra. 😉 Doesn’t have to happen, but I thought It’d be fun. She would remind Ezra of his little sister, Jane, and Naja would get to the point where she trusts Ezra and begins to be her normal, silly self around him. 😀 Imagine if Ezra was the only guy around. XD Ooh, how would Vulkasin react being around Franz? *thinks*(who I suppose will get better by morning and then everyone gets separated and stuff) Just throwing out random ideas from my crazy head. XDXDXD
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@queen_of_alvastia. Hey girl! Would you mind if I decided to add a few other charries? They’re all (except 1) fairly new and all need some development. Just wanted your opinion before I threw three more guys into the mix. XD
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All my characters are guys except for two so far, huh? XD
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Yep, those three characters sound good! It’s gonna be awkward though when Crosshair tells Eva she reminds him of Feather (his wife)……they don’t look similar but I kind of feel like they’d get along.
Crosshair
Riker’s father snapped some particularly harsh words…..and slapped his son in the face.
Utter chaos ensued. November, Nyx, the soldier-looking one called Zlatan. Such a weird name.
He kept his gun raised, ready to stun Riker’s dad. Jocelyn protested he might hit Nyx, but he ignored her.
Fortunately, the aggressive man was knocked out fairly quickly. Crosshair lowered his rifle, seeing that the fight was over.
Riker crouched beside his father’s still form, begging him to stay alive. The one called Mikkel inspected him, ensuring nothing was serious.
Then Crosshair heard a whimper from one of the doors. Eva gasped, walking over to the door the sound was emanating from. Riker’s head shot up. “Naja?”
The source of the sound, a young girl around five years old, stepped into the light. “Naja!” Riker shouted as she ran over to him.
She was his daughter?
Crosshair was struck at the difference between Riker’s relationships with his father and with Naja. He’d never known his father. But he knew how he’d treat his own son….he knew who he’d be more like.
Even at his cruelest, he would never have injured his own flesh and blood.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
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@keilah-h. Great Response! I love Crosshair. 😉 That’ll be interesting when he tells Eva that. XD Also, I like how Crosshair noticed the difference between how Franz is and how Riker is. Riker made a conscious choice to not be his father, and I’m glad someone noticed how different he is. 🙂
@freedomwriter76 That’s so funny b/c I was about to ask you the same thing – hence Payton’s question. The more the merrier! I’m considering putting the main antagonist of my WIP in…so I can 1) get a rise out of Payton and 2) I want to make sure he’s not the “stereotypical villain” if you know what I mean.
I have one other person to throw into this crazy mix. She’s going to be my MC for my allegory. (I came up with both her and the idea at 5AM this morning so really sure how it’ll work out….🙄) And if I have time she has a friend (another 5AM creation) I might put in as well….
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Should I put their info here before I continue with Payton’s perspective?
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@queen_of_alvastia. That is funny! 🤣🤣🤣 Of course you can add them! 😁 Like you said, the more the merrier!
Hey, some 5AM creations work out really well! 😜
If you could, please put their information, just so I can know some stuff. 😉 (I’m gonna put the info for mine in, too. 😊)
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@queen_of_alvastia. Okay…here we go…😜 (still all 3 are from WWII books. The same book, actually)
First off, we got Michael Adam O’Regan. (don’t judge any names. He’s Irish. 🤣 American, but Irish)
He’s 19 years old, kind, patriotic, courageous, fiery (it’s the Irish, lol), generous, sarcastic at times, protective of those he loves, brotherly, and can make almost anyone laugh.
He’s a Private First Class in the Marines. This is a pic of what he looks like. 😉
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@queen_of_alvastia. Next up, we have Navy Officer Asher Graham Carter. 😀
He’s 25 years old, patriotic, brave, loving, caring, honest, faithful, forgiving, protective, and devoted.
He’s a Captain in the Navy. 😉
Here’s a pic of what he looks like:
Also, he’s a strong Christian, very prayerful, and shares the Gospel basically every day, both talking about it and showing it through actions and his daily life. He keeps a Bible on his person every moment of every day. 🙂
Oh, I didn’t mention that for Michael. Currently, he’s an Agnostic. (but don’t worry. Both he and Jayden, the 3rd character, come to Christ in the book. *wink*)
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