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August 19, 2022 at 3:08 pm #115503
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Eeeek! *Shrieks*
Honestly, I don’t know what Viktor would do if he and Franz get “acquainted”. Probably get himself in trouble, I mean, he’s only fourteen, y’all. (But don’t tell him that. He thinks he’s a year younger.)
Oh, and the way November’s getting teased makes me want to add in Alwin, probably around the time he’s in the Squirey. I’m not sure why, except that he’s REALLY good friends with a lass named Winifrith. And when it comes to abuse, neglect, and regrets… His childhood was ugly, y’all. Ugly.
Although, at that point, because of the King, his chains are broken and he’s healed. So, you might not guess what he came from.
Was that a tad long? No, of course not
But about splitting characters!!!
Any suggestions? I think Riker and November should get together, and Viktor and Alyona should get separated. She kinda hides behind him (okay, pun intended.) Ocran us somewhere around, as well as Corvina, although they haven’t joined forces. (Or tried to kill each other.)
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
August 19, 2022 at 3:11 pm #115504I agree. They need a little nap.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
August 19, 2022 at 3:13 pm #115505@elishavet-pidyon BAHAHAHA THE WAY YOU PUT THE OR TRIED TO KILL EACH OTBER CRACKED ME UP cuz that is legiiiiiit I feel they would totally be like that.
Cuz Corvina would get totally fed up with his pompous attitude and be like
“Bruh….”
XD I luv her.
and he’d be like “HOW DARE YOU XD”
OOH OOH!!! Viktor should be with November! Idk I just think it would be fun! Their pretty much the same age, and I like having November interact with other boys cuz he gets teased XD (I’m a weirdo. Lol)
but ya. I think it would be fun.
Lyn and Nyx def get seperated cuz that’s hilariouuuuus.
YALL….can you imagine Lyn and Crosshair……
Oh. My. gosh…..
Arabella and Alyona would probably just travel in silence so….that might not be the best option 🤣
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#ProtectSebAugust 19, 2022 at 3:14 pm #115506I think I’m okay now. The writer’s block was mostly situational (we had a family funeral, and I’ve been a little numb).
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Fork the GorkAugust 19, 2022 at 3:15 pm #115507@koshka hey when we split up will u start back again? If so…I’m thinking it would be hilarious if Nyx ends up with Zlatan…..
XD…..
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#ProtectSebAugust 19, 2022 at 3:15 pm #115508@koshka OH NO! I’m so sorry!
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#ProtectSebAugust 19, 2022 at 3:17 pm #115509@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan totally needs to get separated from his brother, and maybe Vulkasin needs it too.
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Fork the GorkAugust 19, 2022 at 3:19 pm #115510It’s okay. Thank you.
Aha! Definitely! Nyx stuck with black haired Zlatan…XD
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Fork the GorkAugust 19, 2022 at 3:22 pm #115511Exactly!!! XD
Viktor and November should totally get together. It would take a bit to make Viktor comfortable enough to tease November. Which would also be great. They really have a lot in common. Viktor hates fights, but he’d punch someone without thinking of it was to protect someone he loves.
Ah, Nyx. Yes. He must learn to introduce himself. XD
That would be hilarious.
Alyona talks a lot more when she’s warmed up, but yeah, she’s a bit in her head.
Maybe Nyx, Alyona, and Eva? Just throwing out random suggestions. XD I don’t care if that’s not what happens! 🙂
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
August 19, 2022 at 3:24 pm #115512Yes!! Nyx and Zlatan. Lol!
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
August 19, 2022 at 3:32 pm #115513@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76 yea I think we’ll finalize it once we get to that point. But for sure Viktor, November and Riker, and Zlatan, Nyx and maybe Eva?
thats 2 groups.
Anyone wanna RP?
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#ProtectSebAugust 19, 2022 at 3:36 pm #115514@freedomwriter76
And this is quite random, but I just realized the twins have a Russian accent (it’s their mother tongue). Would any of your characters recognize it?
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Fork the GorkAugust 19, 2022 at 3:46 pm #115517@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Mikkel
Someone was coming. Mikkel switched off the safety, his mind switching with it.
A sword drew beside him, another in behind, one pistol was out.
Rikker hadn’t drawn his weapon, though his fingers wrapped around it, knuckles white.
Strange.
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Fork the GorkAugust 19, 2022 at 3:52 pm #115518@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Viktor
They were once again inside – or if not, close enough. The walls hardly let any starlight down here.
Someone else was near by. Friend? Foe? Viktor didn’t know and couldn’t guess.
He loosened his sword, the gastly thing, in it’s sheath, ready to draw. If only he knew how to use it. If only he could learn.
Suddenly, he felt very weary.
Alyona snatched a torch from the wall and held it aloft. The light danced around them, surrounding them in flame washed stone. Viktor grimaced and looked away. Not that there was an ‘away’. His head pounded.
November had taken up a stance between the maids and the doorway the sound came from. Viktor joined him and took a couple stones from his script.
“Do you know who it is?” He hissed to Riker and November.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
August 19, 2022 at 4:09 pm #115521Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@koshka. Riker might. OH! And Ezra would, as he met Russian POW’s in the POW camp! Ezra most definitely would. 😀
@elishavet-pidyon. @godlyfantasy12. I think it would be good for Eva and Ezra to separate for a little while. Eva could totally get almost anyone to talk. She’s good at things like that. 😉 Viktor, November, and Riker…sounds good to me! Sounds like it’d be a lot of fun, too. XDAnywho! Guess I better get Franz in here now. XD @koshka. @godlyfantasy12. @keilah-h. @elishavet-pidyon.
Franz
Yes, there had been voices. But they were quiet now.
There had been footsteps, but those had stopped.
What, were they waiting for him?
Was he falling into a trap?
“Like I care.” He mumbled to himself, his words slurring together.
What did he have left to live for, anyhow?
He was alone. He supposed he could live for the end of the war. But who knew when that would be?
Otherwise, he had nothing left to live for.
Riker
“Do you know who it is?” Viktor hissed.
Riker didn’t turn, but he saw out of the corner of his eye that Viktor had out a weapon. As did Mikkel, Ezra, and Zlatan and Vulkasin.
Please, please let me be wrong, Riker thought. “I might now. But I’m not certain.”
“Then why haven’t you pulled out your weapon yet?” Ezra hissed, as Eva clutched his arm, tight.
Riker kept his fingers wrapped around his pistol but didn’t pull it out.
The footsteps continued to come closer.
And closer.
Until the figure came into the light of the hallway.
Oh no.
No.
No.
No.
Riker knew it, but he had hoped…oh…how he hoped…that he had actually been wrong.
“Who. Are. All. Of. You!? And where in the world am I!? Did you-”
“Don’t do anything you’ll regret.” Riker interrupted, stepping forward, finally letting go of his pistol.
Franz raised an eyebrow. “Riker. What. Happened!?”
“I don’t know. Calm down. You don’t want to do something you’ll regret later.”
Franz scoffed. “Which one of you are responsible for this!?” He yelled at the others, lashing out.
Riker saw November step back and flinch. Riker took another step, placing himself in between Franz and November. “Father…please…calm down.”
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