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August 18, 2022 at 5:07 pm #115459Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. @elishavet-pidyon. @koshka. @keilah-h. Okay, he’s on his own, but I’ma gonna go on ahead and start up Franz. Be ready, y’all! *shudders*
Franz
Where. Was. He!?
He slowly sat up. His head hurt. Ah, just a hangover.
He’d been through worse.
Pfft, he’d survived the Somme.
Franz looked around. Narrowed his eyes. Wherever he was, it vaguely looked like a dark, damp castle.
Hmm…maybe it was a dark, damp castle. But how had he gotten inside?
He stood. Cursed. Now how was he supposed to speak with Hans Friday night over drinks?
This had to be a dream.
Or a nightmare.
Or…something.
Franz paused.
Did he hear…voices?
August 18, 2022 at 5:09 pm #115460Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Am I the only one that found that Corvina POV so intriguing? That was sooo good!
August 18, 2022 at 5:23 pm #115462@freedomwriter76
YESSSS SOMEONE ASKED NOVEMBER TO OBSESS OVER ARABELLA!!! *me sitting in a corner with my #Aravember merch on. Everyone stares at me* What? XD
November
”And what about you and your friends?”
November smiled, looking ahead. He spotted Jocelyn first, chatting away with two people-Eva and Ezra (They should start chatting!!!) Nyx was awake, curled around Lyn’s neck, his head facing the couple. His ears still drooped, but November could tell he was on alert.
“Well, we met Jocelyn and Nyx a couple months back. It’s a…bit of a long story…” He blanched at the memories of that adventure and then shook his head. It wasn’t his place to tell everything anyway, not that he’d want to.
”Lyn, Er, Jocelyn’s really fun. She’s a bit…umm…” He scratched back of his neck, “Over the top?” He shrugged and chuckled, glancing at Riker. “But she’s pretty great. We’ve all become really good friends with her. She’s a lot of fun to be around.”
Nyx twitched, turning his head to face November. He huffed in their direction, his eyes narrowing.
He’d heard them talking about Lyn.
November pursed his lips and waved awkwardly.
“You better say good things about me.” The fox said haughtily, lifting his head. He then shot November another piercing glare, “And don’t be spilling everything.”
Nyx turned back away, curling into his sleeping position. Lyn, having heard him, looked back at November and shook her head with a laugh, letting him know he didn’t have to worry.
”And…ah…that’s Nyx. He’s Lyn’s best friend. I…umm…maybe just steer clear of him until he trusts you….” November offered an awkward smile at Riker, who raised a brow before glancing at the fox, who was once again glaring at the man.
The group turned a corner, November almost losing his footing but catching himself.
They walked on for a few seconds before Riker spoke up.
”And her?” He nodded his head.
November looked up. His face flushed and he felt his heart swell as he stared at the brown-haired girl in front of him.
His eyes never wavered from her.
“Oh. A-Arabella.” A small smile sprouted on his lips as he watched her laugh at something someone said.
“She’s…she’s my best friend.”
UGH THAT LAST PART WAS SO CUTE!! I thought it was perfect because while November could’ve said sooo many things, I think his simple silence and small reply said more then anything! He had these big replies for Lyn and Nyx and then this just small little endearing gaze and reply for Ara that makes my heart crumble into a million pieces ❤️
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#ProtectSebAugust 18, 2022 at 5:24 pm #115463@freedomwriter76 THANK YOU!! Corvina is sooo fun when I get to write her talking to herself!
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#ProtectSebAugust 18, 2022 at 6:42 pm #115464Anyone on?
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#ProtectSebAugust 18, 2022 at 7:42 pm #115465Absolutely! By the way, where were we? It’s been a while…
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good on, eh?
-The DoctorAugust 18, 2022 at 10:03 pm #115466@freedomwriter76 I on?
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#ProtectSebAugust 19, 2022 at 8:42 am #115467Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. You’re so welcome! 😀 THAT WAS SO CUTE! November&Arabella are sooo cute together! 😍
Riker
“She’s…she’s my best friend.”
November’s face was flushed, and he sported a small smile.
Riker nodded. “I see.” He was certain it was so much more than that. He was a married man, after all.
He smiled faintly. “Are you and Arabella very close, then?” (haha, Riker’s getting to the bottom of this one, lol)
Eva
“So…that little fox, is he your pet?” Eva asked.
Jocelyn turned to face her.
Eva smiled. She continued to walk on, as she felt Ezra’s protective arm wrapped around her shoulders.
Ezra chuckled and looked at Nyx. “He’s kinda cute.”
August 19, 2022 at 8:48 am #115468Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Haha, I think Ezra is going to make Nyx angry. XD
August 19, 2022 at 8:56 am #115469Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Y’know, this has really developed Eva, Ezra, and Riker. This is such a great writing tool! 😉
August 19, 2022 at 11:20 am #115470@freedomwriter76 You’re welcome!! 🤗🥰🥰
I love the broken characters so much! Their stories….AAAH!! 😢😭😪 Hmmmm, I can’t decide which one
makes me cry moreI mean, I like more…WHY did I not see that!?! Sorry for the somewhat obvious question XD Thank you!! I’ll get that started!
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August 19, 2022 at 11:27 am #115471Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. I love the broken characters too. 😭🥰 They always have such depth to them. 😊
Haha, I get that. You don’t have to decide between the two! You can love ’em both! 😉
You’re Good! 😀 No girl, you’re fine! 😊 You’re Welcome! Glad I could help! Okay, can’t wait! 😜
(also, whenever you want, we can resume Leon and Payton. I don’t remember who’s turn it was tho. 😂)
August 19, 2022 at 11:42 am #115472@freedomwriter76 I know! And you love them even while they proceed to break your heart and make you cry buckets of tears 😭🥰
😊😊😊
Good! Okay, I’m just getting it set up… This is making me so happy 🙂
👍🏻🙂 I went back and checked and I think it’s Leon’s turn now. (pg 54)
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August 19, 2022 at 12:23 pm #115475Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. Yep! 😭
Leon ended with: “Let’s get started. And let’s find our families.” It’s actually Payton’s turn! 😊 (it’s okay if you didn’t see it. I look over things all the time on this topic, lol.)
August 19, 2022 at 12:38 pm #115479@freedomwriter76
“Payton!?! Why didn’t you tell me you were supposed to be going next? I guess being stuck inside a creepy old castle has affected your memory….Now go and find a way out!!”
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