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August 18, 2022 at 4:25 pm #115442
@elishavet-pidyon bruh Lyn would also have a grand time scaling to a tower window XD November…probs not cuz he be like “I’m gon fall…it’s gonna happen XD”
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November
November had latched onto one of his hobbies. “You write? Ara likes to read,” He smiled to himself, imagining all the times he’d watched her become entrance in the book she was reading. The way her eyes lit up whenever she reached an exciting part, or when she laughed to herself, forgetting she wasn’t alone.
He frowned, remembering he too wasn’t alone, but when he glanced at Riker, he noticed the man was lost to himself as well.
His hand had absently trailed to the side of his face where a thin scar ran along his cheek.
November’s eyes widened and, before he could stop himself the awkward words rolled out of his mouth.
”Oh! I’m not the only one in the scar club!”
Riker flinched, seemingly pulled from his thoughts and panic flooded November.
That was dumb….
WHO SAYS THAT?!
Stupid. Stupid. Stupid!
He mentally slapped himself as Riker raised a single brow. November clambered nervously for a reply to his abrupt and seemingly heartless statement.
”I-I-I mean…I ah…this-“ He chuckled anxiously, pointing at the left side of his face, where three jagged talon marks ran across, once over his eye, but only touching the skin-thank the Light One.
Imagine how much more clumsy he’d be if he were half blind….
”And…ah…ya know…that guy up there..” He waved ahead at Crosshair, whispering in the hopes Crosshair didn’t turn around.
He chuckled again, even more awkwardly and then tugged at his curls, his face red with embarrassment.
”Heh…sorry…sometimes, I ah…don’t think before I speak.”
Another thing his dad hadn’t lied about….
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#ProtectSebAugust 18, 2022 at 4:26 pm #115443My awkward little bean 🤣 he’s a mess XD
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Fork the GorkAugust 18, 2022 at 4:31 pm #115446@freedomwriter76 IS ONE OF THEM RIKER’S FATHER?! I can’t remember lol
if so….bruh talk about giving PTSD to both our bois XD
i have a feeling tho that Ara be like OH NO U DON’T
cuz u see in book 1 she doesn’t stand up for November and regrets it, so now she’s grown just a bit more (not fully but yea)
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#ProtectSebAugust 18, 2022 at 4:35 pm #115447November’s wonderful, hilarious mess. XD
True! Viktor would be relieved someone else shares his affinity for climbing.
As for the Scar Club… 😏 That’s soooo hilarious. I may have a few characters that would fit there. Maybe a couple.
Just they’re caused by “normal” causes, like a home city burning down. Etc. Etc. 😉
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You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
August 18, 2022 at 4:37 pm #115449@freedomwriter76
Like, before Franz changes, or after? 🧐
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
August 18, 2022 at 4:41 pm #115450@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Vulkasin
Please have a window, a ledge, something bigger than an archers loop! Well, maybe it it was tall enough… But he’d never get his shoulders through one of those. No way. Neyht. Nol.
Victor smiled. “Yes, there’s a window.”
Joy! “How high?”
“About ten feet.”
“Ah.” Vulkasin’s heart sank. What was the point of such a small climb? “Is here a higher v’indow?”
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Fork the GorkAugust 18, 2022 at 4:42 pm #115451Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@koshka. What? 🤣
@elishavet-pidyon. Oh, yes, Ezra would have so much fun! Eva…she’d just cling to him and be panicked, lol. Riker…he’d help November. (because he’s nice like that.)
@godlyfantasy12. Ah, yes, but he’s your wonderful mess, right? 😂Riker
“Heh…sorry…sometimes, I ah…don’t think before I speak.”
Riker smiled. “It…it’s okay, November. Really.”
Riker glanced at the three scars November had pointed at on his face, but quickly looked away, knowing that was rude. You didn’t stare at people.
It was impolite.
“I’m glad your friend likes to read. It’s fun and a good…a good skill.”
November’s face was still red.
Riker took in a deep breath. Oh…how was he supposed to help November and stop thinking about his father?
“It’s okay, November, really. It’s fine. I’m not…I’m not hurt at all.”
He only hoped November didn’t ask where his scar was from.
August 18, 2022 at 4:48 pm #115452Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Hehe…Franz is Riker’s dad. 😅😖 And pfft, girl, my poor baby boy deals with his PTSD every day! 😭
@elishavet-pidyon. Mwahahahahaha, before.August 18, 2022 at 4:50 pm #115453@freedomwriter76
November
“It’s okay, November, really. It’s fine. I’m not…I’m not hurt at all.”
Riker smiled, though November could tell he didn’t really want to talk about it. November nodded, thankful he hadn’t messed up too badly.
The conversation stifled for a moment, until November glanced back at Riker’s wedding ring, which the man was fumbling with.
“So you said you have kids? What are they like? And you have a sister? I’m an only child, though I always wondered what it’d be like to have a sibling….”
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#ProtectSebAugust 18, 2022 at 4:51 pm #115454Y’all….
writing that last line just broke me because….
IYKYK 😭
@freedomwriter76 you read the spoiler chat….YOU KNOOOOOW….. SOB
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#ProtectSebAugust 18, 2022 at 4:52 pm #115455@freedomwriter76 oof! But that would honestly be interesting too to see how he’d react if Franz also ended up freaking out November. Like…would Riker end up kinda confront him if he started bullying some of the younger kids? Or would he still be too afraid of his father (I wouldn’t blame him btw!)
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#ProtectSebAugust 18, 2022 at 4:53 pm #115456Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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So…without further ado, I’M ADDING HIM! (simply because I want to develop him, get inside his head, and add some CONFLICT!) 😅
So, I introduce you all (except two of y’all. Two of y’all know him already…) to Franz George Schind.
He has gray hair and coal-colored eyes, pale skin, and is 55 years old. He’s German and a WWI veteran. He’s rude, ill-mannered, cruel, loud, unloving, uncaring, selfish, and…since all character’s need at least ONE good quality…fine…he’s hard-working, OH, and honest. But other than that, just a bad person. 😤
August 18, 2022 at 5:01 pm #115457Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. AHH! GIRL! NOOO!!!! (it took me a sec to remember what you were talking about, lol, but I got it now. Just took me a sec, lol.) It will be interesting! And, though Riker is scared of his father, he’s also EXTREMELY protective. If Franz starts bullying them, esp. November, Riker is going to step in, no matter how his father reacts. And that’s my brave boy. 👌 I’m so proud! 😭
Riker
“So you said you have kids? What are they like? And you have a sister? I’m an only child, though I always wondered what it’d be like to have a sibling….”
Riker smiled as he thought about them. Jonathan. Naja. Eli. Lily. The fifth child on the way that didn’t yet have a name decided. And Angelina, his wonderful, always loving sister who he would protect with his life. He even thought about Iris, his wife.
“They’re wonderful. In every way. And yes, I have a sister. Angelina.” Oh, it hurt to think about them. But at the same time…it was also wonderful, too. “She’s wonderful in every way too. I don’t know what I’d do without any of them…” he trailed off.
“And what about you and your friends?” he asked with a smile.
August 18, 2022 at 5:06 pm #115458@freedomwriter76 YIKES….XD
OH BTW…it’s a been a hot minute yall since I’ve done a CORVINA POV!!!!
SO WITHOUT FURTHER ADO HERE IS MY SASSY GURLLLL!
Corvina
She’d been searching this castle in Raven form for a while now. Still nothing.
The girl, Zoe, had been gone for hours. She could still hear her cries in the back of her head, but she ignored them.
This was better. Alone was always better.
Then again….having someone who could sniff out prey would’ve been useful…
Corvina groaned as she shifted into her human form. Her ebony hair fell over her shoulders as she leaned against a wall.
At this rate, she’d never find her the princess, or her friends. This was getting to be quite bothersome.
But then again, what else was she going to do? She couldn’t exactly return home empty handed.
She huffed in annoyance.
“Ollie Ollie oxen free.” She called, her own voice echoing through the corridors. She obviously received no answer, but it was nice to hear something other then stone cold silence.
“Besides, we’re used to talking to ourself, aren’t we.” Her mind spoke.
“Ha. If you could call it ‘talking,’ then yea.”
“Well, what would you call it?”
Corvina went quiet.
”Mmhm, that’s what I thought.”
”Whatever,” Corvina whispered, flinging her black cape behind her as she continued on down another endless hallway.
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