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August 12, 2022 at 4:01 pm #115149
Payton
Payton reached back and grabbed another dagger from his belt.
“I’m sorry too. About your family, I mean.” He turned his gaze from Leon to the open passage behind them, the door was still swinging on its hinges. He took a deep breath. “I guess we better get started then.”
He took a brief pause to try and make out where they were. It seemed like a corridor of sorts, though it was hard to discern anything for certain. He stepped forward, dagger at the ready. Then he faced his companion again.
“Going home? Are you sure we even have a home to go to anymore?”
He waved his hand to the space around him, though the effect was somewhat dampened by the knowledge that he wasn’t sure if what he was gesturing to.
“Look at this! Have you ever seen a more desolate place? And where are you from, anyway? I’ve never seen anyone dressed like that before in Alvastia. Not from the North either. Or Elton.” He continued, in his reverie, forgetting to check if Leon was following his thoughts.
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August 12, 2022 at 4:04 pm #115150Is it Payton or Paxton? Asking because I have a Charrie named Paxton too, and if I somehow get the chance to introduce him I’m wondering how I’d keep it from being confusing lol
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#ProtectSebAugust 12, 2022 at 4:06 pm #115151It’s Payton 😊
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August 12, 2022 at 4:12 pm #115152Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Leon
“I’m from…Germany. And thank you. For my…family, I mean. And the knife. I haven’t seen a more desolate place, but…there has to be some way to get home…”
Leon whispered.
He had to remain optimistic. He had to stay hopeful.
If not for himself, then for his family…wherever they were and whenever he found them.
He glanced around, then back at Payton. “Why don’t we get started looking for an exit then? Besides, we’ll never know if we can get home unless we try.” he gave Payton a small smile.
August 12, 2022 at 4:14 pm #115153Awww! I love Leon!! 😊😊 Poor guy!!
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August 12, 2022 at 4:23 pm #115155Germany? Where in the world was that?
Oh well. Geography had never exactly been his strong point. And it wasn’t to the point at all right now. Payton stared at Leon in something akin to wonder. Whoever this man was, he had courage to say the least. He managed a smile in return.
“You’re welcome. I’m sorry….I – I didn’t mean it like that…I think this place is starting to affect me. If there is an exit, I think we could find it if we work together.”
He forced a confidence into his voice that deep down, he knew he didn’t feel.
“And if there’s an exit, then maybe, we can find the people we’re both looking for.”
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August 12, 2022 at 4:26 pm #115156Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. Aww, thank you! I love him too. But I’m biased, so. 😜
Leon
“And if there’s an exit, then maybe, we can find the people we’re both looking for.”
Leon nodded. “Exactly.”
He gave Payton a smile and small nudge, walking forward. “Now come on, let’s go.”
Leon began to walk, side by side with Payton. “…Your little brother…you want to protect him I’m guessing? Sorry if I sound ignorant. I was…an only child.”
August 12, 2022 at 4:36 pm #115157You’re welcome!!
“…Your little brother…you want to protect him I’m guessing? Sorry if I sound ignorant. I was…an only child.”
Payton shook his head, remembering the little boy that usually tagged at his heels like a puppy.
“Quinn? He drives me crazy sometimes, I can’t deny that. I guess there are benefits to being an only child.” He heaved a sigh, “But right now, I’d do pretty much anything to keep him safe. I know it’s dangerous here, but I would rather he was here too. As long as I could see him and know he wasn’t in trouble. If anything happened to him….I don’t think I could ever have forgiven myself…” He paused a minute, his voice trailing off.
“But you said you had a family? I’d like to hear about them….if you don’t mind talking about them?”
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August 12, 2022 at 5:36 pm #115159@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Ok, I’m currently writing this off the phone so forgive any mishaps in spelling, grammar, etc.
Crosshair
“Yeah, so long as you promise not to hurt anyone. So what’s your name?” asked one of the men.
Why would I try to attack you if I’m vastly outnumbered? Crosshair thought. Granted, I could kill all of you with a single well-positioned laser, but I have no reason to….yet.
The little fox was still hissing at him. Its owner picked it up and tried to soothe it.
“My official designation is Commander CT-9904. But you can call me Crosshair. I was given that name due to my….efficient marksmanship. ” he explained, pointing to the small tattoo shaped like his namesake ringing his right eye. “What are your names, and where do you come from?”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
August 13, 2022 at 9:25 pm #115205@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h anyone on?
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#ProtectSebAugust 13, 2022 at 9:32 pm #115206@godlyfantasy12 me, but only for a few minutes.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
August 14, 2022 at 7:16 pm #115209@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
I’m sorry y’all. For some reason I can’t seem to get anything written and sent in. Don’t wait for me if you can help it. I’ll try to jump back in as soon as possible.
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Fork the GorkAugust 14, 2022 at 9:06 pm #115210@koshka writer’s block? Or actual glitch on the site?
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#ProtectSebAugust 14, 2022 at 9:48 pm #115212I suppose it’s a form of writer’s block. Some things are making it difficult for me to get into character right now, without which words just won’t come.
Ugh. I’m sorry.
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Fork the GorkAugust 14, 2022 at 9:53 pm #115214@koshka that is very sad as I must say I luv the twins
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