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October 17, 2024 at 4:45 pm #187806
Granny Gallia
“Why?” Her voice was sweet, and her face was gentle, trying to tell Ruth it’s okay, she can be trusted.
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#AnduthForever (Lord Willing)October 18, 2024 at 9:29 am #187814Princess Ruth
“It started back when he still lived with me and my parents… He is moved out now though… But he was obsessed with magic, he never had any powers… But he did know how to create potions. One day while he was at his academy learning to become a general, I went into his room. I saw all of his many gadgets and potions, so I took one to use… and ever since he moved out I took most of his potions without him realizing…” Ruth had never told anyone this, her parents didn’t know, and her brother was never home to check. “He has never found out because I always put them back when I hear that he is coming home…” Ruth went silent again.
"The more you practice the art of thankfulness, the more you have to be thankful for.”
October 18, 2024 at 10:21 am #187818Granny Gallia
“I see, well… I hope you know what you are doing is wrong.”
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#AnduthForever (Lord Willing)October 18, 2024 at 11:33 pm #187835Princess Ruth
Ruth held back tears, “I know, I’m sorry, I wanted to prove to myself that I was strong… Everyone always acts as if I am a 6 year old… I just want to prove that I can’t fight back to…” Ruth couldn’t hold it anymore, she began to cry.
“As soon as I get home ill give them back, all of them…” She slowly floated down to the ground, and when her feet touched she stood there with her face in her hands.
Then one of the black vines came in through the door again and grabbed GG and Ruth pulling them down the dark hall.
"The more you practice the art of thankfulness, the more you have to be thankful for.”
October 20, 2024 at 10:18 am #187947???
I walked down the halls of this castle, I was forced away. But I want revenge on the little girl… As I walked I found these great doors, I went inside and saw a duck headed man sitting on a throne, “Where am I?! WHY AM I HERE?!” I began to think,
“Ḩ̵̨̤̱̯̜͉̱̘̯̰̥̔̃̉̀̎͂ͅͅȩ̶̞̦̱̻̯̭̫̎͌ͅļ̸͕̬̬͙͉̤̚͠p̴̧͙̣͎͍͚͓̘̠̫͓̲̽̈͒̑̀̐̌̈̾̈́͊̚” I called out to him, but it was distorted, he would not understand,
I bowed to him, “Lord of this castle, I feel your cold energy flowing from you…. I I….I̶̧͉̘̠͖̩͚͋̇̉́ ̷̬͈͔͎̟̦̲̻̜̞͍͓͊͑́͘͝N̴̹͇͕̑̉͋̀̍͌͘͘͠Ȩ̸̡̛̱̮̱̬̠͚͉̞̱͐̿͂̅͌̕Ȇ̵̯̗̙̫̩̒̎͛̈́̌̎̈́͌́̈̕͝ͅD̸͎̥̘͚̤͖̓ ̷̨̲͓̳̯̩͙̣̲̙̬̦͓̘̌͋̈́̊͋͒̍̓͜͠H̶̹̥̖̣̰̰̲̙̗̗̩͛̇̎͐͒́̓̓ͅȨ̸̧̻̪̤̳̩̻̺̠͛̏͜ͅL̷̛̪̯̟͎͙͑͒̔͌͆͘͝͠ͅP̶̱͍͝, I wish to be your most loyal servant.” Ǐ̸̢̛̫̿̐̈́ ̶̡̟̏͗N̷̬̘̐̎͝Ê̵̞̗̼̙͉͑͆̈́͒́Ĕ̴̦̹͉̹̏̒̿D̶̳̼͕͙̾̏̓͘ ̸̤͋̃͝Ṫ̷͍̗͎͙̎̓̃̚Ȯ̸̢̭͉̳̯̀͜ ̶̮̦̺̂̏́́̕͜͝F̴̛̩̥͎̔́̌͒̕Ị̸̢̛̝̬̺̦̄͘G̴̨̔͘H̴̡̺͔̮̔T̶͈̊ ̴̤̖̃̄͗̔I̶̛̘̿̈̌T
“I am fine I don’t need help” I told to my self. I waited for him to allow me to rise.
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"The more you practice the art of thankfulness, the more you have to be thankful for.”
October 20, 2024 at 3:03 pm #187954Lord Quakers and Johnny
Johnny and LQ looked at each other, LQ nodded.
“You are welcomed into the service of the lord. The lord shall heal you.”
LQ stood up and lifted his hands out in front of him. Dark clouds came out of hands and went around the servant, lifting off the ground. Lightning shocked the stranger. The stranger yelled in pain, while Johnny smiled a horrendous smile. After the spell was done the stranger fell to the ground, still concuss.
“Kneel, stranger, and tell us your name.”
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#AnduthForever (Lord Willing)October 20, 2024 at 3:58 pm #187961???
I bowed on my knees this time, “Thank you lord, I feel even stronger. and as of my name its-( I̴̛͎̰̳̎͑̔ͅ ̴͓̎͛͘͝N̶͉̖̈̕É̷̼͋Ē̵̱̩͔̗̌̓D̵̤̅͑ ̶̛̱̜͚͌̈́T̸͕͗̌͝O̶̳̔̐́ ̵̜̤̬̞̊̾̕F̴̫̏͊I̷̢̖͚̠͒̿͘G̷͓̜̀͜H̸̦͔̔̊̍͊T̵̹͑̈́͘ ̸͕̬͇̩͆I̴͔͌͑ͅT) It is Fern, all though no one calls me that.” At least I haven’t been called that ever since we used to hang out, now everyone calls me a freak or a monster… But I chose to look like this, I chose to be … powerful…… “How can I be of…S̷̟̫͂̕͠T̸͚̭̤͘͠O̴̼̲̠͋P̶̮̯̏ ̸̱̼̠̍͝T̷͍̭͗̑͜H̷̪̔͌́Ĭ̶̙̭Ṡ̶̛̭͇̅.. Service…”
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October 20, 2024 at 8:57 pm #187972Lord Quakers and Johnny
LQ and Johnny looked at each other again, the spell should’ve healed him completely from most things, except those of the spirit.
“Tell us, Fern, what powers do you have that may be of some use?”
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#AnduthForever (Lord Willing)October 20, 2024 at 10:19 pm #187979Fern
I looked up at them once again, “I, I have these vines growing out of me… I don’t remember why… But I can control them… I also was gifted strength, and speed…” I was talking for awhile when I realized I should probably tell my weaknesses.
“My only two debility’s are my eye sight and… fire…GAH-” I remembered that girl… that horrid thing of a child, and the pain she brought me. “Forgive me Lord, but I met this girl and elderly woman, the girl plagued me with a flame to the side. I touched my side where the vines were growing out. “With your permission lord… may I… bring them before you, and… N̵͈̍͌̓̏Ọ̴̣̫͛ ̶̨͉̰̌̑N̴̢͈͎͋͒̿͜Ö̸͈́̚ ̷̡̗͒̊͂N̶͎̻͚̏Ȍ̸̻͝.̶̛̥͓̑̌̾.̴͕̃̋͋.̵̰̳͎̑̍ ̸̨̻͉̲̒I̶̖̚ ̸͍̀̐͝C̶̪͒̆̎͒Ḁ̴͓̎͠N̴͍̹͒̓̆̓T̸̺̘̲̪̑̊̕ ̸͒͜D̷̡͖̻̊Ȏ̴̮̩́ ̸̘̎̽̊̈T̵͚̗̊̓͘H̴̳̃A̸̱̞͔͋̾̕T̶̘̮̩̣̂,̴͔͆͂̏̃ ̶͚̯̪͖̀̈́T̸͔̙́H̶̬̊̽̐͜E̴̛̪̖̞͑̍̇Y̶͎̖̔̀̚̕ ̵̡̲̘͔͝W̷̠͈̞̋̎̕E̴̖̓R̴͔̈E̷͇̖͗͌ ̶̫͆̈́͌̓D̴̈́ͅẺ̸̥͈̫͘̕F̴̗̝̪̺̂Ê̵̫̟̖̌̆͜Ņ̷̡̛̹̂́͝D̶̞̟̈́͆͝I̸͇̊͛͌̈́N̴̦͂̇G̴̳̮̲͆̿́ ̵̛̥̀͘T̸͚̱̋͗̒͒H̵̢̞͓̊́E̶̫̺͛̓M̴̥̂͘̚͝S̷̟͂E̶̲͙̺̒Ḷ̶͖̈́͜V̶̎̿́ͅĖ̶̝̠̣̯̃̅͘S̷̡͔͙̺͊̚.̸̪͇̲͔̀͘͝.̴̲̙͊̓.̷̙̫̕” I started to hyperventilate… I began to panic… I stood there again… fighting for control.
"The more you practice the art of thankfulness, the more you have to be thankful for.”
October 22, 2024 at 8:50 am #188054You there?
"The more you practice the art of thankfulness, the more you have to be thankful for.”
October 22, 2024 at 8:57 am #188055Oh, shoot, I forgot, sorry.
Lord Quackers and Johnny
They looked at each other. “Yes, bring them in to see the lord.”
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#AnduthForever (Lord Willing)October 22, 2024 at 10:24 am #188075Oh, shoot, I forgot, sorry.
Its ok, I was just wondering why you were responding to some other people but left me ghosted!Fern and Ruth
I rushed through the castle looking for them, I found them again in the same room. The girl was crying for some reason. “Did I do that?” I thought. “Maybe I should.. NO! That GIRL she harmed me, I will bring her to the Lord!” I slipped my vines through the open door and grated onto the girl and the women. I dragged them down the dark halls back to the throne room, I held them up for the Lord to see. “You again?! Of course you would create a monster like this!” The girl yelled. “I-I-I am n-not a monster… I- I need he- H̴̦̤͚̄͒̔̒Ẽ̵̡̟Ḽ̵̮̬̟͗́̽P̷͍̻̩̻̋̋!!!! NO I AM FINE ITS FINE” I yelled at the girl. She retold in fear and clamped her mouth shut. I held the woman and the girl for Lord Quakers to see. “What should I do with them?” I asked the Lord.
"The more you practice the art of thankfulness, the more you have to be thankful for.”
October 22, 2024 at 10:45 am #188076Lord Quakers, Johnny, and Granny Gallia
Johnny looked at Ruth, “We did not create him, but he is rather wonderful, would you agree.” Johnny smiled, “Well, since you harmed the newest servant in this castle, you shall be thrown into the dungeon, for… how long?” Johnny looked at LQ. LQ held up two fingers. “Two days. Maybe, after being in there for that amount of time, you will learn to behave. As for the madam,” He looked at GG, “You don’t seem to be a threat, she is free to go.” Fern let go of GG. “Go put the girl into the dungeon, then return for your next task.”
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#AnduthForever (Lord Willing)October 22, 2024 at 12:22 pm #188098Ruth and Fern
Ruth looked at GG, in shock. “I thought you knew them… I thought you were… enemies… Was that all a lie?” Fern used his vines to carry Ruth down into the dungeons and threw her in a cell. He then grabbed her bag of potions. “Please! Why are you doing this? Ruth asked. Fern turned and stared at her. “I-I-I am t-tying T̵̹͍̪͗́̕ȏ̷̧̮͎̙̈ ̵̲͈̖̔̆̇d̸͈͇̲̑̈́̿o̵̢̨̤͖͗͊̏ ̵̨̭̠̟̃̑́̓ṁ̶͙y̶͙̗̱̰̓̔̑-̸̧͚̥̘͒́͛m̷̻͇̞͗ÿ̶̜̩͇̞́̐̉͆ ̵̞̹́͒̓͊ͅb̸̝͋̈͜ę̸̠͎̆̓s̷̠̭̈t̵̹̱̻̩̓̍̆!̴̡͚̻͍̽ ̸̧̝͔̔́͌̄I̴͎͘ ̴̭̈̚c̴̮̝̦̍͒̌ă̷̱̏͘n̶̨͍̠͌̄̇̕͜’̸̨͇͙̒̌t̷̩̂̔ ̸̡͐̾c̶͔̄̿̌͝o̶̪͉͗́̾͊ṇ̴̱͕̽͂t̸͚̎͊r̴̖̊̊̑o̷͙͒̍̚l̸͙̪͎͋̈́ ̸̫͈̩̫͘̕i̶̱̻̤̱͂t̴̢̙̝̾!̶̺̊̃̾!!” Ruth almost screams, “W-whats happening?! What are you saying?!” Ruth yells.
Fern looks at her again “I am sorry…” He goes back up to LQ and hands him the potion bag, and bows again.
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October 22, 2024 at 2:50 pm #188108LQ, Johnny, GG, Patrick, and Starfish
Suddenly, Patrick and Starfish burst through the doors. “Raugh!”
Johnny looked at GG, “You, are Granny Gallia?!? Seize her!!!” All the knights in the room rush toward GG.
Jit, who is on GG’s shoulder, hops down. GG speaks boldly in another language, holding her hand out to Jit. Jit suddenly grows to an enormous size, almost as large as an elephant. Jit starts stomping on the knights. LQ raises his hand as if he is about to cast a spell. But before he can finish, he gets whacked with Jit’s large, furry tail. LQ is now knocked down, with a crack in his tank.
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