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October 9, 2024 at 9:09 am #187096
(see the previous page first) Here’s some backstory for Ruth:
Ruth is the daughter to the King of Kaimor (my story), King Emanuel. She is only 12 and has great manners. She tries to live up to everyones expectations but sometimes fails to do so. She tries to act older than she is but everyone treats her as if she’s a 5 year old! Can you believe it? She hates when people don’t treat her as her age, she usually gets annoyed easily when that happens. The only thing that’s really magical about her is that she likes to stea- *cough cough* I mean borrow her older brothers potions, she always has a few on hand.
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October 9, 2024 at 11:27 am #187114Hi I just added a couple new characters on the last page and the page before, if you still want someone to meet your character. Do you have a description for Izre?
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October 9, 2024 at 11:36 am #187118Sure! The description is a few pages back. I’ll see if I can find the page number.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 9, 2024 at 11:37 am #187119It’s near the bottom of page 449
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 9, 2024 at 11:41 am #187123Hello! Your character seems cute! If you want, I have a couple characters up in one of the tower rooms that she could meet.
We kinda have a different than usual format for role plays here. We write as we normally would if we were writing our books. That might look different for different people, but typically it’s past tense/ third person. We also put the character’s name in bold at the top.
Here’s an example:
Craig the Conqueror
Craig stomped down the castle hall, dragging his giant battle axe behind him.
“Hello!?” He called out. “Stop hiding! There has to be someone in this castle.”
(@everyonereading this is not a real rp, plz don’t respond to it)
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October 9, 2024 at 12:10 pm #187130Watson
Winnifred had decided that this was a dream, and so she had finally felt comfortable leaving the room in the tower which they had first found themselves in. Watson, whose dreams mainly consisted of memories him chasing birds and mice in his past lives, very much doubted Win’s theory. He kept this to himself, though.
They descended the tower’s spiral staircase, and came to a torch lit hall.
“Oh, look!” Winnifred said suddenly. “A medieval gargoyle! It’s very big. What’s it doing inside?”
Watson’s fur stood on end when he saw what she was talking about. He crouched and muttered, “Don’t go near it, Win.”
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October 9, 2024 at 12:28 pm #187136Got it! And nice to meet you!
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October 9, 2024 at 1:21 pm #187149Izre
Izre continued on her way, becoming more and more irritated as hall after hall contained no one to question or vent her annoyance on.
Finally, as she turned a corner, she saw a staircase at the end of the next hall. She froze as she heard the sound of someone descending it.
It was a girl, who was wearing a strange pair of circles on her face. Izre had seen many odd changes in fashion during her many awakenings, but this seemed a little ridiculous.
There was also a small animal traveling with the girl. Izre couldn’t recall the name of the creature off hand, but it was definitely one of the furry sorts.
Izre started towards them. “You!” she said. “How did you come to this place? Where are we?”
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 9, 2024 at 2:54 pm #187154Princess Ruth
Ruth went in to the main hall looking for anyone. “Hello?!” Ruth called out again. She was beginning to panic because she wasn’t sure what to do, this castle was her only chance on finding someone who could help her get home. “Please is anyone there?!” Ruths calls out again, but there is no response.
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October 9, 2024 at 3:01 pm #187156Princess Ruth
A little while later Ruth finds stairs spiraling up, Ruth decides to go up to see if she can find anyone, and to see if there could be a spare bed for her. When she reaches the first door leading to the next floor she sees a long hallway with many doors. Ruth begins to walk down the hall looking for any sign of life. She heads into one of the rooms… she finds no one. She walks over to the bed and falls down on it and begins crying, Ruths happy that no ones there to see her cry…She hates when people see her cry, But is she alone?
(if anyone could introduce there character to Ruth that would be greatly appreciated by myself, I really need someone to meet Ruth)
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October 10, 2024 at 12:10 am #187220Winnifred
Win stifled a scream with her hand and stumbled back a few paces as the statue moved towards her and started speaking. Watson spooked and darted behind her legs.
After a moment of shock, she took her hand off her mouth.
“I- I don’t know. Just appeared… Wha- Who are you?”
Watson’s tail brushed against her leg.
“Do you hear crying?” he whispered.
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October 10, 2024 at 9:45 am #187261Princess Ruth
Ruth eventually ran out if tears to cry, she decided this was not how her mother would act. She straightened up and was going to leave the room, but then she heard a voice.
Winnifred
“Do you hear crying?” the voice whispered.
Princess Ruth
Ruth couldn’t make out what the whispering was saying, but she didn’t like. Ruth ran to where the closet was and jumped inside and shut the door. She opened up a crack so she could she thought. Then she saw Winnifred enter the room.
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October 10, 2024 at 10:20 am #187263My name is Ruth…so imagine my confusion when I see someone talking about a Princess Ruth in this RP. XD
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#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)October 10, 2024 at 10:24 am #187264Really??? that’s Super funny!
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October 10, 2024 at 10:29 am #187265Yes, really. My name is Ruth A Eisele, hence my username RAE because RAE are my initials.
Now I’m gonna get mixed up whenever you talk about your charrie XD. Sorry in advance.
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