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January 28, 2024 at 4:01 pm #174640
@rae @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009
Ariac
Ariac levelled his sword threateningly at the stranger.
“I’m going to make this very simple for you,” he said. “You will promise not to hurt any of us here. …Or I can kill you right now.”
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Ariac is bluffing of course, since he can’t deliberately kill.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksJanuary 28, 2024 at 4:26 pm #174641@freedomwriter76
Nope, Lilitu’s not in here.
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Nae
Despite her innocent looks and questions about the meanings of words was a Nae that seemed too rarely to come through. She could sense Riker’s fear, sense the commanding, rude presence of his father, sense the quiet, scared nature of the girl in the corner. She stared up at Riker’s father, with her head still leaning on Riker’s leg.
“You are one of the most impolite people I’ve ever met! And how do you know you have better sword play than that fellow or me? I haven’t even heard one good word of greeting from you. Can’t you be nice enough to at the very least grasp wrists with Riker?” She spoke as if all this were a picnic. Though only Riker knew that she held onto him tighter
Grasping wrists or forearms is a sign of some kind of relationship idn Realn culture.
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January 28, 2024 at 6:50 pm #174653@rae Nae’s little rant was so cute lol
@freedomwriter76 hey I’m good with you pulling your charries from the group. Mine are just standing around right now.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 28, 2024 at 7:42 pm #174667@lightoverdarkness6 @thearcaneaxiom
Okay! Here we go
ZYRIN
He had absolutely no idea what was happening. One moment, he and Dylan had been walking through the halls, then the next, the voices had revealed a group of insane people with weapons! Of the three of the newcomers, the woman seemed the most hostile, currently binding Dylan with a ragged rope. She sent a glaring look up at Zyrin, and he stepped back.
The red haired man beside her, was talking nonsense, and the other member of their group stood sullenly with his arm in a sling holding a menacing sword. Zyrin immediately assumed they were Surfacers like him, as they were using none Essence weapons. But the he realized that, like Dylan, they didn’t have any Essence period. So… maybe Dylan wasn’t Dim. Was Zyrin the strange one in this situation? The thought made him sweat more than before as his nerves and confusion increased.
The woman–Nam apparently?–pulled Dylan to his feet, his hands still tied. Yet his friend seemed more chagrined than panicked. Zyrin wished he could have some of the man’s cool. What the blazing souls are we gonna do?
PHERVIN
“Handle the other one.” Namal said, nodding her head to the young man standing stock still in the hall. The poor chap looked terrified, though this wasn’t an uncommon reaction to Namal. But at least he hadn’t had to deal with Nam in the early mornings. Phervin was lucky to still be alive after several such encounters.
“Dearest partner of mine, if you go around tying up everyone we meet in this place, I’m afraid we’ll run out of rope terribly fast.” He pointed out.
“I didn’t tie up Whatever His Name Is.” She responds.
“You mean Mister Pokey Pokey?” Phervin glanced at the man in question. “Well he can’t do much anyway. No offense to you my friend.” He added, nodding towards Pokey.
As Phervin approached the glow-y chested Day Drinker, the boy held out his hands. “I won’t make trouble, there’s no reason to bind me.” He said, then his gaze darted towards the one Nam was dealing with. “And you can untie Dylan, he won’t do anything.” He seemed to be sending the man a message with his eyes.
“Yeah, that would be nice. I vote for that idea.” Said the one Day Drinker had called Dylan.
Phervin glanced at Nam. “I think they’re safe enough, can we keep them, please?”
“Well I’m not inclined to trust anyone in this strange ‘alternate realm’ place. But… they do appear to be harmless civilians.” She looked Dylan up and down. “Mostly.”
“I believe when he says he doesn’t know where Miss Prickly is, he means it.” Phervin said, tone serious for once. “Though we definitely need to keep a close eye out for that one.”
He shuddered, thinking of Namal trapped by those spears of darkness.
NAMAL
She stared at Phervin a moment, then nodded. Namal looked at her captive. “Okay, I am going to release you now, but know that I will be keeping my gun on hand.” She said, patting her Shot Iron in its holster.
“An entirely inferior weapon, as I’m sure Irvan here agrees.” Phervin said, gesturing to the broken armed swordsman. He seemed to wince at the mention of his own name, but his face smoothed over almost immediately. Namal’s eyes narrowed.
She glanced at her partner. You still haven’t given up the sword thing?”
“Nope!” He responded cheerily. “Nor will I, ever.”
Namal sighed. “I’ll stay with… Pokey and the Dylan guy. You watch the other one.” She said. “Sorry to inconvenience you all, but I’d rather not let anyone out of my sight before I know what exactly is going on, and who won’t attack us.”
The group eyed her with a mix of intimidation and curiosity. Well, except for Phervin of course, who grinned and slapped his hands together. “Well then, shall we resume the search for some anuni pie? You all will love it, I promise. There is nothing better, and more worth endeavoring both risky and perilous situations for.”
“I hope you mean our search for a way out of this castle.” She emphasized.
“And miss the chance to share with our friends the gloriousness of this dessert? Never.”
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 28, 2024 at 9:50 pm #174674HI EVERYONE!!!
Soooooo ummmm
If someone would catch me upppp
What would yall think of me throwing just November back into the chaos???? @freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings @whoeverelseisonthisRPcuzidk XD
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 28, 2024 at 10:03 pm #174676I would gladly do that buuut I also took a few months break a while ago and got a bit lost with my old RPs, but I’d love to maybe resurrect one or create a new one with November!!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 28, 2024 at 10:12 pm #174678@princesachronicle22 yaaay! I think he’d be cool joining dylan and them maybe later? Plus it would be interesting XD. He’d def be kinda freaked out XD
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 28, 2024 at 11:23 pm #174691XD yeah! I think November and Zyrin would get along!
He’s my sweet little boy that accidently brings about lots of destruction and has to live with it and the guilt nearly crushes him its soooo sad 😭
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 29, 2024 at 8:48 am #174712Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 HIIIIIIIII
uhm, yes, I will fill you in the best I can so November can leap back in here! I have missed the babyyyyyyyyyy🧡
So, we have several groups going right now, LOL…I’ll try to write who’s in each group, who’s RPing in each group, and what’s going on in each group
#1: Crosshair, Feather, Paxton, Frida, Jennie, and Fin (Hans/Felix are about to split from them and form a group with Himmler): Kinda not doing anything at this moment; Riker left and left Paxton with Crosshair/Feather: Me and Keilah-H and you, technically LOL
#2: Tony Stark, Steve Rogers, Tauren, Lesli, Matthew, Jared, and Acheron: Not doing much at this moment, but about to get on the move and probably bring an unconscious Acheron with them: Me, Min, and Light
#3: Riker, Ariac, Nae, Sef, and Franz: Currently dealing with Franz’s unlikable attitude and meanness; Nae is trying to defend Riker, Ariac is threatening Franz with a sword, Riker is trying to stay calm, and Sef is cowering in the corner (poor girl😭): Me, Rae, Savannah_Grace2009 (Sara), and Jonas
#4: I’m not sure who’s all in it or what they’re doing, LOL, but whatever group ArcaneAxiom, Princesa, and Light are in is another group XD
#5: Marek, Eleanor, Isaiah, Leon, Jayson, and Rafael: Discussing how they’re all going to try to find a way out and they’re going to stick together, even though some people disagree: Me, Smiley (Miley), and Koshka
and I THINK that’s it???
Someone else pls add onto this if I forgot anything haha
January 29, 2024 at 8:53 am #174713Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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OH, wait, the group with Min and Light are about to start trying to find a light source of some kind bc the room they’re in is super dark…that’s what they’re doing XD
January 29, 2024 at 12:28 pm #174720Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@rae Ooh, I like that cultural reference! That’s super cool! @jonas @savannah_grace2009
Riker
“You are one of the most impolite people I’ve ever met! And how do you know you have better sword play than that fellow or me? I haven’t even heard one good word of greeting from you. Can’t you be nice enough to at the very least grasp wrists with Riker?” Nae retorted; she gripped Riker’s arm tighter.
Franz scoffed. “I’m not afraid of any of you here.”
January 29, 2024 at 3:02 pm #174747@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
We do have another one, I believe, with Adrian, Everton, Erich, and Esther. (My charries and Freedom’s) Speaking of, Freedom, was I supposed to go next in that group? 😅
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 29, 2024 at 5:08 pm #174772@freedomwriter76
Is Franz ticklish?
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January 29, 2024 at 11:20 pm #174798Sef
“I’m not afraid of any of you,” the man retorted.
I wish I could say the same, she sighed. She was tired of hiding. All she did was let fear run its course. But she was tired of fighting it. Tired of trying to be brave.
Tired of trying.
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