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January 22, 2024 at 4:33 pm #174022
@freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @rae
Oh, yeah, I forgot about this RP! Whose turn is next? I can’t remember the order.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksJanuary 22, 2024 at 6:16 pm #174043@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @rae
Looking back, it looks like Sara is up next, then me, then Rae. Correct?
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📚 Appreciator of BooksJanuary 22, 2024 at 6:57 pm #174044January 22, 2024 at 7:41 pm #174050Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@jonas Yep, you got it
It’s @savannah_grace2009’s turn next 😀
January 23, 2024 at 9:01 am #174068January 23, 2024 at 9:02 am #174069Guys….Sef isn’t really gonna say anything unless people talk to her because she’s on the verge of a panic attack…so that’s why my RP’s are kind of short XD
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333January 23, 2024 at 1:57 pm #174088Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@savannah_grace2009 Poor girl🥺
January 24, 2024 at 11:14 pm #174230@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6
Sorry I had to do Tony for a bit lol
Tauren and Lesli
Thunder cracks through the sky. Light curtains flow inwards from the windows, flaring with the growing wind. Tauren shivers against the nighttime breeze, rubbing his arms. Lesli flinches as a crack of thunder shakes the ground.
Still not used to the weather up here…
The room grows dark as the night falls, shadows stretching along the ground. Acheron remains sprawled on the ground.
“He’s going to wake up.” Lesli refrains from kicking his lifeless body, instead tapping the toe of her shoe against the cracked marble flooring. She looks up at Tony, seated on a velvet chair.
“Hm?” Tony looks up, tossing aside the curtain he had been polishing his suit with. Lesli looks down at the dark brown stain smeared against the fabric.
“He doesn’t seem to be too much of a threat to me—” Tony looks around at the others for agreement. “You guys go ahead and rest for the night. I’ll be on standby.”
“Umm—” Tauren partially raises his hand, before awkwardly bringing it down again. “Maybe we should move somewhere more lighted, in case of a fight. I don’t think we would want to deal with him where we can’t see.”
“You’re so smart.” Lesli smiles, uncrossing her arms.
Tauren ducks away expectantly, his cheeks burning red.
Ok so finding light is the new quest, they can end up wherever. Should they drag Acheron with them out of Pity (Freedom has illuded to maybe them not understanding what he is capable of? Sure would be humbling to bring him along out of pity then get absolutely decked lol, or they can leave him.)
Mathew hasn’t been doing a whole lot, Light do you want him to lead the search or find the room so you can write it? If you don’t want to make up the next locations thats ok!
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 26, 2024 at 8:53 am #174281Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings no prob, haha. I liked how you did Tony XD
@lightoverdarkness6 would you like to RP for our group next?January 26, 2024 at 8:10 pm #174356@Princesachronicle22 @Thearcaneaxiom So sorry this took so long!!
Dylan
Zyrin bumped into me as I stopped short. “Did you hear that?” I whispered.
His eyes widened and he nodded.
The two of us crept forward through the dimly lit hall, the voices growing louder as we approached. I quickly peeked around the corner and sized up our possible opponents, the darkness of the corridor to my advantage.
Two male. One female. All wielding a weapon of some kind.
I frowned.
And they all look to be somewhat threatening.
Turning back to my companion to report what I had seen, I promptly tripped over my shoe and the confounded sneaker made a small squeaking noise against the polished stone floor.
The voices immediately fell silent. I didn’t dare to breathe.
Then,“Come on Miss Prickly, just be patient! Let’s get some Anuni, indulge ourselves, and then we play hiding go seek.” one of the men said.
Anuni? What in the world-
I inhaled sharply as the woman began walking towards our hiding place…holding a gun.
Gritting my teeth, I sprang from the shadows to apprehend her before she reached us…but she—it, I now realized, was a fake, a hologram of some kind—disappeared instantly and I was left vulnerable, with no cover.
In a few moments I was pinned to the floor and nearly blinded by the flash of sudden light that filled the room.
I glared defiantly up at the woman, who stared back with slight surprise, which then hardened into a cold expression as she held a gun at my head.
“Who are you, and where did the woman go?” She demanded.
I forced myself not to tremble as the cold metal drew nearer to my forehead.
“Don’t shoot! What are you talking about?” What woman?”
“Talk.”
“Okay okay. I just found myself here a little while ago. I don’t know how, but I’m here. I ran into my friend there not long after.” I gestured in the direction of Zyrin. He stood a few feet away, his hands in the air, sweat visibly trickling down his cheeks.
“Why did you attack us?” The woman continued her interrogation.
I scoffed. “Why do you think? A woman walking toward me with a gun? I wasn’t just gonna stand there and let you shoot me.”
Seemingly satisfied for the present, she lifted me up and bound my hands in a scratchy rope that hung at her waist. I seethed quietly, silently vowing that she would regret this moment.
“All right, Mr. Mini Nam must be really thirsty. The lad clearly has been drinking nothing but Day’s water,” The one with the firy red hair proclaimed.
What? I glanced between Zyrin and the woman, Nam, I suppose. She gazed at Zyrin and his glowing chest with shock.
The man looked back and forth between the two of us, “well lads, what degree of jubilation do you feel when you hear the word ‘anuni’?
Zyrin and I shared a puzzled look, and I thought, just great, we’re in the hands of crazy people. This ought to be fun.
#HugRikerSquad
January 27, 2024 at 3:55 pm #174429@rae @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009
Ariac
That was it.
Coins vanished from his pocket as a sword materialized in his hand, pointing at the newcomer.
“You should choose your next words…very…carefully.”
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📚 Appreciator of BooksJanuary 27, 2024 at 6:01 pm #174460@freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @jonas
Nae
“You stupid girl. Did no one teach you manners?”
The girl in the shadows cowered. The guy behind Riker pulled out a sword.
“You should choose your next words…very…carefully.”
Riker stroked her hair. Nae played with a small gold ring on her finger, undisturbed as ever. She looked up at the irritated man in front of her, eyes wide and sparkling.
“Of course. I’m the daughter of an emperor, and a lord. My brother is an elite warrior, the other one is one of the greatest mechanic, electrician and inventor’s. My sister is a doctor, and my younger brother is going to be the cutest thing ever. My mom is the daughter of a lord, is a lady, and an empress. My father is a veteran of the Nanian, Sovereignty, and Grathmere wars,so is my mother. And my older brother is the son of Grathmere, and is helping bring to an end this Grathmere war. My father’s best friend is Master Dare, who saved the dragons from extinction. And my older brother has a close friend named Krogen who is a Fettian! I don’t know all that means, but Alpha says, I call him Alpha instead of Junior, because I think it sounds better. Don’t you? And his middle name is so grand, it’s Elqin. Doesn’t that sound grand? But Alpha says that being a fettian is something very big and important. He says Fettians aren’t from our Wondian Galaxy, and that they rule over a hundred galaxies., but not ours. And he says that they are the most technologically advanced civilization we know of…what does ‘civilization’ mean? I love Alpha, but he sometimes uses such big words and doesn’t explain what they mean. Oh, and my father is the friend of a more masters and lords, who come to visit sometimes, or we go to visit them. They’re all so famous, and Dad sometimes lets me show them how well I can shoot a gun, or how well I use a sword for my size. And how well I can pilot. They say I inherited my skills from my uncle, Dad, and grandfather, who I never met. They also say that I have some of the best manners they’ve ever seen in someone my age, and they call me ‘adorable’. What does adorable mean? I’ve never been called stupid before, though i’ve heard Alpha say that when he was angry, or Nar say it about Alpha when he hurt himself real bad and rejected her help because he didn’t want to get poked with a needle. The way you say it, it sounds really bad. I know a lot of manners, I have to because otherwise dad wouldn’t let me come to all special dinners and political meetings, whatever politics are. i just sit down and talk to the lord and Masters, ask them questions and stuff. They often ask me how long I practise shooting my gun.” Nar stopped and looked wide-eyed at Riker’s father. “You should meet them, their so kind that I bet they would gently make you learn manners.”
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I’m sorry if nae talked your ears off! XD, she got really rambling there!
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#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)January 28, 2024 at 3:43 pm #174637Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@rae My, Nae has a lot to say XD I love it 🩷😂 @jonas @savannah_grace2009
Riker
“You should meet them, their so kind that I bet they would gently make you learn manners.”
Franz scoffed at Nae and turned to face Ariac; his coal eyes darkened with fuming rage. “I’m not afraid of you….I have survived worse than a man like you-”
“Father, please, don’t make this worse…” Riker whispered, still stroking Nae’s soft locks.
Franz turned on his heel; he stepped closer to Riker to stand mere inches apart. “And you’d be wise to keep your mouth shut, boy. Or do you need me to close it for you?”
Ariac stepped forward; Sef disappeared further into the shadows.
and Riker didn’t dare move.
January 28, 2024 at 3:49 pm #174638January 28, 2024 at 3:51 pm #174639Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@savannah_grace2009 I just had a question…is Lilitu in this castle?
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