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December 11, 2023 at 4:29 pm #169164
I assume N’Nesha lives on some kind of asteroid, and that’s why she’s surprised at the horizon and the fact that there’s only one? (“Omia” is their species’ word for such planetoids, right?)
More or less. It’s not really an asteroid, but it is a field of planetoids. I’ve talked about Omialia many times before, but it’s essentially a field of closely clustered planetoids which on a global scale form a planet sized sphere with two suns that orbit it. So horizons aren’t unheard of, because you can go to the surface. The Verna and T’ashin are two such cultures that live closer to the surface, and Shal’le isn’t far from T’ash. However, it wouldn’t be a sight N’nesha has ever seen before, and even if she had, this is still quite different, because the Omialian horizon is visibly many tiny planetoids, vs this being one continuous thing. Omia and Omialia are actually Lasi’el words, but Lasi’el influence is great, and I use their language to name most things. In S”halek, omia would be pronounced something more like uunea, but I just went with the Lasi’el pronunciation for simplicity.
Also, I love how you deliberately misspelled Bucky’s name since she’s unfamiliar with it. What does she think of his metal arm?
Thanks! Hmm, I’m don’t remember if she has commented on the arm in the RP earlier or not. She’s commented on all the guns, using terms like “speed bugs” having no other words to describe her experience with bullets. She probably would simply assume that the arm to be more some kind of strange glove, until closer inspection.
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December 11, 2023 at 4:33 pm #169165Which group of characters are yours approaching right now?
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 11, 2023 at 5:00 pm #169172@thearcaneaxiom Really cool! So she would know what a horizon is, but isn’t very familiar with an Earthlike one since in her world, she’d be seeing the other planetoids on the more broken-up edge.
There’s a planet in Star Wars called Anaxes that got destroyed by something (it never says what) and ends up being an asteroid belt kinda like that.
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December 11, 2023 at 5:01 pm #169173The asteroid belt in our solar system is also thought to be the remains of a planet, I think.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 11, 2023 at 5:11 pm #169179@jonas Yeah, a small one, so I can see how it’d happen.
The weird thing is that the Anaxes asteroids apparently kept their planet’s atmosphere? IDK, it’s sci-fi so I suppose that could happen. @thearcaneaxiom’s Omialia makes a bit more sense since the asteroids are clumped together like a planet, held together by gravity, rather than being a literal debris field, so they could theoretically have an atmosphere of some kind. There is a moon in our solar system, I think it’s one of Jupiter’s, which is basically a bunch of rocks held together by gravity.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
December 11, 2023 at 5:18 pm #169180@freedomwriter76
Awwwww, Riker smiled! And let her hold hands with him!
Nae
She grasped his warm hand, jittery with joy at them all going together.
“Which way are we going, and what are we looking for?”
"You need French Toast."
December 11, 2023 at 6:20 pm #169191Really cool! So she would know what a horizon is, but isn’t very familiar with an Earthlike one since in her world, she’d be seeing the other planetoids on the more broken-up edge.
Yeah, essentially. Though N’nesha specifically hasn’t even seen that horizon, it’s probably been described to her before.
There’s a planet in Star Wars called Anaxes that got destroyed by something (it never says what) and ends up being an asteroid belt kinda like that.
Cool! So are these different asteroids habitable?
The weird thing is that the Anaxes asteroids apparently kept their planet’s atmosphere? IDK, it’s sci-fi so I suppose that could happen. thearcaneaxiom’s Omialia makes a bit more sense since the asteroids are clumped together like a planet, held together by gravity, rather than being a literal debris field, so they could theoretically have an atmosphere of some kind. There is a moon in our solar system, I think it’s one of Jupiter’s, which is basically a bunch of rocks held together by gravity.
Well, the physics of the Septrum are different from our reality’s. Omialia is really just a 3d slice of a bigger 4d superstructure, and each of the omias are actually connected as one object in said structure. Gravity doesn’t come from mass, but from three elemental stones that influence the three mundane elements. This allows the structure to not collapse on itself, while still having gravity and an atmosphere.
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December 11, 2023 at 7:25 pm #169199I think Freedom’s adding a few more charries to the castle.
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December 11, 2023 at 8:44 pm #169237Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@esther-c Haha, they’re amazing 🤣💖🤣
Breif overview of the charries I’m adding:
Erich Elias Braun. 23 years old. Blonde hair in a waved quiff style, blue eyes, pale skin. 6’0″ with an average masculine build, not too skinny and not too muscular, wearing a ww2 SS officer uniform. Carries a dagger and a Luger Pistol on him. Cocky, snarky, firm, teasing (at times), stubborn, refuses to let anyone change his beliefs. Agnostic. German.
Esther Elizabeth Cohen. 21 years old. Dark black straight hair, dark brown eyes, tan skin. Around 5’2″ with an average feminine build. Wears a WW2 era women’s light blue dress along with a gray coat, a silver cross necklace, and low 1940s style gray heels. Kind, compassionate, helpful, strives to help as many people as possible, passionate, can come off as “preachy” to some people, gentle yet firm, loving, forgiving. Christian. Jewish.
The 2 of them were childhood friends when young, and they have since reunited, and they are still friendly towards each other and truthfully love each other in a friendship way (Erich is married), but they are both very different than the kids they once were.
Erich
“Remind me again when the castles were built, Esther.”
“They’ve been built throughout history, silly. Mostly throughout the middle ages, but at different eras too. I thought you were the history one…I’m the science one.”
Erich chuckled. “You certainly rushed to anyone injured on the playground to help…blood never scared you.”
“My father was a doctor;” Esther bit her lip, “It’s a shame he can’t practice anymore.”
Erich scoffed. “Don’t worry about things we can’t change, Esther-”
“God can-”
“Don’t start now.” Erich interrupted with a groan.
Footsteps…voices.
Shadows emerged, and Erich forced Esther behind him, drawing his Luger in a fraction of a second. “Stay behind me.”
December 11, 2023 at 8:48 pm #169240Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@rae I knowww, it’s so cute 💖💖🥰 @jonas @savannah_grace2009
Riker
“Which way are we going, and what are we looking for?”
Riker looked down at Nae, releasing a small smile for her. “…I’m not sure. I know there are others around, but, well, I don’t remember exactly where they are, nor do I know if they would be the best…company, and even they don’t know how to get out. Maybe it’d be best if we just stick together.”
December 11, 2023 at 8:52 pm #169243Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Bucky
“…Not… home…”
Bucky looked up at Neshe & Nele. “…I don’t think it’s home for any of us…”
He flinched and sucked in a deep breath when Uvah probed at the wound, applying gentle yet firm attention to his injury. Her concern was undeserved, perhaps even wrong. Bucky didn’t deserve it…not one bit. The things he’d done…the people he’d killed…what was he except a monster that deserved to be caged up for life?
Bucky bit his lip.
Neither one of them knew who he was…what he’d done.
If they did, they would run…they’d need to.
“…I think we all just want to get home.”
December 11, 2023 at 8:57 pm #169246@freedomwriter76
Oh, sure! I guess It would just be light and you and me because Godlyfantasy isn’t here. Light isn’t on a lot, I’ll tag her and ask if she feels like doing it!
@lightoverdarkness6 freedom and I might start up the roleplay group with Tauren, Lesli, and Tony again, were you interested in joining? I can’t remember if you pulled out your charries before it ended or not"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
December 11, 2023 at 9:59 pm #169260@freedomwriter76
AWWW BUCKKYYY 😭😭😭
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:December 12, 2023 at 2:46 pm #169310@freedomwriter76
Ev
Ev shrugged. “Well, he has a gun, so that might keep us from attacking each other.”
“From killing each other,” Adrian corrected, holding up a finger. “I don’t think anyone would mind if I attacked you.” He flashed him a grin.
“I would,” Ev mumbled with a quick raise of his eyebrows. He turned to the young man and woman in front of them and smiled. “Sorry, don’t mind us. We’re just…” he cast a sideways glance towards Adrian, “just chatting.”
Adrian rolled his eyes.
“My name’s Everton and this is Blondy.” He pointed a thumb at Adrian.
“Though I’m more commonly known as Adrian,” he said with a sharp glare Ev’s direction. He cleared his throat. “And you are…?”
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
December 13, 2023 at 3:24 pm #169483Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Esther
“And you are…?”
Erich’s eyes relaxed, having narrowed when the two boys sent comments back and forth to each other. “Erich. This is Esther.”
Esther nodded and smiled gently. “It’s good to meet you both. Do either of you know exactly where we are?”
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