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December 11, 2023 at 9:10 am #169125Anonymous
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@esther-c Ooh, Ev and Adrian??đ
Hmm…I don’t really have anyone that isn’t already in a group, however, I could add a couple of charries…I’d like to do a RP with you.
So does that sound good to you? đ
December 11, 2023 at 9:11 am #169126Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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there’s a couple charries I wanna practice writing anyhow, lol
December 11, 2023 at 9:15 am #169127Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Soooo I know we had a group a while back with Tauren, Lesli, Steve Rogers, Tony Stark, Jared, Matthew, and I believe Godly’s Luna (although I know she isn’t here, so idk if Luna would stayđ ) i don’t remember where we were, but would y’all ever be interested in continuing that group, or should we just say that they all dispersed, lol? XD
@princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom and would y’all like to just get rid of our group with Uvah, N’Nesha, & Bucky, or continue it? (again, idk where we left off last đ)December 11, 2023 at 11:04 am #169136Sef
“I-I guess we could stay together,” Sef said softly. She didn’t want the others upset at her for wanting to split up, and if they thought that was better…she would do what they wanted. She was used to not having her own way. She didn’t deserve it.
She just wanted to go home. Back home where nobody cared one bit, so she could vanish unnoticed, like a ghost in the wind.
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333December 11, 2023 at 11:14 am #169137@savannah_grace2009 @rae @freedomwriter76
Ariac
Ariac looked at each of the others in turn. He was pretty sure none of them were going to try to murder him or each other at this point.
âVery well then,â he said. âWe go together. But first, do any of you have any idea where we are? Are there other people here? I donât want to walk into a trap unprepared.â
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đ Appreciator of BooksDecember 11, 2023 at 11:38 am #169138@freedomwriter76
Yeah, I don’t really mind either way. I have no idea where we left off either đ
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:December 11, 2023 at 11:38 am #169139@freedomwriter76
and would yâall like to just get rid of our group with Uvah, NâNesha, & Bucky, or continue it? (again, idk where we left off last đ)
It’s been your turn actually. I can repost the last one if you want, just give me a moment to dig.
He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
December 11, 2023 at 12:09 pm #169140@freedomwriter67
Here’s the last post, and I made sure there wasn’t any after that, it was around page 417:
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I decided I needed to stop procrastinating and continue before I getting prodded again, sorry itâs a little shortđ
Nânesha
ââŚLet me handle this.â I heard Bucky say. I lay, stunnedâŚ
Neshe: What⌠happened�
Nele: Whatâs he doingâŚ?
I sat up, still a bit dazed. Bucky stood in the middle of the hall, and Uvah crouched next to me, gesturing for me to keep going. Bucky held another one of those strange metal devices, holding it up in a almost subdued way.
I stood up, and me and Uvah walked around a strange pillar marking the center of the hallway, and entered another dash. When we reached another corner, a symphony of sound shattering bangs commencedâŚ
He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
December 11, 2023 at 12:34 pm #169143Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@thearcaneaxiom (tysm…that is sooo helpful XD) @princesachronicle22
Welp, let’s continue then!! đ
Bucky
Bucky fired off his gun several times.
Viola ducked behind a pillar. Her pistol shot off.
Burning fire from his arm.
But it was only a graze…it had to be.
Bucky grimaced and shot again.
Viola cried out and hit the floor.
Injured, but alive. She would be down for a while.
Bucky turned and made a mad dash in the same direction he’d seen Neshe & Nele and Uvah go.
He laid a hand over his arm and pulled it away.
Blood stained his fingers red.
He spotted the two women and rushed ahead. “…She’s down, but she won’t stay down forever. Come on, let’s get out of here.”
He opened another door, revealing a dark room. “Come on, through here.”
December 11, 2023 at 1:29 pm #169153@thearcaneaxiom @freedomwriter76
UVAH
She walked forward in a daze as Bucky ushered them into a dim room to hide. As Uvah turned back towards the door however, her gaze caught on Bucky’s arm, illuminated for only a second as he shut the entrance. Left in darkness, she could only barely see the slice of dripping red running along his bicep, she stepped forward.
“You’re hurt.” She said, tone soft but firm. It felt as though Uvah had only been in this strange place a short time, and yet she’d already seen to several injuries.
“It’s nothing.” Bucky responded, covering the wound with his other hand in an attempt to delay the blood flow.
Neshe Nele tugged at them. “Go.” She told them urgently. The red haired woman tightened her grip and pulled them deeper into the room, somehow navigating the dark space.
Uvah let herself be dragged along as they wound through tight halls and corners. She stubbed her toe at one point, but knew it was insignificant to the pain Bucky was suppressing. As soon as they stopped, she turned to face him.
“Sit, then let me see your arm.” She commanded, voice barely a whisper. It didn’t matter how far away they were, Uvah had no desire to alert that Viola lady if she somehow recovered from Bucky’s bullet.
Eventually, Bucky sat on the hard ground, though Uvah could sense his reluctance. She settled down next to him, opening her satchel. She just hoped that she would be able to see enough to help him.
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:December 11, 2023 at 2:32 pm #169156@freedomwriter76
Sure! Sounds good! Iâll get to writing their first RP later this afternoon, but feel free to do one before me. (:
Write what should not be forgotten. â Isabel Allende
December 11, 2023 at 3:47 pm #169160@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22
N’nesha
Uvah had Bucky sit, working on his wound. I paced back and forth.
Neshe: We need to get out of here.
Nele: Where even is “here”?
I decided to explore the room, feeling around the walls. Wood touched my fingers, and specks of light shown through the cracks. A window.
Neshe: This could be a good escape.
Nele: Great! I need some fresh air.
I pushed, but it didn’t budge.
Neshe: Hmmm…
Nele: What about the guy?
I turned back to Bucky and Uvah. Uvah, despite the dark room, seemed to prevail over his wound. “…Bakae?” I asked him, “Would you… open window?” He looked up at me, seeming a tad confused, but nodded as I pointed where it was.
Despite his arm, it didn’t take much for him to pop it open, letting light flood the room. I looked out, and my blood went cold.
Neshe: Where in Omialia?!!!
Nele: Shelarre Eternal!!!
The outside seemed as though it was split in two. Above, there was a vast empty blue, bellow, a green omia that seemed to have no regard to scale, reaching and meeting the blue at an infinitely distant line. Was it even an omia? It seemed like a flat disc, not a hint of curvature.
“…Not… home…” I said in shock.
He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
December 11, 2023 at 4:04 pm #169161@thearcaneaxiom I assume N’Nesha lives on some kind of asteroid, and that’s why she’s surprised at the horizon and the fact that there’s only one? (“Omia” is their species’ word for such planetoids, right?)
Also, I love how you deliberately misspelled Bucky’s name since she’s unfamiliar with it. What does she think of his metal arm?
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
December 11, 2023 at 4:09 pm #169162@freedomwriter76
Alrighty! Here it is! (:
Everton
Ev woke with a start. His vision blurred and unblurred until he could finally see clearly. His eyes glanced over the stone walls and the flickering sconces.
Oh⌠this place again⌠He had been here before. Wasnât sure how it had happened, but here he was in this wild castle again.
He muttered to himself as he got up off the floor.
âWhat are you doing here?â
Ev whipped his head around. âWhat are you doing here?â
Adrian held up his hands in surrender. âWoah, chill. No need to be so hostile.â
âGreat, now Iâm stuck in this castle with you,â he murmured, dusting off his hands.
âWhat do you meanâcastle?â Adrian looked around.
âThis.â Ev spread his arms out. âThis is a castle. We are stuck in it.â He dropped his arms, rolling his eyes. âNow excuse me while I go get lost without you.â
âAre you implying that you would get lost without me?â Adrian asked, arrogance lilting on his words as he followed Ev down the hallway.
Ev scoffed. âNo. I just already know that anyone in this castle gets lost somehow and Iâd rather do it alone than with you.â
âYouâre impossible, you know that?â
Ev tossed a cocky grin over his shoulder. âYes, Iâve been told that before. But some girls have found my independence attractive.â
In three long strides Adrian placed himself in front of Ev, his arms crossed. âAnd thatâs whatâs important right now, obviously,â he said, cocking an eyebrow.
Ev rolled his eyes and chuckled, pushing past Adrian. âNo. Iâve already got my girl.â At least thatâs what he had been trying to convince himself of.
Adrian laughed.
âShut up. I know what youâre thinking,â Ev called back in a sing-song voice.
Adrian sidled up next to him. âRemind me why I deserve to be stuck in this castle with you?â
âIâm wondering the same thing. If weâre lucky, weâll meet someone else that will keep us from killing each other.â Ev shrugged and turned the corner.
âLuckyâŚâ Adrian scoffed. âMore like, then weâll have witnesses.â
âI think I just found our witnesses,â Ev murmured, spotting dark forms farther down the hallway. He picked up his pace until he could clearly make out the figures. âDo you know how to file for murder?â
Write what should not be forgotten. â Isabel Allende
December 11, 2023 at 4:09 pm #169163Those two⌠đ¤Ł
Write what should not be forgotten. â Isabel Allende
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