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December 7, 2023 at 4:51 pm #168699
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Ohhh, ok…I was just reading up on it, and it seems as if it’s more of a personal choice…some Germans wear it on their right, others on their left…idk, it depends on if the person is affected by western culture or not 🤔
Okay, well then I guess it depends on how German Riker is.
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December 7, 2023 at 7:57 pm #168705@princesachronical22 @lightoverdarkness6
Liren
She vanished… The same darkness that the woman commanded earlier suddenly enveloped her, and she was gone. Namal and her companion both jumped into defensive stances, eyes darting towards all the dark corners of the hallway. I looked around helplessly with my broken arm. Kirrtes reflected my confusion.
“Where’d she go?” Namal whispered. She gave me another suspicious glance. I shrugged. Kirrtes sculpted believable fear into my face.
Something moved. All three of us turned, facing the dark corridor. Namal’s gun pointed, the man’s blade raised, I stood, watching. Agitation emanated from Kirrtes for it’s current lack of mobility.
Silence. “Come on Miss Prickly, just be patient! Let’s get some Anuni, indulge ourselves, and then we play hiding go seek.” the man said.
Silence… There’s something there, glowing faintly. A trap? Namal created another fake self, walking towards it. Sure enough, something jumped into the shadows on top of the fake, which of course, was fake. It landed on the ground with a loud thump. Namal and the man jumped into action, pinning the figure with a practiced efficiency. Namal burst with a sudden light, banishing all darkness in the room. The culprit wasn’t the woman, but a young man. Another stood some distance away, the same age. His hands in the air, sweat visibly trickling down his cheeks.
“Who are you, and where did the woman go?” Namal inquired with her glowing aura somehow adding to her intimidating image. Didn’t this just happen minutes earlier?
“Don’t shoot! What are you talking about?” The man squirmed under her. “What woman?”
“Talk.”
“Ok ok! I just found myself here a bit ago. I don’t know how, but I’m here. I ran into my friend here not long after.” It’s the same story. It was getting harder to ignore. A world beyond Tycem… worlds beyond Tycem. Everyone we’ve ran into seemed to come from a places I’ve never set foot on.
“Why did you attack us?” Namal continued her interrogation.
“Why do you think? A woman walking toward me with a gun? I had to do something!”
Namal stood, glow fading as she lifted the boy up and binding his hands, probably destroying his ego in the process. Her companion already had the other one in custody. I hadn’t even noticed until that moment. He seemed to have control over sound in ways similar as Namal does to light.
“All right, Mr. Mini Nam must be really thirsty. The lad clearly has been drinking nothing but Day’s water.” The man said. Namal gave a suffering look, probably at the name, but her face turned inquisitive when she looked at him. I turned, the boy was glowing. The name made more sense, but the blue glow in his chest seemed different from Namal’s ability. The man looked back and forth between the two boys, “well lads, what degree of jubilation do you feel when you hear the word ‘anuni’?”
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December 7, 2023 at 11:47 pm #168736Sef
Her heart quickened. Split up? She would rather be on her own. Nobody cared about her anyway. At least that’s what Iver told her. She was better off on her own, where nobody would notice her, where nobody would care about her. That’s what she deserved, she reminded herself, to be ignored, beaten, left alone to die.
“I’m okay on my own,” she said softly. “I don’t want to cause any trouble or anything…”
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333December 8, 2023 at 3:49 pm #168803@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @rae
Ariac
“Well then,” said Ariac. “I guess we’ll split up. The hall only goes two ways though, so two of us can go each way. How about you girls go that way and Riker and I go this way?” He figured Riker was the most potentially dangerous of the three, so he wanted to keep an eye on him.
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I love how everyone thinks Riker is dangerous, yet he’s possibly one of the sweetest people here XD
December 8, 2023 at 4:20 pm #168805@freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @jonas
Nae
“Split up? I thought staying together was safer. Besides,” Nae stepped forward, her movements confident. She reached for the man’s hand who had the old gungedal (Freedom, I’m leaving it to you whether Riker accepts or not, this is just a Nae thing to do). “I’d rather go with you.” She looked up at the man with her large, blue eyes. They pleaded with him. They begged. “And I want to learn your name, at least.”
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December 8, 2023 at 4:22 pm #168806@freedomwriter76
For some reason, I don’t think “dangerous person” is in Nae’s vocabulary. XD
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December 9, 2023 at 9:28 am #168846@freedomwriter76 @rae @princessachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @jonas @savannah_grace2009 @is-that-everyone?
Alright…
I think I’m gonna rejoin the castle. 😏
I have no idea what happened to the characters I left in here. XD
So I’m just going to pretend they are no longer there. Lol. I’m adding in Everton and Adrian. Because this mind end up disastrous or quite hilarious. XD
For those who don’t know these charries, I’ll go ahead and post descriptions of them underneath this post. Does anyone have any characters they could meet?
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December 9, 2023 at 9:33 am #168847Everton Barlowe
Age: 17
Appearance: see reference pic, 5’ 11’’
Personality: courageous, impulsive, extroverted, occasionally flirtatious, mischievous, playful, adventurous, cocky
Moodboard/Reference Pic:
Other: He and Adrian are actually the same personality type. XD So that’s gonna be fun. In their story, Adrian ends up falling for Ami, and Ami for him. But Ev already loved Ami, so he doesn’t really like Adrian. Plus, he was suspicious of Adrian to begin with. Which he had good reason to be because of *spoilers*.
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December 9, 2023 at 9:36 am #168848Adrian Len
(Yeah, y’all, son of my villain. Which Ev doesn’t know at this point.)
Age: 18
Appearance: see reference pic, silver-blue eyes, 6’ 1’’
Personality: charismatic, outgoing, extroverted, sometimes cocky, easygoing
Moodboard/Reference Pic:
Other: Um… He’s hiding something from Ev. A very dangerous secret. Anddd…. I think that’s it. I can’t say anything else without giving away spoilers. Hehehe.
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December 10, 2023 at 12:07 pm #169006I’m not the happiest with it, but Nae’s board…
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December 10, 2023 at 12:08 pm #169007"You need French Toast."
December 10, 2023 at 5:46 pm #169049@rae @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76
Wait whose turn is it? It isn’t mine is it?
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@rae Aww, Nae is so cute 🥰 @jonas @savannah_grace2009
Riker
“Split up? I thought staying together was safer. Besides,” Nae reached for Riker’s hand, “I’d rather go with you.” Her blue eyes enlarged, begging, pleading. “And I want to learn your name, at least.”
Riker smiled faintly.
She reminded him of Naja…so much.
Riker gently accepted her offer. Her small hand slipped into his.
Riker glanced at Ariac. “It’s still up to you if we split up, but I think staying together is better…” He glanced at Sef, who still remained as far away from the others as possible. Concern filled his heart, overflowing from every inch of him; his eyes filled with concern that Sef could no doubt see. “…But maybe some would feel safer if we split up…”
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