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December 7, 2023 at 9:19 am #168664
Alright, I’ll do that. I forgot to post a description of Ariac earlier, so let me do that first.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 7, 2023 at 9:29 am #168665Ariac has black hair, yellow eyes, and is of average height. He wears a grayish-blue cloak over a plain black top and dark brown pants. He has a belt which has no weapons or tools of any sort attached but instead a bunch of pouches containing money or personal trinkets. He’s in his late 20s.
Ariac
Ariac hesitated. The young man seemed almost scared. Maybe these people were all just as confused as he was. Ariac’s sword vanished to mist again, and he felt the weight of coins drop into one of his pouches. It was always a bit less than what he had traded for it.
“Who are you?” he said, glancing between the girl and the young man. “I have no interest in fighting. If you come in peace, then there’s no reason for this to get bloody. …But if not…this won’t end well.”
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 7, 2023 at 10:02 am #168669@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76
Nae
Nae stopped in her tracks as she saw three people.
“Who are you?” She leaned forward, her hands behind her back. Then she stood erect, a bright expression on her face. “You must be here to meet Da, I don’t know where he is, but I’m Nae.” She folded her hands in front of her and made her eyes already bigger than they were. She was about to say something more when she looked around and exclaimed in a little voice “Oh dear! I don’t know where i am either! This doesn’t look like Banor. This must be a dream, but I hope it’s not like the ones Da has that he won’t tell me about. What’s with the funny hat? And your gungedal looks a little old.”
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Gungedal is the Wondian word for gun.
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#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)December 7, 2023 at 1:16 pm #168674Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@rae Aww, she’s so cute XD💖🥰 @jonas @savannah_grace2009
Riker
“I have no interest in fighting. If you come in peace, then there’s no reason for this to get bloody. …But if not…this won’t end well.”
Riker glanced at the man who had a sword vanish from his hands, keeping his gun level. “I’m Riker…Riker S-Schind-”
A small figure, a young girl, stepped into the room. “Who are you?” She brightened.
“You must be here to meet Da, I don’t know where he is, but I’m Nae.”
The small girl looked around, smiling from ear to ear.
“Oh dear! I don’t know where i am either! This doesn’t look like Banor. This must be a dream, but I hope it’s not like the ones Da has that he won’t tell me about. What’s with the funny hat? And your gungedal looks a little old.”
Riker blinked several times. He had no idea what the young girl was talking about.
But she was energetic…adorable, and seemingly friendly. She reminded him of his precious Naja.
And she almost looked like Angelina when she was little.
(Angelina is Riker’s younger sister, fyi)
Riker slowly lowered the pistol, but didn’t completely take his hands off the weapon, unsure if that was the right move.
“…I don’t want to hurt anyone.”
December 7, 2023 at 1:23 pm #168675Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@rae @jonas @savannah_grace2009 I should probably provide a description of Riker, huh? 😂
Well, he’s about 28 years old, has dark brown wavy hair styled in a 1940s Waved Quiff style, dark blue eyes, pale skin that may be lightly tanned (but not much), about 6’0″, muscular. Wears a WW2 SS/Totenkopf officer uniform with Lieutenant insignia, including the signature skull & crossbones uniform cap and black jackboots that come up to his knees. He also has a silver wedding ring on the ring finger of his left hand.
Here he is ⬇️
UwU
A kind, compassionate man who looks out for everyone and has a thirsting desire to help as many people as possible. Very driven by his guilt. Feels responsible for the deaths of thousands of innocent people; haunted by his past. Gentle, protective (sometimes overly😅), caring, generous, very broken, quiet, reserved.
Suffers from C-PTSD (Complex Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder; though undiagnosed since they didn’t know much about it then), both due to his abusive childhood and his work within the SS. Has flashbacks, nightmares, insomnia, pretty much all the symptoms associated with C-PTSD and PTSD in general. Triggered by the sounds of yelling, the smell of alcohol, gunshots, loud blasts, raised hands (like someone about to slap him or someone else), screaming, and even the mentioning of fathers.
December 7, 2023 at 2:12 pm #168681@freedomwriter76
Riker is so sad 😭😭 Also if our group with whaley isn’t going to do anything I might move a charrie to join you guys if you don’t mind
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December 7, 2023 at 2:26 pm #168683I have no idea where our group is, so yeeaaah 😅 We could just say our group dissolved to further explore the castle?
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December 7, 2023 at 2:44 pm #168686@freedomwriter76
silver wedding ring on the ring finger of his left hand.
Is not the wedding ring put on the right hand in Germany?
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#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)December 7, 2023 at 2:46 pm #168687@freedomwriter76
The engagement ring is put on the left, the wedding ring on the right, or so I have heard.
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#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)December 7, 2023 at 3:01 pm #168688I happen to know that that is the case in the Netherlands, but I’m not sure about Germany. Wouldn’t be surprising.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 7, 2023 at 3:13 pm #168689Sef
She looked around, and tried to slip out of the room. She didn’t want to talk to anyone, and she didn’t want anyone to talk to her either. It was safer, better that way.
“Hey, you,” a voice called, and Sef froze. “What’s your name?”
“I’m Sef,” she whispered, subconsciously rubbing the fresh scars on her arms, a common thing she did when she was nervous. “Does anyone know where we are?”
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333December 7, 2023 at 3:23 pm #168691@rae @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76
Ariac
“I don’t,” said Ariac. “I just got here.” He hesitated. “I suppose we should work together.” He didn’t particularly trust any of them, but he didn’t think any of them would be a threat, especially the two young girls. He was pretty sure the thing in Riker’s hand was a weapon, but he doubted it would prove effective against his precognition. If Riker used it against the others, though…
“Should we split up or go as a group?” he said.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 7, 2023 at 3:57 pm #168694@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @jonas
Nae
“Splitting up sounds like fun!” Nae apparently didn’t realize she was too young to wander around alone. She brushed her hair out of her face. “But groups are advised, you know. Besides, who are all of you, and what’s that silly symbol mean?” She stared at the man with dark blue eyes. “You remind me of Master Dare, but he has black hair. So black it could be night!”
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)December 7, 2023 at 3:58 pm #168695If she was not so cute, I think she would be kinda annoying.
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#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)December 7, 2023 at 4:43 pm #168697Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings Yeah, I know he’s so sad 😭 I’m sure you can join the group if you want, or you and me could start one and others can join in as well :3
@rae Ohhh, ok…I was just reading up on it, and it seems as if it’s more of a personal choice…some Germans wear it on their right, others on their left…idk, it depends on if the person is affected by western culture or not 🤔 @savannah_grace2009 @jonasAnywhooo, RP
Riker
“Should we split up or go as a group?”
“Splitting up sounds like fun!” Nae cried; she brushed ringlets out of her view. ““But groups are advised, you know. Besides, who are all of you, and what’s that silly symbol mean? You remind me of Master Dare, but he has black hair. So black it could be night!”
Riker chewed his bottom lip, a habit he knew not even his mother approved of, and faced the man with the sword who had yet to give his name, subtly and purposefully avoiding Nae’s question. “It’s up to everyone here to decide…I don’t have a preference, but larger groups are safer.”
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