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November 6, 2023 at 3:02 pm #163369Anonymous
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Isaiah
Isaiah followed behind Marek and Eleanor and Leon, holding up the back of the group.
Each step hurt slightly, his body still weak, but he pushed through.
God would help him…he knew he would.
He realized he was close to Marek and Eleanor, and he smiled faintly. “I hope you two will enjoy traveling with us.”
(oh my gosh I love him so muchš„°)
November 6, 2023 at 3:34 pm #163381@rae Ok so I have three characters in this group who are all siblings: Jack, Cody, and Kate. They all have two little horns on their heads like a fawn, and they all wear their bangs over their eyes. Also, they have country accents.
@lightoverdarkness6 Ā @princesachronicle22Kate
A boy stumbled into view and suddenly froze as he saw Kate and everyone else behind her.
āWho are you?ā His hands began to shake.
She immediately noticed his firearm and took a step back.
āI could ask you the same thing,ā she said.
Jack stepped forward. His hands gripped his staff tightly, but his voice was friendly as ever.
āWeāre just some travelers who are a bit lost. We donāt mean anyone any harm. My nameās Jack. Whatās yours?ā
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āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
November 6, 2023 at 3:36 pm #163383your tag wasnāt working
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
November 6, 2023 at 3:45 pm #163385@loopylin thanks for notifying me!
@lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22Kid
“Weāre just some travelers who are a bit lost. We donāt mean anyone any harm. My nameās Jack. Whatās yours?ā
Kid fisted his hand, trying to stop the tremor, but he knew it was worthless.
“Kid Elwend, Young Warrior. Do any of you happen to know anyone named Kwin?”
"You need French Toast."
November 6, 2023 at 4:21 pm #163387@freedomwriter76
(oh my gosh I love him so muchš„°)
He’s so sweet
Eleanor
Isaiah smiled faintly. āI hope you two will enjoy traveling with us.ā
Marek smiled. “I already am,”
Eleanor gave a simple nod, she wasn’t as good at conversation as Marek.
“What’s it like in Germany right now? if you don’t mind me asking,” Marek asked.
Do me a favorā¦. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneNovember 6, 2023 at 4:25 pm #163388@rae @princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6
JackĀ
āI donāt believe soā¦ā he glanced back at his other companions to see if they possibly did.
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
November 6, 2023 at 4:34 pm #163389Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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ikr? š„°š„°
Isaiah
Isaiah smiled gently at Marek. “Ah, well, it isn’t…good. Chaos, even….much hatred. It is saddening, but I am trusting that God will pull all of us through.”
Leon huffed from up ahead. “Yeah right.”
November 7, 2023 at 3:20 pm #163535@rae @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6
Aww Kid
I think I’ll wait a bit more for Light to go and then I’ll do Ezrian š
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:November 7, 2023 at 7:14 pm #163557@freedomwriter76
Marek
Isaiah smiled gently at Marek. āAh, well, it isnātā¦good. Chaos, evenā¦.much hatred. It is saddening, but I am trusting that God will pull all of us through.ā
Leon huffed from up ahead. āYeah right.ā
Marek gave a faint smile to Isaiah and then turned back to Eleanor. he knew she didn’t like this, she was with two men she didn’t know in a place she didn’t know, and she no doubt felt trapped.
He reached down slowly and gently grabbed her hand, she flinched for a second at the touch and then tightened her grip on his hand.
That was a win for him, her feeling comfortable and safe with him.
“Isn’t that what causes most wars, hatred?” Marek had a good feeling that a strong Christian man like Isaiah would have much to say on the topic, and currently, he needed something to talk about.
Do me a favorā¦. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneNovember 7, 2023 at 7:39 pm #163559Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Uggh i love Marekššš
Isaiah
āIsnāt that what causes most wars, hatred?ā
Isaiah nodded. “Yes…it’s mostly what caused this one. Hatred leads to more hatred, and in the end, hatred can lead to horrible, horrible things, including war…hatred carried in your heart destroys no one but you and the people you love most. It doesn’t matter if someone is sorry or if someone has apologized, we are called to love and forgive our enemies. We all deserve death…we all deserve hell.”
“Do you really think we deserve what we went through, Isaiah!?”
“No, but I’m also not agreeing with you that you need to keep hating everyone that hurt us and Riker specifically.”
Leon scoffed and walked faster.
Isaiah sighed, sent up a silent prayer for Leon’s healing, and faced Marek and Eleanor again. “What do you think about hatred, Marek, Eleanor?”
November 7, 2023 at 7:49 pm #163561@freedomwriter76
I know!! he’s so sweet
EleanorĀ
Isaiah faced Marek and Eleanor again. āWhat do you think about hatred, Marek, Eleanor?ā
Riker? Eleanor made a note to remember the name, she liked to know as much as she could about the people she was around.
But her mind was hung up on the question that Isaiah had asked, truthfully she agreed as much.
“I think hate is a fill-in, instead of dealing with the grief, trauma, or anything, people decide to replace it with hate,” Marek stated.
Now Eleanor really did feel for Leon, as much as she liked Marek, sometimes being around someone with a perfect view of things could be annoying.
“Or sometimes it’s just hate, hate on the person who traumatized you, hate on the person who can look someone dead in the eyes and hurt them repeatedly, don’t those people deserve hate?! they’re too far gone anyways,”
Eleanor hadn’t meant for her words to come off as sharp as they did, but it was a topic close to her heart, a topic that brought up a few scars she preferred to keep hidden.
Do me a favorā¦. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneNovember 7, 2023 at 8:26 pm #163566I like Isaiah
"You need French Toast."
November 8, 2023 at 8:44 am #163592Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@rae Thanks, me too! š„°
@smiley Aww, Eleanorš Leon feels you, girl…Leon
āOr sometimes itās just hate, hate on the person who traumatized you, hate on the person who can look someone dead in the eyes and hurt them repeatedly, donāt those people deserve hate?! theyāre too far gone anyways,”
Isaiah’s brown eyes filled with concern…compassion. “Eleanor-”
“She’s right, Isaiah. The things some people have done…they’re unforgiveable. They are too far gone.”
“Leon, that’s not true-”
“What about it isn’t? Do you really think that the people who hurt us, starved us, beat us deserve our forgiveness!? You think Riker deserves my forgiveness!?”
“Leon, you know that he’s apologized several times and that he says he didn’t know about the camp-”
“And so that excuses him!? Saying ‘I’m sorry’ isn’t going to change what he did, Isaiah…he refused to help me and Aadelheide.”
“Leon, everyone deserves death…you and me no more or no less than Riker. Christ came so he could save everyone that sins, which is all of us.”
“Men like Riker are too far gone for forgiveness.”
Isaiah stood firm. “Then why don’t you go walk up to Jesus and tell him that his sacrifice meant nothing.”
Leon paused for a short moment.
That hurt…way more than Leon cared to admit.
Leon clenched his fists and glared at Isaiah. “I don’t want to hear about God…I don’t want to hear about Jesus, and I sure as heck don’t want to hear about Riker and his so-called ability to be forgiven. Even if God does forgive him, Isaiah, I won’t. I refuse.”
“Leon, hatred will destroy-”
“So what!? I’m not going to forgive Riker, Isaiah…I swear I won’t.”
“Leon-”
“How do you expect me to forgive the man that killed my wife!?”
November 8, 2023 at 3:26 pm #163634@freedomwriter76 ok! you can go first cause I have literally no idea what I wanna do lol
also cute profile pic! and a random question, if Bucky rode a dragon, what would he call it? The one I have in mind for him is a color-changing one who’s actually rather peaceful, but can spit flaming liquid. I’ll show you a picture if you’d like.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
November 8, 2023 at 3:59 pm #163640@freedomwriter76
Aww, Eleanorš Leon feels you, girlā¦
our poor charries *cries*
āThen why donāt you go walk up to Jesus and tell him that his sacrifice meant nothing.ā
Okay thatās one of the best arguments Iāve ever heard, a round of applauds for Isaiah
Marek
āHow do you expect me to forgive the man that killed my wife!?ā
Everything went silent, and for a second Marek just stood there. Not sure what to say, and if his words would mean anything.
āLeon Iām sorry,ā Marek said, showing his concern.
A moment of silence took place before Eleanor turned to face Marek.
āSo what do you think now? do people like Riker orā¦ my father deserve forgiveness?ā Eleanor swallowed clearly holding back deep pain, and not even a tear showed on her face. Marek never saw her cry, he saw her angry but never cry.
āEleanor- Iām sorry, but how long can you hold on to hate?ā Marek wasnāt trying to fight her, just help her.
Eleanor shook her head with annoyance. āIf I can carry these scars then I can surely hold onto the hate,ā
Do me a favorā¦. Tell Cress I meant it
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