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November 2, 2023 at 1:14 pm #162575Anonymous
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@smiley hey, we had an old group in here but I forgot about them and what they were doing XD
idk if I’d ever bring that group back, but we could do a new group if you still wanted to RP in this forum, lol
November 2, 2023 at 1:18 pm #162577@freedomwriter76
Yeah, I remember the old group but we can start a new one since I had old characters in it I’d rather forget…
I don’t what characters to do
do you want to do fanfic characters or ones from our novels (I have no preference)
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-ThorneNovember 2, 2023 at 1:21 pm #162580Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley Hmm, I was thinking probably novel characters, although you could do fanfic charries. My book characters have run into Marvel people before XD
I’m probably gonna do Isaiah and Leon and (even though the timeline won’t completely match up with Riker, lol!) it’s mostly for practice writing their mentor-mentee and almost father-son relationship that’ll be in the 2nd novel a lot 😊
maybe Leon’s kids too…idk yet tho XD
November 2, 2023 at 1:27 pm #162581@freedomwriter76
Okay…. hmmm I’ll do Eliana and Marek (just to stay on the WWII theme and also I need to figure out their relationship, like how they act)
and it will probably be pretty early into their dating relationship
If you would like to start because… I’m pretty terrible at starting these things XD
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-ThorneNovember 2, 2023 at 2:59 pm #162586@freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper
Hmm… maybe both? Falling through the floor into a boss fight? (lol)
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
November 2, 2023 at 3:08 pm #162587@freedomwriter76
*sighs* this is why I can’t have two projects for NaNo because I wrote Eliana (a character from my other project) when I mean Eleanor XD
so I’m Eleanor and Marek, just to be clear
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-ThorneNovember 2, 2023 at 4:36 pm #162610Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings sounds like a plan to me! XD
@smiley okay, cool!! I’ll RP when I get a chance/get an idea of what to RP! 😀 I’ll try to get it done in a bit 🙂November 5, 2023 at 4:44 pm #163290Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Here it is (finally!😅); I was gone most of the weekend lol
Leon
Their footsteps echoed on the floors.
He’d been here before…he knew he had.
At least he wasn’t alone for once.
“…Oh Lord, help us out of this place.”
Ugh.
Leon walked a little faster. He loved Isaiah…he respected him.
But Leon didn’t need to hear more of Isaiah’s God talk. He just didn’t.
Voices sounded. Two of them. One masculine. One feminine.
Leon pushed his jacket aside.
“Leon, what-?”Leon pressed a finger to his lips, shook his head, and motioned Isaiah to the side where he could hide behind another wall.
Leon drew the knife at his side, went to stand beside Isaiah, and waited.
Just in case.
November 5, 2023 at 5:31 pm #163293@freedomwriter76
Eleanor
“It’s going to be okay,” Marek assured her, as they slowly and quietly walked through the castle.
But Eleanor found it hard to believe that, they were in a place they didn’t know, and they had no idea how they got there.
“Nothing’s okay until we find a way out of here,” Eleanor stated, as they turned a corner, only to find two men on the other side.
One was older and had a certain kindness in his eyes, the other looked almost scared as he clutched a knife with his hand. He appeared more threatening, but she was used to that look on a man, she grew up with it.
Marek didn’t waste any time stepping in front of Eleanor, a protective look painted across his face. Elanor wasn’t as used to that, a person (especially male) actually caring and wanting to protect her.
“Who are you?!” Marek questioned, seeming almost harsh.
Eleanor did her best not to look scared, but she knew she was failing.
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-ThorneNovember 5, 2023 at 5:37 pm #163295Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Leon
“Who are you?!”
Leon rose a smirk. “I was about to ask you the same question.”
“Now, now, Leon,” Isaiah laid a gentle hand on Leon’s shoulder and stepped forward to instead stand in front of Leon rather than behind him, “there’s no need to be harsh. I am Isaiah Altmann, and this is Leon Wagner. If you two wouldn’t mind, would you be willing to give us your names?”
Isaiah smiled his fatherly smile.
Leon looked away and huffed.
November 5, 2023 at 8:13 pm #163308@freedomwriter76
Marek
“there’s no need to be harsh. I am Isaiah Altmann, and this is Leon Wagner. If you two wouldn’t mind, would you be willing to give us your names?”
Marek glanced at Eleanor, who slid her shoulders up and tilted her head slightly, clearly trying to be intimidated and truthfully it was working.
“I’m Marek Adamski, and this is Eleanor Brooks,” Marek stated, he was still a little skeptical. “Where are you from?”
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-ThorneNovember 6, 2023 at 8:41 am #163346Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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I may bring Isabel in a bit later…although Marek and Eleanor probably won’t know she’s Leon’s daughter since she has blonde hair and blue eyes whereas Leon has black hair and brown eyes lol
Leon
“Where are you from?”
Isaiah smiled gently. “Germany.”
The pair’s eyes narrowed in distrust.
“But we’re not the-” Isaiah’s look made Leon bite off a cuss, “-Nazis.”
“We’re Jewish. I’m sorry if Leon has scared either of you. He most certainly did not mean any harm.”
Leon slowly nodded. “It was just for possible protection.”
He wouldn’t hurt or even kill for no reason…he wasn’t like the Nazis that had taken Aadelheide.
Leon’s fists clenched at his sides; he slipped his knife back into its sheath at his side.
November 6, 2023 at 9:10 am #163350@freedomwriter76
I may bring Isabel in a bit later…although Marek and Eleanor probably won’t know she’s Leon’s daughter since she has blonde hair and blue eyes whereas Leon has black hair and brown eyes lol
XD
honestly, though, people say I look like my Dad, but I can’t see it
I have my mom’s eyes and blond hair (which neither of my parents have) but I don’t think I look like either of them
Eleanor
“We’re Jewish. I’m sorry if Leon has scared either of you. He most certainly did not mean any harm.”
“It was just for possible protection.”
Eleanor understood that she was always prepared for a fight, but that’s what pain does to someone’s trust, destroys it.
Marek shared a look with Eleanor and then turned back to them. “I’m from Poland,” Marek stated.
“I’m technically from England but I moved to Poland for my job,” Eleanor had quite a few reasons for moving to Poland but only one did she care to share.
“Do you guys know the way out of here?” Marek asked, gesturing around the giant castle.
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-ThorneNovember 6, 2023 at 12:42 pm #163358Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Lol XD
Isaiah
“Do you guys know the way out of here?”
Isaiah slowly shook his head. “Afraid not. We haven’t been here for long, and well, we haven’t seen an exit anywhere.”
Leon nodded in agreement, and Isaiah noticed that his knuckles were still white.
“Leon-?”
“I don’t want to hear it. We should get moving. We’ll have a better chance of getting out of this place.” Leon interrupted; he began walking, already leaving everyone else.
“Lord help him,” Isaiah whispered; he turned his attention to Marek and Eleanor, “please forgive him. He can be…hard to deal with. I promise that he is a kind man when you get to know him.”
November 6, 2023 at 2:55 pm #163366@freedomwriter76
Marek
Leon started walking, clearly not caring about keeping up with everyone else.
Marek turned to Isaiah, who looked apologetic. “please forgive him. He can be…hard to deal with. I promise that he is a kind man when you get to know him.”
Marek smiled. “It’s fine, we can all be hard to deal with,” Marek had always been known for lightening the mood, and truthfully he knew it wasn’t his place to judge.
They caught up to Leon who was standing at the three-way split in the hallway.
“We came from that hallway and there was no exit, and if you guys came from this way and found nothing then we should go down this hallway,” Eleanor stated.
Marek nodded, glancing at everyone to make sure they approved before he continued. Once they did, Marek followed Leon with everyone else.
He had never been good at reading body language, but he could tell that Leon was clearly distrusting, then again, so was Eleanor.
He supposed that was what came with being in their situations.
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