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September 19, 2023 at 3:49 pm #156736
XD my brain must be tired because instead of putting Light’s name I put @Ezrian, like who tries to tag their own charrie đđ€Ș
EZRIAN
Eyebrows raised, Ezrian blinked down at the youth who had just fallen face forward onto the floor and then promptly introduced himself. Though he did look foreign…maybe falling forward was some kind of greeting for his people?
People, people, people from away, far away from here. He shook his head. The action sometimes helped to clear the whispers in his mind.
“Who might you be?” The boy, Tyler, asked.
Ezrian opened his mouth to respond just as the door in front of him opened again, a different boy holding it this time. He looked a little older, with lighter hair. âYou canât just slam the door in someoneâs face. Come on out âan introduce yerself.â He said, over hos shoulder to the one Ezrian had seen before. There was also a girl with them, maybe fifteen years old.
The oldest turned to Ezrian and Tyler, who had risen from the floor and was dusting himself off. Ezrian squinted, finding it odd that the dust didn’t light up when Tyler touched it.
His attention was drawn back to the other young man as he gave a nod of respect and said, âSorry for trespassinâ, but I think my siblings and I are a bit lost.â
Lost, hmm, your mind is lost, losing, going away Ezrian. He ignored the words, bearing the slice of pain that came with them. It was something he felt every time his brain acted up, deciding to turn on itself. Ezrian recognized the abnormality of his mind, knew the voices weren’t supposed to be there, that if anyone knew about it they would consider him insane.
The boy gestured behind himself, to his younger siblings. âCould you maybe tell us where we are?â
Ezrian’s brows flicked up again, he’d expected them to be the ones with an answer to that question. He looked around at the odd architecture around him. The spaces were large, with expensive looking features. And curtains that fight guests.
“Hm, well that would be difficult as I have no idea where we are. Some kind of castle maybe…” Definitely not the one he lived in though, not enough curves in the walls, or even walls with sandstone for that matter. The line of thinking sent a spike of worry through him. He didn’t know where he was. What if the Magistrate was looking for him? Ezrian was one of his most favored servants, and if the man so much as suspected that Ezrian had run away…
He looked back t the boy, then to Tyler. “We should find out. And I am Ezrian, by the way.”
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:October 4, 2023 at 8:50 pm #158077Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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I’m going to hop in this if that’s alright.
Alec Eaton, 18, ambiverted, athlete
Jessica (no last name yet) 16, introverted, artist and bookworm
here’s a pic of both:
October 7, 2023 at 2:19 am #158300@princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6 Sorry I didn’t mean to wait this long to rp!
JackÂ
“And I am Ezrian, by the way.”
“Jack. And this is Cody and-”
“Kate.” His sister interrupted. She took few steps forward, her head cocked to the side.
“I thought I heard voices coming from down that hall earlier. Maybe we should…?” She pointed at the hall she was talking about and looked to the others expectantly.
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
October 7, 2023 at 2:19 am #158301Sorry it’s so short
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
October 7, 2023 at 4:27 pm #158336Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Alec
Alec glanced at the castle door. He turned to his girlfriend, Jessie. “Want to check this place out?”
She shrugged, “Might as well.”
October 11, 2023 at 3:00 am #158714@sarafini That drawing is adorable
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
October 11, 2023 at 2:20 pm #158768No your fine Loopy!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:October 16, 2023 at 9:17 pm #159165@princesachronicle22 @loopylin So sorry this took so long y’all đ
TylerÂ
âI thought I heard voices coming from down that hall earlier. Maybe we shouldâŠ?â Kate pointed down the hall and glanced back expectantly.
It didn’t take us long to all silently decide to follow the young girl down the long corridor as she began eagerly skipping down the hall, not caring much if we were coming or not.
I fell into step beside Ezrian, who was walking at a brisk pace, his expression blank as he glanced around the surrounding walls.
After a moment of awkward silence, he turned to me.
#HugRikerSquad
October 17, 2023 at 12:24 pm #159239You’re good girl!!
I’ll try to write Ez’s POV sometime this week!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:October 23, 2023 at 4:01 pm #159917And several weeks later from last post…..
EZRIAN
They started down the hallway together, the young Kate girl in front and the rest following close behind. Ezrian’s eyes darted across their surroundings, analyzing. His mind seemed to have quieted, giving him a reprieve.
Eventually, his gaze landed on the boy walking next to him, Tyler. The clothing he wore was strange, as was the attire of the others. Ezrian’s eyes narrowed and he asked, “What region are you from?”
Tyler cast a look at him. “Oh, uh, northern Florida.”
Ezrian nodded, trying to hide his confusion. Florida? Where in the agonies was that? He rarely left the palace, but he still had a basic geographical knowledge. At least, he’d assumed so.
“How far away do you think those voices were that you heard Kate?” He heard Jack ask his sister up ahead.
“Hmm, I don’t know. But I’m sure we’ll find them soon.” She said confidently.
Then Ezrian’s attention was again drawn to Tyler when he said, “What about you, where are you from?” He debated answering for a moment but soon conceded.
“I live in Duvaal, a large city in the Sultaian desert.” He didn’t feel a need to omit any information. He could just take the boy’s memories of their conversation if necessary. Still, he watched Tyler’s reaction, wondering if he would even recognize the destination names.
So I’m not really sure what should happen next đ Any ideas?
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:October 23, 2023 at 7:05 pm #159961@princessachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6
Why yes. I always have ideas. They just might not be good ones.
- They could find a way up onto the castle roof or something.
- They could get trapped in a room with two doors where whenever you go out one door you end up coming in the other one.
- We could be nice to our characters for once and let them stumble across some food.
- The voices Kate heard could turn out to be tiny people in the walls or maybe two enchanted sets of knights’ armor having a nice chat. Or just another group of charries.
- They could just keep walking and talking.
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
October 23, 2023 at 7:07 pm #159964Whoops. Tag.
@princesachronicle22âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
October 23, 2023 at 9:52 pm #159982Is anyone willing to welcome a character I have who I want to develop? I have one who really deserves some attention, and I’m only going to join here if invited.
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October 23, 2023 at 11:23 pm #160035@loopylin @princesachronicle22
We did have our group of charries, me, Min, and Freedom. It just kinda slowed down. I say we find food. But idk who else actually likes describing a meal đ đ€Ș Just me??
âEverything is a mountainâ
October 24, 2023 at 12:19 am #160045You’re totally welcome to join our group if @princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6 are alright with it đ
You just gotta be patient though since it’s a bit slow moving right now just so you know
Are you saying our groups should meet?
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
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