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September 7, 2023 at 2:19 pm #155744
@freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper
Clement is like 5’10” I think, he is 31.
Reuben steps forward, facing the newcomer with a small smile. “I’m not entirely sure what this place is…other than it’s a castle, but me and my brothers have been here before. I’m Reuben, those are my brothers Leo and Jakob, and this is our new…uh, friend, Sebastian. What’s your name?”
“I’m Clement.” Clement shakes Rueben’s hand firmly.
“Sebastien, is it?” He turns to the short angry boy. “You look interesting. Tell me a bit about yourself, where are you from?”
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
September 7, 2023 at 2:21 pm #155745Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings Ok, good to know! 😉
Now Clement is the oldest one around! XD
September 7, 2023 at 3:13 pm #155746@mineralizedwritings Great! Hope he isn’t fazed too easily XD @freedomwriter76
Sebastian
“Sebastian, is it? You look interesting. Tell me a bit about yourself, where are you from?”
The young men all turned their eyes on Sebastian, waiting for his reply.
He took a deep breath, and put his hands in his pockets, regaining his composure with a curious smile. “I see I’ve been singled out. I’m flattered… I come from a glorified megalopolis in an alternate dimension, as I told these extremely kind and considerate gentlemen. And now we’re here, pouring hearts out within the first ten minutes.”
He jazzed his hands in the air. “Togetherness! Yay…”
“Everything is a mountain”
September 7, 2023 at 4:01 pm #155748Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@whalekeeper oh Seb…😂😂
September 8, 2023 at 2:46 pm #155791@whalekeeper Oh don’t worry, he’s not XD
“I see I’ve been singled out. I’m flattered… I come from a glorified megalopolis in an alternate dimension, as I told these extremely kind and considerate gentlemen. And now we’re here, pouring hearts out within the first ten minutes.”
He jazzed his hands in the air. “Togetherness! Yay…”
“Togetherness indeed.” Clement smirks. “One always benefits from travel partners.”
“Anyways, I would love to speak with the owner of this marvelous place, if one is found.”
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
September 8, 2023 at 4:00 pm #155797Your character sounds cute! I’m excited to rp with him!
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
September 9, 2023 at 1:24 pm #155824@freedomwriter76 what in the world……
my emails say you just wrote an rp but it doesn’t show up at all on the forum…..
weird…
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
September 9, 2023 at 3:21 pm #155867Oh my goodness I love Seb ❤😂❤😂
Thanks girl!! Same! Your charrie Cody is adorbs ❤❤
#HugRikerSquad
September 9, 2023 at 7:51 pm #155911Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h It’s on the previous page 😊
September 9, 2023 at 9:20 pm #155915Thxxx ❤
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings
(Don’t worry Min, I know 😂)
Sebastian
“Anyways, I would love to speak with the owner of this marvelous place, if one is found,” the older man said, eyes sparkling.
Seb turned to face the other men, hands out of his pockets and arms outstretched, as if about to conduct an orchestra. “Gentlemen – this is your cue.”
“Everything is a mountain”
September 9, 2023 at 10:25 pm #155919@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76
(Oh boi what’s happening)
“Gentlemen – this is your cue.”
Clement stands back, dumbfounded, as the boy stands in front of him, arms outstretched. He stuffs his hands into his pockets, leaning back nonchalantly as if merely waiting for a show to start.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
September 10, 2023 at 2:46 pm #155957@freedomwriter76 ok thanks!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
September 10, 2023 at 3:00 pm #155959@freedomwriter76 idk maybe this could start a bit more conversation? @godlyfantasy12
Feather
“My name is Jennie.” Riker’s mother explained. “Feather…hmm, never heard a name like that before, dear, but it is beautiful.”
Feather smiled. “Thank you. In my world, Crosshair and I both grew up as soldiers…..we weren’t given names to begin with, we only had numerical designations. My commander named me–he said the beauty of the feather reflected the qualities he saw in me.”
She looked over at her husband, who was toward the front of the group and trying not to look at Felix beside him. “Cross was given his name by his brothers. He’s the best shot I’ve ever seen…..and that’s from someone who’s worked with a lot of other snipers.”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
September 10, 2023 at 4:38 pm #155981Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Jennie
Jennie smiled gently.
Poor child, not having a regular name from birth…it was sad that some people didn’t see the true value of human life.
“You both seem like a perfect match…do you have a family?”
Oh, she wasn’t even answering any questions herself!
Jennie chuckled softly. “Oh, my dear…I should answer a question now. Here, let me show you my family first…I love them so much, more than anything else other than my Father in heaven.” She pulled a photo from her purse, and carefully, making sure the edges were pressed down, she handed it to Feather. “There is my family…beautiful, but I may just be bragging.”
A photo several months old, it portrayed Jennie and the family she loved most.
Jennie, Angelina, and Iris all stood in the middle row, with Jennie in the very middle. Angelina had one arm wrapped around Jennie’s shoulders, laughing wholeheartedly, Iris held Eli on her hip, her other arm wrapped around Jennie, Jonathan stood in the very front with Jennie’s gentle hands on his shoulders, and Franz and Riker, taller than all of the women, stood in the back, Naja on Riker’s hip, giggling at something Riker had said to make everyone smile big smiles.
Except for Franz…her husband rarely smiled.
Jennie pointed at each person in the photograph Feather now held. “That’s my husband Franz, you know Riker, there’s my daughter, Angelina, my daughter-in-law, Iris, and my three beautiful grandbabies, Jonathan, Naja, and Eli…”
She missed them so much…she hadn’t heard from Iris in so long…she missed her grandbabies.
So much.
September 10, 2023 at 4:54 pm #155991Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@whalekeeper Seb! 🤣🤣 Jakob isn’t going to have the patience for Seb, I’m afraid XD btw, I was wondering…how tall IS Seb, btw, lol?
Leo
Sebastian stepped forward, arms outstretched. “Gentlemen – this is your cue.”
Jakob bristled, Reuben merely looked to Leo for help, and Clement stepped back, shoving his hands in his pockets, lapsing into silence.
Leo crossed his arms and rolled his eyes. “It’s not like we know who owns this place, and we certainly don’t own it ourselves.”
Sebastian smirked. “I thought you’ve been here before.”
Jakob cussed and stepped towards Sebastian, towering over the boy. “Why don’t you just shut it!? I’m getting tired of your…antics.“
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