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August 25, 2023 at 11:13 am #154690Anonymous
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@keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 Finally getting back to this đ đ
Alsooooooo, I was thinking about adding another character to this group (even tho it’s big) that I haven’t had in a RP before, who would be a good alternative to most of the mean people here, and another woman for Feather to talk to that isn’t evil lady XD
Would y’all mind?
Riker
âPaxton? Riker? Crosshair? WhoâŚ..who are you with?â
Riker turned to see a woman he hadn’t seen in a long time but that he knew.
Crosshair’s wife.
Crosshair stepped forward. “Feather!?”
Feather glanced at the others. “…Who are they?”
Felix stepped forward, stepping in front of Riker.
Riker backed away, still carrying Paxton…afraid to even let him go for a second.
“I am Felix Baumann of the SS, that is my wife, Frida, my younger brother Hans, and one of the men under my command, Fin.”
August 25, 2023 at 4:22 pm #154732@freedomwriter76 Go for it!! She’ll like someone to talk to lol.
Feather
âI am Felix Baumann of the SS, that is my wife, Frida, my younger brother Hans, and one of the men under my command, Fin.â One of the new men stepped in front of Riker.
He looked cold…..Like an Imperial officer, almost. Feather wasn’t surprised that Crosshair was avoiding looking at him, or the others.
The one introduced as Fin didn’t seem like the rest, though–he seemed a bit like Howzer had been. A man with a heart oriented toward good, even though he was surrounded by evil.
Interesting….
She’d have to ask him what his story was.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
August 25, 2023 at 5:15 pm #154734Imma RP as Pax finally XD
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Paxton opened his eyes at the sound of a familiar voice. His eyes lit upon the bright figure that he recognized to be Feather, Crosshairâs wife. He lifted his chin from Rikerâs neck, expression brightening slightly at the familiarity of her gaze and smile.
She reminded him so much of Josie.
One of the men of the group, FelixâŚthe nasty ladyâs husband, stepped forward and started to introduce his group.
Paxton hunkered back against Rikerâs chest, leaning his head against his neck, still staring at Feather. She was very pretty, a sight for sore eyes, much like his sister, and Josie, and Luna.
Paxton fiddled with the back of Rikerâs collar, making a few humming noises as he did so.
His tummy grumbled. Loud.
A few looked his way, making the lad blush slightly, burying his face into Rikerâs shirt. Frida eyed him with disdain, lifting her nose at him.
A gentle hand ran over his head, ruffling his hair. âYou hungry, Paxton?â Riker asked, voice soft.
The boy nodded into his shoulder, stomach feeling empty. His head buzzed a bit from hunger, throbbing slightly.
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#ProtectSebAugust 25, 2023 at 6:04 pm #154740@godlyfantasy12 aww Paxâs descriptions of Feather are so sweet.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
August 26, 2023 at 3:39 pm #154783âŚShould I join this?
I mean, itâs THE KP roleplay. And I AM loyal forever â¤ď¸
I just havenât gotten around to it yet⌠?
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August 26, 2023 at 5:02 pm #154789Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@whalekeeper Go for it, girl đ the more the merrier!!!
@keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 Aww, Pax!! đđOk y’all, I’ll introduce the new charrie soon enough đ
but for now….
Fin
Fin glanced at Riker, who was still holding the small boy, Paxton. “…Is he hungry?”
Riker nodded. “Yessir, he is. There may be a kitchen close by…but I’m not for certain.”
“Then we can find one. Nothing is too hard to not do for a hungry child, hmm?” Fin mused with a smile directed Paxton’s way.
Frida huffed. “Like we should go through all of that trouble for one hungry child.”
Fin turned on the woman in an instant, still holding a smile…though Paxton deserved a smile much more than she did.
‘Ah, forgive me…I was much like them once…so stupid for me to forget, even for a moment. Christ died for them, same as he died for me.’
“Children are gifts from heaven, Frida…and should be treated and treasured as such.”
Frida’s eyes glared and her nose flared. “I didn’t ask for your input, Fin.”
“Some children are…drains on society, Fin,” Hans waved a hand in dismissal, “and we shouldn’t have to go through so much trouble for one hungry child.”
“Children obviously mean nothing to you. Stay here if you please, but I will aid Riker in finding food for this hungry child, even if you refuse. Stay here and waste your time drowning in your pride.”
(man…never seen him get so mad đ)
“That’s enough, MĂźller.” Felix snapped. “We will all travel together, and if you wish to waste some of your time by finding food for one hungry child, then so be it…but do not snap on my brother and especially my wife, or I will relieve you of your duty and you will be sent to another battalion and surrendered for disciplinary action, do I make myself clear?”
Fin feigned a smile and nodded. “Of course, sir,” he turned on his heel and whispered to Riker, “let’s lead the way…and find some food for this sweet child.”
August 26, 2023 at 5:51 pm #154796@freedomwriter76
AHA! Go ahead Fin! Give them a piece of their medicine.
I like this guy, if you an’t tell.
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Fork the GorkAugust 26, 2023 at 5:54 pm #154797@freedomwriter76
Cool!! â¤ď¸
Would someone please give me the basics of this setting/what the characters are doing?
âEverything is a mountainâ
August 26, 2023 at 7:42 pm #154800Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@whalekeeper Of course! â¤ď¸
soooo, most of the characters are just kinda wandering around…heh, lol
You can join an already made group (so long as youâve got everyoneâs permission đ) or make a new group where other people can join in, and your group can kinda do whatever you want (within reason, and within the rules, of course)
but here’s the gist of the setting:
So, this RP is taking place ONLY on castle grounds, an old medieval castle that characters somehow keep getting sent to. The RP can only be inside the castle or outside the castle, but in the gardens. Basically, as long as itâs on castle grounds, itâs allowed.
Another thing to note is that this castle doesnât honestly have a map, so you can make whatever crazy rooms you want!
We have a portrait room where the portraits of everyone that are in the castle and have been in the castle in the past (tho these are covered by red curtains) are on the walls, a mirror room with a bunch of mirrors, and others that I canât remember.
anything else you need to know? <3
August 26, 2023 at 7:43 pm #154801Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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it’s a magical castle, btw
August 26, 2023 at 8:05 pm #154802@freedomwriter76
Thank you!!
What are the different groups doing right now? Just so I get a general idea of where people are at XD
Oh, and I’m guessing there are already-set meals and bedrooms (although the bedrooms appear magically for the different characters)? And you can invent different, cool activities to mess around with? Like archery, swordfighting, magical stuff, etc?
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August 27, 2023 at 3:03 pm #154815@whalekeeper We don’t really talk much about normal life in here, lol, but I’m certain there is all that! You can literally invent whatever.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
August 27, 2023 at 3:27 pm #154818@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Feather
Paxton’s stomach growled loud enough for the others to notice.
“You hungry, Paxton?” Riker asked. Paxton nodded, barely perceptible.
Fin noticed and asked where he could get some food.
“There may be a kitchen close byâŚbut Iâm not certain.â Riker told him, looking around.
“I remember looking for one as well.” Feather spoke up, but she was drowned out by Frida’s disdainful snort of âLike we should go through all of that trouble for one hungry child.â
Fin protested at this, and Felix insisted that if he questioned them, he could very well be relieved of his military position and punished severely.
Feather stiffened and looked toward Crosshair, knowing he’d heard that. His hand gripped his rifle (which she’d given back to him), knuckles turning white, but he didn’t make his usual death threat at them.
Interesting, he usually would have something to add to this conversation…..
Maybe he just didn’t want another Hitchens incident?
Crosshair
âSome children areâŚdrains on society, Fin, and we shouldnât have to go through so much trouble for one hungry child.â Hans growled.
âChildren obviously mean nothing to you. Stay here if you please, but I will aid Riker in finding food for this hungry child, even if you refuse. Stay here and waste your time drowning in your pride.â Fin snapped back.
Crosshair wanted to snarl at Hans too, but he held his tongue, waiting to see if someone else could defuse the situation before he made it worse.
“Thatâs enough, MĂźller.â Felix snapped. âWe will all travel together, and if you wish to waste some of your time by finding food for one hungry child, then so be itâŚbut do not snap on my brother and especially my wife, or I will relieve you of your duty and you will be sent to another battalion and surrendered for disciplinary action, do I make myself clear?â
“Of course, sir.” Fin said, then turned to Riker and began discussing where to look for food.
“You leave Paxton alone.” Crosshair was a bit startled to find the voice coming from himself. From his peripheral vision, Feather gave him a slight smile.
The group turned to look at him. “What?” Felix growled.
“He’s likely seen as much trauma as the three of you combined.” Crosshair hissed at them, his confidence returning. “Leave him alone…or as I’ve likely said before, you’ll have me to deal with.”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
August 27, 2023 at 4:10 pm #154820Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@whalekeeper soooo, I think pretty much only 2 groups are active right now, heh đ
There’s the group me, Godly, and Keilah are doing…they’re just in a random room and are about to go looking for food
Then there’s the group with me, Arcane, and Princesa, with N’Nesha, Uvah, and Bucky Barnes, and they’re about to fight Viola, the villain looking for Bucky
otherwise, this RP is veryyyyyy inactive, heh.
there are no set rooms, bedrooms, etc…everyone’s basically just trying to find ways out of the castle, find each other, find their way home, avoid villains, and everyone has to find their own food…haha, so yeahhh, nothing really set or anything, lol
August 27, 2023 at 4:27 pm #154821Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h you get ’em, Crosshair!!
Felix
“Heâs likely seen as much trauma as the three of you combined,” Crosshair hissed, “Leave him aloneâŚor as Iâve likely said before, youâll have me to deal with.â
Hans’ coal eyes shot daggers. “Excuse me!? You know absolutely nothing about us, you-!”
Felix held up a hand, signaling for his younger brother to quiet, and silence fell.
Crosshair did know nothing.
Most people didn’t.
Felix kept his past wrapped away, just as it was meant to be.
It wasn’t something that deserved to be acknowledged…by anyone.
DNA didn’t make a family…and Felix’s brothers were the only people in his direct family that he had ever loved.
His mother, and especially his father, didn’t deserve his love.
“Hans is right…you know nothing about us. We will walk around and search for some food, but you will not lay a hand on anyone…especially my wife. There is no need for violence.”
Footsteps sounded, and Felix turned.
A woman slowly and carefully walked into the room, her almost completely gray hair in a bun at the nape of her neck, wearing a simple dress, coat, and flats. A silver crucifixion cross hung from her neck, and she looked around in confusion. “Where am I? Have I…intruded? I dearly apologize.”
Hans turned, and with a smile, he faced the woman. “Ah, Jennie Schind…I did not expect you to be here.”
Riker’s dark blue eyes widened. “Mama!?”
Riker ran to the woman, Paxton still in his embrace, throwing one of his arms around the woman that stood at least a foot shorter than himself. “Oh, Mama…I’m so happy to see you.”
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