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July 4, 2023 at 5:11 pm #149493
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Finally getting around to this!
Crosshair
Fin turned to him. โShould we get going now? Who wants to lead the way?โ
“I’ve been leading various groups for a long time here.” Crosshair told him, stepping forward. “And besides, Riker has Paxton to take care of.”
He stood silently for a few seconds. What was the best path to take?
The air was less stale this way…..
Wind current.
There was a way out.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
July 4, 2023 at 6:11 pm #149496Hey!
I’m curious – never been on here before, but what’s going on?
#ProtectAdolinKholin
July 4, 2023 at 6:18 pm #149497@whalekeeper It’s one of the roleplays!
Basically you take a character from a WIP (or a fanfic, like me) and stick them in the castle for others to interact with them. Just make sure to stay within the outer ramparts of the castle. (Some other people could explain it so much better than me, so….I’ll wait for them to explain some more.)
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
July 17, 2023 at 3:13 pm #151231Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 Sooo…I know Princesa just went…who’s turn is it next in our group?? I can’t remember ๐๐
@mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 and where were we with our group? I think everyone was beginning to meet Steve, but idk…lol XXD
@keilah-h @godlyFinally getting around to this ๐คฆ๐ปโโ๏ธ
Riker
“There’s a way out.”
Riker raised an eyebrow at Crosshair, just as he felt a tiny gust of wind.
Riker held Paxton closer and nodded. “There is.”
Fin smiled. “Then shall we go that way? Crosshair, feel free to lead the way…we will merely follow.”
July 17, 2023 at 4:29 pm #151237@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Ok, we’re ready to start this back up again!!
Crosshair
“There is.” Riker sensed it too.
Fin smiled at them. “Then shall we go that way? Feel free to lead the way…..we’ll merely follow.”
“Fine with me.” Crosshair stepped into the hallway, a small flashlight lighting up their path.
Before long, he could see light at the end.
There was a closed door. He shoved it open, and light streamed in, making a few of the group shade their eyes with their hands.
They were back in the courtyard.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
August 7, 2023 at 3:17 pm #153229Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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time to resurrect the Character Castle…
there we go XXD
Fin
A courtyard…and a beautiful one at that.
“We’re in the courtyard…” Riker glanced around, still holding Paxton, “so we found a way out.”
“Good. It was quite stuffy in there.” Frida mused.
Oh, something was stuffy alright…but it was a person, not a place.
Ah, Lord, forgive me.
Fin smiled gently. “…Maybe we should find food somewhere…I wouldn’t imagine that no one is hungry.”
August 7, 2023 at 3:32 pm #153235@freedomwriter76 ooh yay!!
Crosshair
Fin smiled. “Maybe we should find food somewhere….I wouldn’t imagine that no one is hungry.”
“Not me.” Crosshair told him. “I’m perfectly fine…..But there are fruit trees toward the other side for the rest of you.” He gestured toward the grove he’d been in before, which was thankfully far away. “If there are other characters there…..don’t give them any trouble. Leave them alone if you can.”
He didn’t see them, and was sure they’d disappeared, but he wasn’t about to break up a fight.
If anything, he’d only make it worse.
(heyyy u two good with me adding Feather back into the group? I’m not sure how, though.)
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
August 7, 2023 at 8:18 pm #153287@keilah-h sure! Iโm sure pax would enjoy her company!
@freedomwriter76 not entirely sure what to RP rn so Iโll let Keilah put feather back in first lol
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebAugust 8, 2023 at 4:30 pm #153345@godlyfantasy12 ok!
@freedomwriter76
Feather
How….?
She’d been walking in a straight line almost the whole time…and here she was, back at the courtyard.
This place was still as strange as she remembered it.
This was a different exit, though. The fruit trees were toward the other side of the wide, grassy space.
She didn’t see any characters there, however. They must’ve disappeared.
Probably a good thing, too…..They were probably terrified after that encounter.
A voice made her perk up. “……If there are other characters there, donโt give them any trouble. Leave them alone if you can.”
Crosshair’s voice?
She followed it to its source.
He was there!
And so was Paxton. She hadn’t seen him in a while, and was glad he was okay.
And Riker, who she knew from the time before this, when they’d fought the castle’s ruler.
Most of the other characters looked hostile, though, except for one, who seemed friendly.
She approached them cautiously. “Paxton? Riker? Crosshair? Who…..who are you with?”
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
August 10, 2023 at 10:57 am #153564Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@thearcaneaxiom hey, just curious, do you want to RP for our group with Princesa? It’s okay if not, I just wanted to ask ๐ฅฐ
haven’t seen you around in a while, how are you doing? <3
August 10, 2023 at 12:25 pm #153582@princesachronicle22 @freedomwriter76
I know, I’ve been really bad with the RP, sorry๐ I’ve been doing alright, it’s been quite busy, I’ve trying to get into freelance business lately, so that’s been taking a lot of my time. How about you?
N’nesha
Uvah sneezed, slamming her head into the woman, causing her to stumble back. “Run!” she cried, bolting.
Neshe: Not what I had in mind, but I’m with Uvah!ย
Nele: Uhhh, what even happened just then?
I darted down the hall, and I could hear Bucky’s feet close behind. “Do you think she’s conscious?” I panted, but in clear one-speak.
Bucky hesitated “… likely…” he finally said. In that moment a defining bang sounded, as something the size of an insect wizzed passed us at such an astounding speed I’ve never thought possible. I looked to the end of the hall. The insect thing crashed into the brick, cracking it.
Neshe: Keep running!
Nele: Whelp, we’re dead!
We all barely turned the corner before another speed bug came. Uvah seemed to be frantically searching through her bag for something. Both me and Bucky were focused on our running.
Neshe: Wait, I think I see something at the end of the hallway…
Nele: What is that… ahhh!
He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
August 10, 2023 at 7:59 pm #153637Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@thearcaneaxiom You’re okay!!! Life is busy, I totally understand ๐ Ooh, that sounds really interesting!
I’m doing pretty well! Getting ready for school to start back in a little more than a week, thinking about possibly joining 4-H (idk if you know what that is, bc I didn’t for a while, lol) this year, taking care of animals, things like that ๐
@princesachronicle22 @arcaneI’ll to RP sometime soon…trying to think about what they run into in the hall, lol!
August 12, 2023 at 2:39 pm #153797@freedomwriter76
Oh that’s cool!!
Lol, yeah I’m not sure what should be at the end of the hall either. I’m excited to see what happens next though!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:August 14, 2023 at 11:52 am #153849Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom
So, after thinking about it for days now…I’m just gonna have it be something simple at the end of the hall ๐ ๐
Bucky
Bucky ran with Neshe & Nele, Uvah close behind.
He tried to ease his breathing. It wasn’t because he was running, no, he was used to running for long distances…it was the fear. Not necessarily of Viola…the fear of becoming what he thought he would never be again.
He couldn’t become a monster again.
Bullets whizzed past them, and Uvah frantically searched through the bag she carried.
They turned a corner, and Bucky suddenly looked ahead. There was a tall pillar in the middle of the hallway…barely visible to a normal eye…but Bucky’s were trained.
“Look out!” He cried, and he threw himself forward, knocking both himself and Neshe & Nele to the stone floor with a thud.
Bucky groaned and rubbed his head. That had hurt.
Viola was getting closer.
Neshe & Nele laid on the floor, stunned.
Bucky clenched his metal fist. Standing down…being afraid…he couldn’t…wouldn’t…do it anymore. If Steve or one of the other people he cared about were in danger…he wouldn’t back down, would he?
Bucky rose to his feet. He grabbed the second gun he carried on his back, the first one having been left behind, and turned off the safety. He stepped forward, standing beside Uvah.
Fist clenched, determination coursing through his veins, Bucky stood still, waiting for Viola. “…Let me handle this.”
August 15, 2023 at 11:56 am #153961@freedomwriter76
Awww Buckkyyy!!!!
UVAH
She panted, legs throbbing slightly from the sprint which her body was protesting against. I have an herb for that. She thought, but dismissed it as unimportant in the moment as she hurredly scooped up some items that had fallen from her bag when Bucky had saved them from crashing into that pillar.
More bangs sounded from the woman’s odd gun, but Uvah could still hear her loud heels echoing against the hard floor in each bullets pause. Hands clenching in fear, Uvah thought of her fiance back at her home region of Veynavere. What would he do if something happened to her?
She barely managed to blink back the sudden tears that arose.
Looking down to distract herself and search for any more items on the floor, Uvah finally saw the knockout powder she had been searching for so furiously. Unfortunatley, it was clear across the other side of the hall, Viola would reach the spot at any moment.
Uvah stood, limbs shaking faintly as her heart sank. Then Bucky stood up next to her, and she heard a click of something in his hand. Looking up as he started to speak, Uvah saw a fierce determination in his eyes. “…Let me handle this.” He said, and she realized that she trusted him. Stranger or not.
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
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