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June 14, 2023 at 2:18 pm #147731
And what is eurochlydon? Why did they need to sacrifice someone to it? (I get why him specifically, because they hate him, but why anyone?)
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
June 14, 2023 at 2:45 pm #147736@keilah-h the Eurochlydon is an “all-powerful” sea monster that the Icari plan on using to destroy the other two Fae kingdom (the Mer, who were once the Nymphs, and the Dryads) the only way he can be awakened is if someone with all the right pre requisites (dunno a better word lol) is sacrificed to him.
I haven’t figured out all the details, but somehow thru this sacrifice they also gain control of the beast. Basically whoever sacrifices Paxton, controls the beast in a way.
Im trying to decide if it’s an Icari prophecy as well. Either way when Paxton is born, it’s also one of the reasons he’s not just thrown out/killed immediately. They need him (tho not unscathed)
However, the sacrifice doesn’t go as planned because Ara and the gang rescue the little boy, but not before the beast gets a taste of his blood. And the beast won’t be satisfied until his thirst for it is quenched.
If someone sacrifices Paxton, they gain control of the beast. If paxton sacrifices himself no one gains control and the beast goes back into slumber.
Ara sacrificed herself, so the beast would’ve gone back into slumber, harming no one else.
Thankfully Ara is rescued. Surprisingly, by Corvina.
The beast was “supposedly” all Powerful, but Corvina is able to defeat it, (I’m thinking maybe she commands the darkness from within it and literally implodes it or something)
She claims she did it thinking “Paxton was inside.” But…will we ever really know?
(she has a very fond spot for Paxton….)
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#ProtectSebJune 14, 2023 at 2:49 pm #147737Also…once the quest is done, and they all go to A’Grend with Ara, Ara’s parents officially take Paxton in as their son. He gets the family he deserves and becomes a prince 😭
And it’s beautiful because you see how it was even working together before/was in God’s plan, because Ara’s mother always wanted a son.
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#ProtectSebJune 14, 2023 at 4:41 pm #147771@freedomwriter76 u wanna RP next??
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#ProtectSebJune 14, 2023 at 4:54 pm #147775Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 Sure! 🥰 @keilah-h Good idea Crosshair; staying away from Hans 😂
me not liking him doesn’t make it easier to kill Hans…but it must happenbut anywhoooooo XD
Riker
“R-Riker…we, we l-leave…?”
Riker smiled down at Paxton, continuing to hold him close. He slowly nodded. “We need to find a way to maybe find some other people…are there people you’re looking for?”
Paxton slowly nodded.
Riker smiled. “Then we need to look for them. You, me and Crosshair, and Fin, we can-”
“We’re all coming, Schind.” Felix interrupted.
Riker looked up and met his gaze. He slowly nodded and turned his gaze back to Paxton. “Whoever you’re looking for, Paxton…we’ll find them, alright?”
“Exactly. No need to be afraid.” Fin said, with a small smile directed Paxton’s way.
June 14, 2023 at 5:02 pm #147778Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h they likely won’t join till later, but I decided to add these 2 to the castle, and they may join Riker and them. idk yet tho, maybe they’ll join someone else 🙂
Lilith
She walked the length of the windowsill of the massive, stained glass window.
“Lilith, careful! You may want to come down from there…you might get hurt.”
Lilith laughed and turned, her shoulder-length, bobbed dark brown hair bouncing with her. “I got myself up here, but truthfully…I don’t even know how I did it,” she giggled, “and I may hurt myself if I try to get down on my own.”
She loved climbing up on things, having fun.
Her father said she was adventurous.
Her mother said she was stupid.
But at least she knew how to have fun! She loved her mother dearly, but she was a very strict and even solemn woman. She knew why. Her mother had been through a lot of pain, and Lilith tried to understand…but some days, it was really hard.
“Then how are you supposed to get down?”
Lilith turned to her boyfriend with a smile and a wink. “I think I may need a knight to catch me.”
He grinned and reached up for her.
Lilith smiled brightly and jumped, landing straight in her boyfriend’s arms. She looked up at him and smiled. “What a handsome knight.”
He bowed, kissing the back of her hand. “And what a beautiful princess, your highness.”
Lilith smiled and gently pulled her hand away. She shook her head and let out a fake disappointed sigh. “A shameless flirt. For shame, Dietrich, for shame.”
He gave her a grin and gave her a brief kiss. “You’re a menace, but how I love you.”
June 14, 2023 at 5:09 pm #147780@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
MEANIES!
Paxton
Paxton met the man named Fin’s eyes. He looked nice…like Riker….
But the others…
The lady…he didn’t like her…
Not one bit…
He sniffed, shaking his head. “Don’t l-like…d-don’t like…” He looked at Frida from the corner of his eyes. It was almost like his own mother standing there…eyeing him…
Minus the wings, of course. But she didn’t need those to look just as devilish. He hiccuped, remembering the last time he’d been alone with his mother.
The wild look in her eyes.
Remembering when she and his brothers had found him in this same castle…when Frida had tried to help her take him back…tried to take him away…
“D-don’t w-want go! W-won’t g-go back!” He shifted, reaching up and wrapping an arm around Riker’s neck, burying his face into the man’s shoulder.
“Shh, Shh, no one’s going to hurt you,” Riker whispered. “No one’s going to take you…I promise…you’re…you’re just gonna have to trust me…alright…?” He nuzzled the boy’s hair, holding him a bit tighter.
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#ProtectSebJune 14, 2023 at 5:11 pm #147781@freedomwriter76 WAIT WHAT?!?!
AND HER NAME IS LILITH?! I had to do like three double takes when I saw the name XD
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#ProtectSebJune 14, 2023 at 5:15 pm #147785Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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June 14, 2023 at 5:17 pm #147786Bruh….if Dietrich and Lilith join Riker and them my poor Pax is gonna be scarred 😅 cuz uhhh…
Dietrich hasn’t apologized yet in this RP and Pax doesn’t know he’s turned good yet….
And the name Lilith….
and they’re forced to travel with Frida, Felix and Hans….
I have a feeling Pax will try to run
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#ProtectSebJune 15, 2023 at 12:57 pm #147880@godlyfantasy12 ohhhh that makes sense!!
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Crosshair
“W–we leave?” Paxton stuttered, looking up at Riker.
Riker nodded. “We need to find a way to maybe find some other people…are there people you’re looking for?”
Paxton nodded.
“Then we need to look for them. You, me and Crosshair, and Fin, we can–” Riker was cut off by a snarl of “We’re all coming.” from Felix.
He didn’t reply. “Whoever you’re looking for, Paxton…we’ll find them, all right?”
“No need to be afraid.” Fin smiled at Paxton.
The boy ignored him, however, burying his face in Riker’s shoulder again as he noticed Frida looking at him. The older man held him tightly, whispering words of comfort.
Crosshair decided to stay out of it for the most part. Any comfort he’d try to give Paxton would likely end badly.
Plus, he didn’t want to take his eyes off the others, especially Hans.
He glared at Felix and them. “You can come with us…….but that doesn’t mean I trust you. You’re going to have to earn that…..and your track record so far won’t help you.”
They glared back at him, but he didn’t care.
If he had been in charge, he’d have told them to leave. But he wasn’t…..really, nobody was here…..
So they were stuck together for now.
Thinking about that made him wonder where Feather was……
Was she okay?
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
June 16, 2023 at 4:33 pm #148008Ummm. I just read the rules for this. So do I just add some characters in? If so, can you tell me all about your characters? I would love to learn more about them!
"Would you kindly...?"
June 25, 2023 at 6:12 pm #148919Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@acancello Of course you can join! Just be sure to introduce your characters, and if you want to join a group, make sure everyone in the group is alright with you joining, that’s all! 🙂
@princesachronicle22 you wanna RP as Uvah in our group with Arcane? 🥰
@mineralizedwritings (yes, Tony called Loki “reindeer games” XD)and yep, Steve’s uniform has stripes and stuff…it is probably this one (his Age of Ultron/Civil War outfit)👇
@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6And yes, Min, we need some conflict…anyone have any ideas/villains? XD
Steve
“You… like America?”
Steve turned to the boy who introduced himself as Tauren…not Hurricane Hair, as Tony had called him.
“Uh, yeah.”
“Maybe a little too much.” Tony added with a wink.Steve rolled his eyes. “Yes, I love America.” He glanced back at the limp figure on the floor. “Do I want to know what happened here?”
June 28, 2023 at 4:24 pm #149073Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Finally getting around to this 😂😅🤦♀️
Riker
“You can come with us…….but that doesn’t mean I trust you. You’re going to have to earn that…..and your track record so far won’t help you.” Crosshair said, with a glare directed at Hans, Felix, and Frida, who all merely glared back.
Fin glanced at Hans, Felix, and Frida; he rolled his eyes to the ceiling, but only Riker saw him.
Riker held Paxton tighter.
He didn’t feel safe, letting him go at all around Hans, Felix, and Frida.
So, he held Paxton closer. “Don’t worry, Paxton…I won’t let anyone hurt you…I promise.”
Fin faced Hans and the others, and Crosshair, with a smile. “Should we get going now? Who wants to lead the way?”
June 30, 2023 at 4:28 pm #149154@freedomwriter76 @thearcaneaxiom
Sure thing! Sorry its taken so long!
UVAH
Her eyes were wide, form trapped by the iron solid arm that the woman wasn’t using to hold the gun. “…I will get off of Uvah and leave both her and you, Neshe & Nele, alone, if you allow Bucky here to come with me, without a fight, and only without a fight.” Viola said, and Uvah could just hear the sick smile in her voice.
Neshe Nele watched, her earlier apprehension seemingly doubled, her gaze intent on the device Viola contunied to press into her temple. Bucky just stared at them hands raising and unmasked fear blazing in his eyes. How had Uvah missed that before?
“You don’t seem to have his best interest in mind.” Uvah said, uncharacteristically bold. She simply couldn’t stand the look on Bucky’s face. Her fingers twitched, itching to reach into her satchel. If I could just reach the knockout powder…
In response to her words, Viola’s grip tightened and Uvah felt the device press harder into her skin. “What I do with him is none of your concern.” She said in a smooth hiss. “Either be smart and take my offer… or pay the price with your life.”
Uvah sucked in her panic, suppressing it. She could remain calm. She always stayed calm. Being surrounded by often hysterical patients had tought her how to keep her cool. It didn’t stop the sweat from leaking down her brow however. Deep breaths Uvah. Think rationally. How do you get out of this?
“My paitence won’t last forever you know.” Viola said eventually. Uvah wasn’t so sure, the sadistic woman seemed to be enjoying this.
Suddenly, Uvah’s nose started wrinkling. Then she sneezed, the force knocking her head backward and directly into Viola’s face. The woman stumbled seeming to trip on her painfully high heels. Uvah blinked, confused for a moment. Then she tore away, not sparing the time to dig through her bag for the powder.
“Run!” She yelled to the others, surging forward.
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