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May 11, 2023 at 3:08 am #142918
Does anyone in the smoke actually want to meet Maddox and Ace, or should I have them just leave once they realize that Dante has slipped away?
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May 11, 2023 at 2:44 pm #142940Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@loopylin uhhh…i think most of my charries already have a group, and I AIN’T leaving Steffi/Aiden with those villains…gotta keep them safe ❤️XD
someone else may have someone that could meet up with them tho…or they could move on and meet up with someone else, idk 😅
Steve
Steve looked down at each of the twins. Good thing they wore different colored hoodies, else he wouldn’t be able to tell them apart very well.
He gave Ellie a soft smile. “I’m pretty sure we’re safe now,” he turned to Eddie; he shook his head, “and I have no idea where we’re going, I just know that we need to get away from whoever those two were. I don’t actually know my way around this place very well.”
Steve sighed.
“I wish I knew where my best friend was though…I think he may have come here with me.”
May 11, 2023 at 2:45 pm #142941Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@dekreel lol, yeaaaaaa, KP does that sometimes XD
Hazel sounds really cool tho!!!
May 11, 2023 at 4:46 pm #142949@theloonyone No, no you’re good! I should be the sorry one, being a bit impatient lol.
@freedomwriter76 Your turn!!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
May 11, 2023 at 4:55 pm #142959Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@theloonyone yea, no big deal, life’s really busy for me too right now!! 🙂
Hitchens
He listened to Cammie, who talked to the newcomers, Thor and Loki.
He huffed, facing Thor and Loki himself. “I wouldn’t trust that man, if I were you. He’s not to be trusted. Watch your backs. He may just stab you.”
May 11, 2023 at 4:59 pm #142963@freedomwriter76 @theloonyone
Crosshair
“I wouldn’t trust that man. He’s dangerous.” Hitchens growled. “Watch your backs…..he might just stab you…”
Crosshair growled, fixing his gaze on the man. “Stab them? Why would I do that if I have my rifle?” He brandished it in a way that he hoped Hitchens found threatening.
The other man didn’t seem to care.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
May 11, 2023 at 4:59 pm #142964(you can add what he says next)
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
May 11, 2023 at 5:04 pm #142967Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Hitchens
Hitchens raised a half-smirk. “And I’d also be careful to keep any and all distance between you and Crosshair.”
He gave the annoying man a smile full of malice.
“…else he may just try to drown or burn you…any way to hurt you.”
May 11, 2023 at 5:39 pm #142971@freedomwriter76 @theloonyone
Crosshair
How did he know?
How did he know???
Every word Hitchens mentioned….
Drowning. Burning. Being stabbed…….
Every way Crosshair been hurt before……
The third “How do you know?” was snarled out loud.
“I have my ways.” For a second, Hitchens’ smirking face turned to Hemlock’s. [I will explain who that is in a separate post if you want.]
Crosshair lunged at him, his rifle dropping to the ground. The small pistol he carried as a secondary weapon was out of its holster for the first time in a while.
The other man grabbed his weapon, but too late.
Feather
A gunshot rang out.
Hitchens slumped to the floor. Crosshair stood above him, breathing heavily, the rage fading from his eyes as he realized what he had just done.
The others panicked.
Crosshair staggered back from the scene, still a bit dazed, but then turned and took off running.
“Wait!” Feather ran after him, finally catching him in a corridor far in the castle.
“No, Feather!” he hissed, stepping back like a caged animal. “Leave me alone. Not now.”
One more step backward……
..and the ground crumbled beneath his feet. Feather screamed his name and tried to grab onto him, but he vanished into the darkness before she could do anything.
(@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 time for Riker and Pax!)
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
May 11, 2023 at 5:43 pm #142972Oh, and Feather will probably mostly be trying to find a safe way down…..so she’ll just be wandering nearby for a while. If a group passes by, she might either ask them for help or join them, but I don’t think I’ll RP as much for her right now.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
May 12, 2023 at 1:05 pm #143003I actually do kind of want to meet them…. And Kun’en definitley would but not in a friendly way 😅
But I’m not sure about the rest of their group
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:May 12, 2023 at 1:41 pm #143013The moment you realize you promised character descriptions, and then completley forgot about it 😭I am so sorry, but here they are!
Everi- 23 years old, has kind of strawberry blonde hair and blue eyes. He’s fairly tall and wears royal clothing but kind of disheveled, and probably has a few hidden knives somewhere. He is the crown prince of his kingdom. His personality as he potrays it to most people is arrogant and uncaring, but he is secretly heroic and calculating.
Heres a reference photo I have of him though I don’t know if KP will actually show the image
Laylil-7 years old, has braided blonde hair with red streaks in it and same blue eyes. She would probably be wearing a dress and matching slippers. She is Everi’s younger sister, the princess of their kingdom. Her personality is bold, fierce and mischevious
I couldn’t find a picture for her unfortunatley
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:May 12, 2023 at 1:43 pm #143017*scrolls really far back to see who your group is* ok!
@lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @freedomwriter76Is that alright with you guys?
You can also say if/ how much you’re willing to let your character get injured if it comes to that. I’m not a big fan of violence or constant drama, so you probably don’t have to worry, but I wanted to know just in case.
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May 12, 2023 at 1:46 pm #143018@prin
oh, yeah. Pics aren’t working right now
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May 12, 2023 at 1:52 pm #143023Oooh okay, thanks
file:///C:/Users/djlar/Downloads/Everi.jfif
Well theres the link to the image if you want to see it
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
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