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May 8, 2023 at 7:12 pm #142620
@lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12Lesli raises an eyebrow.
“Umm…” She glances over at Luna. “Hey maybe you can find a nickname better than ears. Her name’s Luna.”
Tauren sighs.
So you still don’t care that I have a stupid nickname?
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
May 8, 2023 at 7:13 pm #142621Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings lol, Lesli đ love her â€ïžđ€Ł
May 8, 2023 at 7:50 pm #142623Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin who’s turn is it in our group with Eddie/Ellie/Dante and Ara and Steve again?
May 8, 2023 at 7:55 pm #142624@freedomwriter76 I think itâs @godlyfantasy12 âs turn
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
May 8, 2023 at 7:56 pm #142625Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@loopylin yea, I think it is…i was just making sure XD I know I went last, and I think you did Dante before that đ i just wanted to make sure I was thinking right đ€Ł
May 8, 2023 at 8:28 pm #142340Okay um here we go…
Hazel Anodonton
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Appearance: 6’3″, Burly, strong, muscular, chocolate brown skin, long jet black hair with some bright yellow streaks, striking green eyes, hooked nose. Has a handful of scars scattered around her body.
Clothing: Iron armor with spikes and sharp edges; fitted t-shirt and leggings underneath.
Personality: Cautious, paranoid, anxious, look like she could pound most people to the floor and probably can, but is actually not an expert fighter, and hates fighting anyways, but will defend those she trusts. Hates being on the offensive side. Between fight or flight, she’d choose flight. Lone wolf, doesn’t trust anyone (due to past experiences), doesn’t show her emotions and puts on aggressive facade when threatened (think a cat arching its back and hissing when it’s scared). She wears armor specifically to keep people away from her and intimidating them from trying to make contact with her, not just for protection in battle. The only person she truly whole-heartedly trusts is her sister Hever. Also she’s a klutz đHazel is a pretty underdeveloped character. She doesn’t really have much of a story or background attached to her yet; I’m actively trying to figure all that out. Hopefully this exercise will help. I just like her lol đ
A picture of her face and of her armor!
You can pronounce it however you want.
May 8, 2023 at 11:13 pm #142642@loopylin @freedomwriter76 WHOOPS XD Iâll try to get an RP out tomorrow! Same with Luna lol
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMay 8, 2023 at 11:32 pm #142644@freedomwriter76
XDXD <3
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
May 9, 2023 at 7:57 pm #142765@loopylin @freedomwriter76 (was someone else with us?) I canât totally remember what happened but UH anyway XD
Arabella
Ara looked around, and eyes scouring the scene for any sign of Asher, but he was nowhere to be found.
Her heart dropped for a moment, realizing sheâd lost the young boy.
But there wasnât anything she could do about it at the moment.
She turned to the red-skinned young man, frowning. Set a gentle hand on his shoulder as they began moving.
âAre you alright?â Ara asked, worry creasing her brow. She took one more, watery glance back, as the smoke was still wafting.
She could only hope Asher was alrightâŠ
Luna
Luna giggled, lowering the pan in her hands. âI donât mind it!â She said to Lesli, and then waved to the man before her. âMy name is Luna! Tis good to meet you!â She dropped the pan like it was nothing, bounding over to them. Her eyes scanning the group, worry flooding her brow as she stopped on Matthew, though Tauren seemed to be caring for him.
She then turned to another man she had yet to meet. The one with the collar around his neckâŠ
Tears sprouted to her eyes and she let out a small, watery gasp. Without asking, she snapped the key out of Tonyâs hands, eliciting an indignant cry from him.
She gently walked over to the man, a small, sincere smile on her face.
She was a bit short in stature compared to him, but he slouched a bit as she approached. Frightened.
âNo oneâs going to harm you. I wonât allow it.â Luna nodded fiercely, a sweet determination in her eyes. She paused, tilting her head, bright eyes sparkling. âWould you mind if I removed your collar?â
âIâŠâ The manâs voice was gravelly, as if it hurt to speak. âI donât know if you shouldâŠâ He looked at the incapacitated, dark figure on the floor, eyes shuddering.
Luna followed his gaze, glaring. She returned to the man with a look of pure sweetness. âYou donât have to worry about him. Please? May I help you?â She gently held out the key in both her palms. An offering.
If he didnât accept, she wouldnât force himâŠthat would be wrong.
The man seemed so frightened.
So broken.
Lunaâs heart shattered at the thought of what he mustâve been through.
She could only hope heâd take her offering of peace, and comfort.
Paxton
Paxton look up at Rikerâs request, then blushed, releasing the manâs shirt. He wrapped both arms around his bear instead, stumbling a bit with the change.
Riker gave a small smile, glancing at the boy. âYou can still hold my hand, I donât mind.â Paxton didnât move. âOnly if youâd like too, though.â
Paxton glanced at Riker, and then slowly unwrapped his fingers from Hopeâs fur and then entwined them in Rikerâs own.
The two walked in silence for a moment, before Riker spoke softly.
âIâve heard your friends call you Snow before. Is that a nickname?â
Paxton nodded, smiling. He rubbed his cheek against Hopeâs head, thinking back to the first time the name had been uttered.
âSnowflakeâŠdoes it mean something?â
Paxtonâs grip tightened a bit, his steps growing a bit closer. âO-OneâŠone o-of a-a kindâŠâ
Riker blinked, eyes seeming to light up a bit. The corners of his mouth upturned in a smile. âIâŠnever thought of that. ThatâsâŠquite beautiful.â
Paxton smiled wider, nodding. He looked up, tilting his head. âDoâŠdo youâŠ?â
âHm?â Riker raised a brow.
âN-Nickname?â
âDo I have one?â
Paxton nodded.
(I have now made a new headcanon that is actually canon cuz it is my character XD that Paxton talks sometimes in half sentences due to his stutter, or doesnât form full thoughts but they come to understand what heâs saying anyway. Also, I have a cousin who, while he isnât diagnosed with autism, he does have some speech stuff so this would kinda make sense anyway)
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMay 10, 2023 at 12:06 am #142776XD you forgot to tag me! I happened to be reading the castle though đ
Isn’t Pax just such a sweetheart đ and the nickname snowflake!? SOOO CUTE AHHH
Also him saying “Do you?” About the nickname was really cute, I knew exactly what he was trying to say. đ„°đ„°
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
May 10, 2023 at 12:43 am #142777@dekreel Hazel sounds really interesting! I really like the contrast of the Strong female but in truth sheâs afraid and doesnât like combat, etc. but anyone who saw her would immediately think sheâs a warrior, or something.
Perfect example of donât judge a book by its cover.
Also I have a character (my darling November) who is also prone to accidents and tends to have two left feet so he can relate to the klutziness
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMay 10, 2023 at 4:03 pm #142884@dekreel Cool!!
@theloonyone Hey, I think it’s your turn for our group….?Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 10, 2023 at 6:56 pm #142900WHAT- I didn’t post that last Hazel bio???? That was the original message that KP “ate.” o.o Weeeeird. Anyway there are the pictures lol
You can pronounce it however you want.
May 11, 2023 at 12:08 am #142912@keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Sorry it’s taken me so long to reply… end of school year is busy
Cammie
âYou donât just say that when theyâre right in front of you, Crosshair,â Feather said, glaring at him.
Cammie glanced back and forth between Feather and Crosshair and the glare they were exchanging. She listened as the rest of their group introduced themselves to Loki and Thor. “I’m Cammie,” she told them and glanced toward Crosshair. “And don’t worry about him. I’m sure you don’t mean any harm.”
May 11, 2023 at 2:59 am #142917@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
DanteÂ
Ara reached out and gently placed a hand on Danteâs shoulder. He flinched hard, causing her to pull back.
âAre you alright?â she asked, brow creased with worry.
He glanced back at the smoke and gripped his knife tighter. Then he gave Ara a smile that came out more as a grimace.
âYou should be more careful about touching strangers you only just met. Thatâs the second time in the last few minutes Iâve almost stabbed at you.â He frowned, only now realizing how scary that would sound to a normal young girl. He swallowed, sheathed the knife, and put it safely away in his pocket.
âUh, what about you?â He asked, trying to shift the focus off himself. âYou keep looking back.â
Ed & ElÂ
As Ara and Dante walked in the back, Eddie and Ellie trotted on either side of Steve to keep up with his long strides. Both of them looked up at him with anxious faces and simultaneously asked him different questions.
âAre we safe now?â
âDâ you know where weâre going?â
They both shot silent glares at each other after they spoke.
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
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