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May 3, 2023 at 9:24 pm #142163Anonymous
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@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 y’all can change this if you want…but Acheron is actually probably stronger than any of them realize…😬
y’all can change this if you want tho, I just wasn’t sure how to continue it 😅
Acheron
He stared at Jared.
His stupid, stubborn, disobedient slave was sitting next to the arrogant, annoying girl…Lesli.
But in the end, Jared was still his…still belonged to him.
And Acheron would get him back, no matter who he had to hurt in the process.
The binds on his wrists were of no consequence.
He smirked up at Stark, the arrogant man who had taken him down in the first place. “I believe you have forgotten something, Tony.”
Tony scoffed. “Oh, and what’s that?”
The handcuffs were surrounded by an eerie, dark glow, and they suddenly broke.
“What the-!?”
Before Tony could continue, Acheron swiped his legs underneath him, knocking the armored man to the floor.
He stood, and without even an ounce of effort, grabbed the other boy, Matthew.
He held a sword up to his neck.
“Do anything, and the boy gets it.”
May 3, 2023 at 9:43 pm #142165MATTHEW NOOOOO
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMay 4, 2023 at 1:03 pm #142209Awww girl!!! That made my day 😀 Thank you so much!!!! You’re so sweet ❤❤❤ I’m so glad that my writing has improved so much! It’s only because I’ve got such good examples of great writing from all my friends here 😀
And that comic is awesome XDXD I srsly love Layson so much ❤
@freedomwriter76
*Gasps* NOOO MATTHEW!!! My BABYYY!!!! Acheron 😡😤😡
Uh oh..😨😬
And that sounds good! Thank you for getting us going, I really had no idea what to write next XD
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May 4, 2023 at 3:11 pm #142223@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings
Matthew
I stood awkwardly to the side, hands thrust deep in my pockets, silently observing as Tauren and Tony attempted to get the key from Acheron.
I winced as he shot Tauren a look that would melt stone. His gaze reverted back to Jared, who sat by Lesli a few feet away.
Poor Jared, I thought, eyeing the young man. He was still very visibly on edge under the prying gaze of his ‘Master’.
Why would anyone want to chain up a fellow human and treat him like dirt? Like an animal? Not even animals deserve that, let alone people!
I contemplated this, deeply disturbed and saddened.
Suddenly, I yelped as I was grabbed from behind. My arms were quickly pinned behind my back, I was jerked backwards into something.
Or someone.
My heartbeat thundered in my ears as I was turned to face Tony, Tauren, Lesli, and Jared. Each had an expression of horror and distress…though Tony looked very perceptibly peeved as well.
I glanced up to see who held me…and into the dark, glittering eyes of Acheron. My eyes widened at the hatred and disgust evident in those black liquid pools.
Then, as if I wasn’t perfectly terrified, and would not move for any reason whatsoever, I felt the cold steel of his bejeweled sword press against my throat.
I went perfectly still, my muscles instinctively tensing up. I struggled to breath, panic coursing through my veins, but I didn’t dare move an inch. I knew from much experience that it was imperative to stay still when someone held a blade to your throat.
Acheron’s cold voice dripped with venom. “Do anything, and the boy gets it.”
My eyes were wide with fear as I gazed at my companions, silently imploring them to go. Get somewhere safe. Away from here. And to get Jared away from this awful excuse of a man.
Tauren shook his head, brows furrowed in concern.
I shook my own head at him, frustration mounting. I mouthed to him, “Go. Get outta here! I’ll be fine.”
I’ve gone through this before. I’ll be fine…I-I hope.
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May 4, 2023 at 3:28 pm #142227So glad that made your day! I love talking with you here, so glad you joined! <333
@freedomwriter76 @light
“Ok ok that’s enough.” Lesli stands up, leaving Jared with his head down at the table.
He must be used to this behavior.
“You want us to leave you and your friend over there alone, so we’ll do that.”
Lesli glares intensely at Acheron, who lowers his sword slightly.
“Can we talk then? Either we leave each other alone, or there’s something you want from us before we go our separate ways.” Lesli says.
Mathew’s eyes glaze over with fear, but he remains perfectly still. Lesli reaches out for his hand, giving it a gentle squeeze.
“Can you let him go now?” She says, staring up at Acheron.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
May 4, 2023 at 7:26 pm #142254Hi so um, sorry if this isn’t the place to say this, feel free to direct me to another topic if needed, but I would like to join the character castle at some point, I would love to write a little more and develop some of my characters and I’ve been eyeing this topic several times haha. If it’s too full right now I can wait.
You can pronounce it however you want.
May 4, 2023 at 7:31 pm #142257Hello! I don’t believe we’ve met officially, but I saw you used to be active while I was exploring the older forums. Anyway, it’s lovely to meet you!!
And yes, this is the right place! And it’s never too full!! You can add as many as you need, the amount differs for everyone 😀 I’d love to see some of your charries!
And there’s several other Role Plays as well, such as the villain RP, the Fantasy Academy RP, and a few others, if you’d like to check those out as well!
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May 4, 2023 at 7:37 pm #142259Helloo!!! I don’t think I’ve met you before, I’m PrincesaChronicle! Pleasure to make your aquintence!
You can totally join the Character Castle or any of the other RPs! Theres never a wrong place or time
And if you do join this topic and your characters need some other characters to interact with I have a few that have been wondering around somewhere that yours could meet up with 😉
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:May 4, 2023 at 7:39 pm #142260@lightoverdarkness6 Oh yeah those days were fun…..
Thanks a lot! Where do I start? Do I need to have read a certain amount of what the other charries have been doing or can I go in blind?
You can pronounce it however you want.
May 4, 2023 at 7:49 pm #142261@princesachronicle22 Oh yes thanks a lot. Time for me to actually pick a couple characters out of my couple dozen lol
You can pronounce it however you want.
May 4, 2023 at 7:58 pm #142263XD totally get you, some of the characters I’ve put in here we’rent even named before I threw them into the RP 😂
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:May 4, 2023 at 10:38 pm #142267its never too full!
I don’t need to repeat the others, you can join with any characters though!
Nice to meet you! 🙂
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
May 5, 2023 at 9:50 am #142273So you just write out a short description of your charrie(s), their name, physical appearance, and anything extra you’d like to add. Then you can write your first RP of said character waking up anywhere in the castle. And then, you and Princessa can figure out when y’all’s characters will meet!
You don’t have to read other people’s RPs, (unless it’s for a character in your group) but you can if you want! It might help you to figure out how your character will interact in the castle and those in it!
Anywayyyy…hope that helped!! And may your adventure in the Character Castle be most exhilarating!
XDXDXD
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May 5, 2023 at 12:13 pm #142281Oh gosh, a quick skim-through says you guys are going through a lot right now haha! I’ll read for a little bit more and then insert my character. In the meantime I’ll write a bio as soon as I can figure out a bit of information that will help me roleplay.
You can pronounce it however you want.
May 5, 2023 at 12:39 pm #142286Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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*Gasps* NOOO MATTHEW!!! My BABYYY!!!! Acheron 😡😤😡
Uh oh..😨😬
And that sounds good! Thank you for getting us going, I really had no idea what to write next XD
AHHH, I KNOWWWWW!!!! 😭 ugh, ikr!? 😡
Thanks! I just thought I’d do some conflict to get us going XD
@mineralizedwritings @lightTONY
Acheron just smirked at Lesli’s words, unintimidated, unfazed, proud of what he had done.
“You know what I want. I want all of you to leave me alone, and to give me my servant. He rightfully belongs to me, and me only.”
Acheron laughed. Pressed the sword closer to Matthew’s neck.
“But if you don’t, well…your little friend here may just have to suffer the consequences.”
Tony could hurt him. More than that, actually.
But Matthew was in the way.
And Tony couldn’t risk hurting him.
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