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May 2, 2023 at 12:45 pm #141932Anonymous
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@keilah-h @princesachronicle22 I’m good with whatever!!!
Adolphus
He held Henry tight and stood up, moving to follow the sound of the groan.
He carefully stepped, careful to not set anything off, in case there were any traps or something.
He saw a young man and a little girl, sitting up right beside a beam.
Adolphus crouched down close, but not too close, to them. “Are you alright? Did you hit your head?”
May 2, 2023 at 12:49 pm #141935Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 here’s the RP!!! XD
AGHHHH, I LOVE PAX SO MUCHHHHHHH!!!!! 😭🥺😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️
Riker
Paxton continued to smile, and Riker was glad. He was glad, happy, to see Paxton smile. He hadn’t seen him do it too much.
Plus, now they had a bit of light to see.
Paxton held the crystal with one hand and Riker’s shirt with the other.
They carefully and slowly made their way forward, taking it each step at a time.
Truth be told, Paxton reminded him of Eli. They were even the same age.
It was a little hard though, trying to walk while having Paxton cling to his shirt.
Riker smiled softly at Paxton. “Could I hold your hand to make it easier for both of us to walk?”
May 2, 2023 at 3:48 pm #141980@princesachronicle22 Ok, I guess I’m putting Allen with the pelgarkines. @freedomwriter76 If you want to include your charries, feel free!
Allen
He kept walking and slammed into something hard.
Ouch.
When he got up, he noticed Serin and Kun’en also there. Had they collided by accident?
“I’m sorry about that,” he told them. “Are you the only ones who made it out? Where are the others?”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 2, 2023 at 6:34 pm #141988@godlyfantasy12 @thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22
That sounds good to me! 😀
And that way Dylan and Liren could have their rap battle 😏
XDXD Oh yess
#HugRikerSquad
May 2, 2023 at 8:09 pm #142005Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@princesachronicle22 (btw, you wanna RP as Uvah for our other group? 💕) @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 (Asher will be here, right??? i don’t remember XD) hope y’all don’t mind me bringing in a charrie to this group!!! 😁
Jason
He made his way out of the smoke, rubbing his eyes; coughing.
He’d lost Steffi and Aiden in the confusion…he hoped with all of his being that they were okay.
He finally got out of the smoke, coughing for a bit to clear his lungs.
He saw a few of the others…but he didn’t know any of them.
Jason rose a hand and small smile in greeting. “Uhm, hello there. I’m Jason…we just kind of met…who are you guys?”
May 2, 2023 at 8:41 pm #142012@keilah-h @princesachronicle22 @freedomwriter76
Asher
My head whirled. Chaos was everywhere around me. It all started with…what was it?
Oh yes.
First Serin’s new buddy.
The strange jealous feeling when the small red alien smiled at Arabella. Feeling like I needed to protect her…
…Then the smoke bomb, or whatever this stuff was.
And after that…was when I had lost Ara.
“A-Ara? Arabella?”
I held the hem of my shirt over my mouth, against the gray smoke threatening to invade my lungs. I squeezed my eyes shut tightly.
My eyes watered, and I gasped for breath, then began coughing violently.
I couldn’t see anything more than two feet in front of me, and I began to feel dizzy. I brought a hand up to my forehead, and held the other out to steady my stumbling. I stopped in my tracks.
Suddenly, someone slammed into me, and I crashed to the stone floor with a grunt.
A shadow rose up in front of me, dark and menacing, and I gasped and jerked back.
“Don’t hurt me! I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to…I-I’m so sorry…”
#HugRikerSquad
May 2, 2023 at 8:42 pm #142013@freedomwriter76
XD And yes Asher is in that group with y’all, I’m a little late responding. 🙂
#HugRikerSquad
May 2, 2023 at 9:08 pm #142017@freedomwriter76
I’ve got time now!
@lightoverdarkness6 If you have the time to rp, we’re ramping up the one with Tony Tauren Lesli Mathew and the other two rn.Tauren hesitantly walks over to (insert bad guys name I can’t remember XD!). (insert bad guys name) looks up, glaring stiffly at Tony.
“Can we uh– get that key?” Tauren says, crossing his arms.”Maybe you’ll give it to us nicely?”
Tauren smirks slightly, nodding over at Tony. “Unless you want us to make you give it over.”
(insert bad guys name) sends a seething glare over to Tauren. His gaze settles back on (Poor boi I can’t remember name of) in the background, sitting next to Lesli.
ummmm could I have some name reminders pls? XD
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
May 2, 2023 at 9:09 pm #142018I can’t tell you how much your writing has improved since I first roleplayed with you, like girl! You should be so proud!! <3 Love the descriptions of Asher trying to keep the smoke at bay!
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
May 2, 2023 at 10:08 pm #142029@freedomwriter76
I just got my parents to get me a book about making comics and I’m currently very inspired lol.
Anyways, I had way to much fun drawing that dead face on Layson 🤣
Just in case I do this again, what do your charries look like? (I mean just in general, don’t feel like you need to write up a super description XD)
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
May 3, 2023 at 1:59 pm #142067@Lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
SERIN
She grunted, standing up from where she’d just crashed onto the floor to find Allen rubbing his head. “I’m sorry about that,” he said. “Are you the only ones who made it out? Where are the others?”
Serin’s lips thinned, she squinted over into the still thick smoke. She couldn’s make out any forms. With a small shiver, she stepped back a step from the tendrils of choking grey substance. “I am not sure.” She answered. Glancing to her left, she noticed Kun’en standing a few feet away. “Ah, over there.”
Serin waited a beat for Allen before walking over to her fellow High General.
KUN’EN
Kun’en stared down at a small form on the floor that he’d bumbed into. “Don’t hurt me! I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to…I-I’m so sorry…” The boy said and scrambled backwards, hands up.
“Whoah, whoah,” Kun’en said in surprise, crouching down to the youth’s level. “Hey, its okay kid.” Serin appeared by his shoulder, her face set in a familiar shade of blue granite. “We should probably get out of this smoke.” He murmured, glancing up at Serin then back to the boy. They were on the very edge of the worst of the smoke, but it would be best to gain further distance.
The boy looked over into the smog, a flurry of emotions crossing his features. “Look, I’m sorry about your friends kid, but its best if you stay out of that stuff. You can stay with us.” Kun’en told the boy, moving his head in a gesture back towards Serin and another blue-skinned guy next to her. He smiled in reassurance, but based on the kids wince it didn’t help his cause, most likely from his slightly-sharper-than-human teeth.
He supposed he had no right to argue the point anyway, considering he’d been planning on marching right back into the smoke himself to pummel the goons who’d set off the smoke device after he got Serin out of it. He knew very well how much she hated the stuff.
Smoke wafted toward him and Kun’en whipped his head to the side as a bought of coughing sounded from his left. A man stumbled out of the haze, looking disoriented. he stared at them a beat before saying, “Uhm, hello there. I’m Jason…we just kind of met…who are you guys?”
Shooting another glance down at the kid, Kun’en stood up and clamped a fisted hand to his chest. “Well seeing as we may or may not be in mortal danger I’ll try to make this quick.” He pointed to each person in turn. “There’s Serin and then Allen, if I remeber right,” He gestured down next to him. “And over here we have Kid, because I don’t actually know his name.”
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:May 3, 2023 at 2:39 pm #142071@thearcaneaxiom @freedomwriter76
Freedom mind if I use Viola a bit? I don’t know if you wanted her to do anything yet, I just wasn’t sure how things should progress, but if you don’t like how this plays out we can totally do something else!
UVAH
Viola smiled with her ruby red lips, gesturing down the hall, “Well, should we head off then?” Uvah nodded, but had to prod Neshe Nele forward, the woman tense as a patients muscles after vyanz poisening. She noticed that Bucky was even more stiff, frozen to his spot, his eyes never leaving Viola.
Her brow furrowed. He hadn’t said anything since the woman had arrived, despite her claim that they were old friends. Uvah hesitated, looking at him more closely. Wait.. was she just seeing things, or was that terror in Bucky’s eyes?
Dropping her hands from where she had been pushing Neshe Nele forward, she clutched her satchel. She had plenty of knockout powder in her bag, used on difficult paitients. Uvah didn’t want to jump to any conclusions, but maybe it was best to be cautious…
As her fingers twitched downward she saw Viloa’s eyes narrow on the movement. Uvah’s fingers just had time to graze the opening of her bag before she felt herself being yanked forward. Viola spun her around, clamping down arms as strong as steel to hold her in place. Then Uvah heard a click, and she felt the press of what she could only assume was a gun barrel to her temple.
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:May 3, 2023 at 4:11 pm #142092@godlyfantasy12 @thearcaneaxiom
PHERVIN
They were nearing a kitchen, he could just feel it. He took in a lungful of air, imagining the lovely scent of anuni pie. He looked backward to their sullen crew. Miss Prickly had been quiet since her outburst, and Namal monitered her and Mr Pokey Pokey closely.
Phervin stifled a sad sigh. Nam had had trust issues for as long as he’d known her. He was pretty sure she’d never actually had a childhood, having grown up on the streets alone, then been taken into brutal training for the Shivalt Vi as an assasin and spy. Phervin had been trained in the same place yes, but he’d still had a family before that. A mother and aunt who loved him.
And he still kept that love, cradled it, expelled it to others in the form of puns and silliness, so that he might share their memory, his aunts sacrifice. So as he turned, stopping in the hallway in front of them, he put on a bright megawhatt smile and said. “Well I think we’re almost there.” He looked at Mr Pokey Pokey, “this is going to change your rock lived life Swordy.”
Anuni pie wasn’t just one of the most wonderful tasting treats ever, but it was also one representing unity. Yes he barely knew these people, other than the fact that they’d nearly killed him and Namal, but what was wrong with sharing some dessert together?
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:May 3, 2023 at 7:52 pm #142141Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings (btw, the villain’s name is Acheron and the poor baby’s name is Jared)
and ahh, MIN, I LOVE THE COMIC SO MUCHHHH!!!!! 😍😍😍
i just love Layson 😂
So, Henry is 6 years old, has curly blonde hair and blue eyes, chubby cheeks, wears, like a button-up shirt with plain shorts and small dress shoes…he’s just so cute ❤️
Adolphus looks like this, pretty much, with black hair👇
he wears a button up shirt with a plain jacket overtop, dress pants, and black boots.
maybe that was more than you needed, but I got carried away XD
May 3, 2023 at 7:53 pm #142143Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@princesachronicle22 ohhh, I’m SO READY for this!!! XD That was so much like Viola 😅😁
it’s @thearcaneaxiom’s turn, but I can’t WAIT to see where this goes!!!
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