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April 28, 2023 at 11:40 pm #141742
@freedomwriter76
(I’m just making it that Layson is the one your charrie heard groan)
Layson scoops Maylee up into his arms as smoke fills the room.
“In my eyes!” Maylee squeals, rubbing one of her eyes with her hand. Layson looks around, trying to find an exit. He takes off in the opposite direction, more concerned with Maylee getting smoke in her eyes than keeping his new friends.
“H-hello?”
Layson calls off into the distance, but the wall of smoke in front of him remains just as thick. He starts forwards, only to careen headfirst into one of the castles large beams. He sits up with a groan, still holding Maylee tightly.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
April 29, 2023 at 1:12 pm #141747@mineralizedwritings AWW MAYLEE!!! She’s so cute! Poor baby. Also I luv Layson so much. He’s just got such awkward teen dad vibes
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebApril 29, 2023 at 1:30 pm #141748@freedomwriter76 well…they do have one (tiny!) source of light.
Paxton
Paxton squeezed his eyes shut, gripping the older man’s shirt like it was a life-preserver. He nuzzled his face tightly against Riker, holding Hope against his chest with his other arm.
It was too dark…
His feet stumbled as the two walked, making Riker grip him tighter. Paxton tensed at the touch, but slowly relaxed, knowing he was only doing it to protect him.
Protect…
The term was still a bit new to the boy…it was odd being on the other end of protection.
“This would be so much better if we could see where we were going…” Riker sighed.
Paxton frowned, whimpering. He opened his eyes, though he couldn’t see anything, which…made his nerves tense.
He squeezed Hope tighter, taking comfort in her fur. His hand caressed her neck, and then, his eyes widened a bit, feeling the familiar chain wrapped around her.
His eyes lit for a moment as his fingers touched the smooth metal, rubbing it between his fingers.
The first time he’d found the crystal…
Hadn’t it…?
He wondered….
His fingers found the small, white object, gently squeezing it around his small hands.
He wasn’t entirely sure what to do…
Did he…wish?
Mentally ask it to…to do something?
….pray?
Luna often held hers when she prayed…
And…and Ara had told him about the Light One…
That…He loved him…and…had a purpose for him.
Though, Paxton still wasn’t entirely sure that was true, it was nice to hear.
But, wether it was true or not, Paxton didn’t have any other ideas…so…
He closed his eyes, and silently asked for help.
And…to his surprise…
The crystal…began to glow.
It wasn’t a very bright glow, more soft…pulsing at the first, but then it became more evident and strengthened.
Riker’s eyes widened, looking over at the boy as he opened his palm, revealing the small, glowing white crystal.
“What…?”
Paxton stared at it, eyes wide. Awed.
He…He’d heard him. The Light One had listened….to him…
Paxton couldn’t help but look up at Riker, a large smile on his face.
Riker grinned, chuckling. “Well…you’re just full of surprises, aren’t you?”
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#ProtectSebApril 29, 2023 at 8:36 pm #141762Thanks, glad you like them!
Yeah Layson is basically just idk what I’m doing but I love her so we’ll figure it out 😭
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
April 30, 2023 at 6:10 pm #141797@loopylin @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarknes6 @mineralizedwritings (that’s all the peeps right?)
So I’m not sure which charries are in the smoke right now, and who they’ll end up with but here are Serin and Kun’en!
SERIN
A dense gray smoke suddenly filled the hallway, and Serin moved backward hissing. Not smoke, no no no. Her eyes blurred with stinging prickles as she brought up her spear, having forgotten it in her hand. The smoke continued to billow outward until it encompassed the room, causing unseen chaos. Her breaths quickened, her eyes moving wildly to anticipate any sudden attacks. Fire? No. No. There can’t be a fire.
Her breaths turned to intense coughs as the smoke invaded her lungs, shoving itself down her throat. She tried to hold on to her spear as she bent over in a hacking fit. Can’t… I can’t…. breathe!
Then a hand on her arm, pulling her up. She glanced up long enough to see the smudgy edges of Kun’en as he hauled them forward, trying to navigate through the haze. Suddenly a shadow of a person appeared ahead and they crashed into it, causing her and Kun’en to fall forward onto the hard floor.
(Sorry whoevers charrie that was, unless no one wants it to be theirs, then we can just say it was a pillar or something)
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:April 30, 2023 at 6:15 pm #141799@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6
So not sure who went last for our group with Lyn, Dylan, and Zyrin. And I was thinking about things we could do and since I wanted Phervin to meet Dylan, I was wondering if we could join up with the group with @thearcaneaxiom?
And that way Dylan and Liren could have their rap battle 😏
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:April 30, 2023 at 7:29 pm #141802@freedomwriter76 Hitchens could……easily…..
All he’d have to do is warn the new guys that Crosshair’s dangerous or something. Or Loki or Thor could mention something, not knowing it’ll mean trouble.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 30, 2023 at 7:36 pm #141804@princesachronicle22 Hmm….
Well, I haven’t seen Allen join any of the groups??? I know my last RP said he wandered out of the smoke, but I can easily retcon anything. And maybe I missed someone’s RP, so if that happened someone please point me to where he is.
If not, I’ll put him there. It would be a bit odd to have THREE blue-skinned charries in one group though, lol.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 30, 2023 at 8:10 pm #141809@princessachronicle22
Is that the group with Corvina? If so either Lyn and Nyx will need to leave or Corvina. Which isn’t a problem 😊 I can make that happen
also I don’t think @lightoverdarkness6 is on KP rn
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#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebApril 30, 2023 at 10:29 pm #141812Yeah she’s been taking a break, and we don’t have to do that right away, but I was thinking eventually, if they can’t be in the same group thats fine! We can totally keep the groups separate for now
XD yeah, I don’t mind either way! And I think @freedomwriter76 had some charries that weren’t paired with anyone either right?
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:May 1, 2023 at 3:13 pm #141835Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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May 1, 2023 at 3:33 pm #141842@freedomwriter76 if u have time I RPed as Paxton 😊
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMay 1, 2023 at 3:45 pm #141847@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 Ok! Want to make it a single group or would you rather two separate ones?
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 1, 2023 at 8:18 pm #141900@keilah-h @freedomwriter76
I don’t mind either way! And me and Light were talking and I think I’mma kidnap Asher to hang out with Serin and Kun’en for whenever she re-joins the Rp
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:May 2, 2023 at 10:18 am #141919Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings i know Light is gone for right now, but will you want to continue with Tauren (hurricane hair himself!!!) and Lesli, or do you not have enough time for that? 💕
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