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April 27, 2023 at 11:10 am #141579
@freedomwriter76 Yeah, of course Steve and Dante can stay together. đ Maybe Steve could want to stay and fight, but he sees Dante run off and decides to follow him instead? And then they can meet up with Ed and Ellie cuz I really want those three to stick together.
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
April 27, 2023 at 11:12 am #141580NOOOOOO DANTEEEE!! I already dot like these guys.
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebApril 27, 2023 at 11:25 am #141581@godlyfantasy12 Lol, yeah I donât like them either as people. Especially Ace.
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
April 27, 2023 at 1:53 pm #141599@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings
Allen
Smoke bomb!
He knew this tactic well….
His eyes stung as he staggered through the clouds, temporarily blinded.
He had his blaster out, but was afraid to shoot while he couldn’t see, not wanting to hit any of his companions.
As he finally got away from the smoke, he noticed someone else going in the same direction. “Are you all right?” he asked. His vision was still too blurry to tell who it was.
(it can be anyone, or more than one person)
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 27, 2023 at 2:06 pm #141601@loopylin @freedomwriter76 would yâall mind if Arabella went with Steve and Dante?
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebApril 27, 2023 at 2:13 pm #141602@everyone cuz I donât feel like tagging everyone XD
Arabella
Ara coughed as the cloud of smoke hit her face, making her eyes sting and throat close off.
She felt Asher release her hand, the boy beginning to cough violently next to her.
âAsh-er!â She cried, reaching for him, but it was difficult since she couldnât see him. Separated, she then heard a voice cry out.
âDante Tucker. You know who we are.â
Dante�
That was the little red young man whoâd smiled at herâŠwasnât it?
Ara listened as, whoever had attacked threatened Dante and the rest of the group.
Righteous fury rose within her as she narrowed her tear-streaked eyes, fists clenching against her dress.
Anyone who threatened innocent lives were not the kind of people you negotiated with.
Ara knew that all too well.
She didnât know their motivationâŠor what Dante had done to incur these figures wrathâŠperhaps it was deservedâŠbut they had shown themselves unworthy of any recompense in their behavior.
Wiping the sting from her eyes, she waved the smoke away, trying to see through the blur. She spotted a flash of red from her vision and took the chance.
Hopefully she was right.
She grabbed what looked to be Danteâs arm, âCome with me, hurry!â
(if u donât want this to happen u can ignore this RP @loopylin)
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebApril 27, 2023 at 3:19 pm #141612@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @keilah-h @freedomwriter @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Ooh those were such fun RPs to read y’all! I’ll write one for Serin and Kun’en when I have the time, not sure who they’ll end up with but we’ll see I guess!
Also Loopy, love these villains but if they hurt Dante… đĄđ€
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:April 27, 2023 at 5:21 pm #141638Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 totally fine with it if Loopy is!!
April 27, 2023 at 9:04 pm #141669Well, I’m here. đ
As opposed to the norm…
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76Thanks, y’all, for being so patient. I really don’t mind you going ahead with the RP. Even if I don’t have time to respond, reading through the things the group gets into always makes me smile.
Now, I can hop in with YosĂ a little this evening, although I can’t be sure when I’ll be getting back on in the next couple. Thankfully though, there’s only a few more weeks of this particular season of insanity left, so we can hope the next will be easier. I don’t want to pull YosĂ, but I really don’t want y’all’s charries to be held up by his silent, lurking presence either, and I can always add him again later on if that is better.
But I have to say…
RIKERRR!!! PAAAAXTOON!!!! Ayeeeee!
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
April 27, 2023 at 10:10 pm #141674 Ugh đŁÂ I keep accidentally hitting post before Iâm actually ready
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âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
April 27, 2023 at 10:23 pm #141677@godlyfantasy12 Yeah, Ara can totally join! @freedomwriter76
Dante
A hand shot out of the smoke and grabbed Danteâs arm. His instincts kicked in, and he immediately grabbed his knife and prepared to slash at the hand. But he froze when he heard her voice.
âCome with me, hurry!â
Dante lowered his knife and let Ara lead the way. She pulled him quickly through the gray void. He could hear Steve following close behind. His eye stung as he carefully watched his surroundings, but he wouldnât dare blink.
Apparently, Ara couldnât see any better in the smoke than he could, because, after a minute of running, Dante slammed into a small figure in front of him. He stumbled back and raised his knife.
âOi! Watch it!â he hissed.
âDante? That you? Youâre not hurt?â It was Ellie. Dante relaxed a small bit.
âUh, yeah⊠Iâm-â
âDante?! Itâs you? What the heck is going on here?!?â That was Eddie. Dante bristled again.
âYou say that like I did something wrong, Eddie. Donât forget that Iâm the one being hunted here!â
âWell clearly you did something to make them mad.â
Dante was about to say something equally as rude back, but Ellie hushed them both.
âBe quiet, both of you, or theyâll find us!â
Everyone was silent. They listened intently, but only heard far-away footsteps.
Ara finally spoke, her voice barely a whisper. âLetâs keep moving.â
(Yay! Now the gang is all together đ)
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
April 28, 2023 at 12:13 am #141682@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
I’ll go ahead and do one for now.
YosĂ
His steps had wavered between the front of the group or the back. The adults didn’t give him any instructions, though he had watched them carefully. At last he settled beside November, alert if he was needed.
But he wasn’t quick enough when the time came.
Guilt pressed down his breath as he followed the group in silence. His shoulders slumped in defeat. One heel burned where he’d scuffed it in the cave-in. Lily’s tears crowded his thoughts, but he was unsure what to do. He was helpless now just as he had been helpless then. Just as he always was when it mattered.
Softly, he began to pray. Not the shriek he’d uttered as everything crumbled out from beneath them, or even the shuttering cries of the battlefield, but quiet surrender. Again.
Like he’d told Alis. Like she’d shown him.
His heart thudded at the memory of her deep green eyes raised to the heavens. Her face, dirty from the cooking fire, glowed with peace.
YosĂ raised his chin and straightened his shoulders. It was time he reminded himself to be strong.
For the others, if they needed him.
Like the stars.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
April 28, 2023 at 4:43 pm #141722Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @princesachronicle22 @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings i think that’s everyone…? XD
Steve
Smoke filled the room, stinging his eyes. But he wouldn’t blink. That wouldn’t be…smart. Not in this situation.
He’d fight these people if he had…he saw Dante out of the corner of his eye, being led out of the smoke.
He needed to protect people…and fighting these…thugs…would maybe work temporarily, but not for long.
Besides, he needed to find Bucky.
He followed after Dante.
He arrived as Dante and Eddie argued.
âBe quiet, both of you, or theyâll find us!â Ellie hissed.
Silence, except for far away footsteps, were the only sounds heard.
“Let’s keep moving.” Ara said softly, quietly.
Dante. Ara. Eddie. Ellie.
Barely anyone from the group.
Steve nodded, making sure his shield was on his arm. “Let’s go. I’ll lead the way.”
(my other charries can be with whoever XD)
Adolphus
He coughed, finally getting out of the smoke.
He had used his jacket to cover Henry’s mouth and eyes.
Henry clung to him and cried; screamed.
Adolphus held him tighter. “Shhh, shhh, Henry…” he whispered, trying to get his son to calm.
He looked around.
Steffi…Aiden…Jason…they were all gone.
A groan sounded, and he turned, tense. He wasn’t alone.
(Steffi & Aiden are together and Jason is separate from them…y’all can put them with whoever đ)
April 28, 2023 at 4:43 pm #141723Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@elishavet-pidyon aww, Yosi!!! đđ„ș
April 28, 2023 at 4:51 pm #141724Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h what would set Crosshair off??? I mean…Hitchens can always make him mad, but…đ
@godlyfantasy12 Aww, Paxton! đđ„șlol…how are they going to get around with it being so dark? XD
Riker
Riker smiled at the young boy. “You’re welcome. Come on…maybe we can find somewhere with more light. Just stay right behind me.”
Paxton nodded.
He didn’t talk much.
Riker had been much the same, way back when.
Riker smiled softly, gently. “Just stay behind or beside me. I’ll keep you safe.”
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