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April 26, 2023 at 4:39 pm #141476
@godlyfantasy12 I love it too!!!
I have plenty of stuffed animals……too many…..
I went through a stuffed dolphin collecting phase when I was like five or six.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
April 26, 2023 at 4:41 pm #141477@freedomwriter76 Ha, neither of them notices they have a gun pointed at their head yet, lol.
Feather
“No. We just showed up. I’m not entirely sure what this place is…or who all of you people are. I wouldn’t mind a fun adventure though. Me and Loki love adventures, don’t we, brother?” Thor–the blond one–looked over at his dark-haired brother.
Loki smirked. “I suppose…but I love pranks more.”
“Don’t remind me.” Thor muttered. “Who are all of you?”
“Feather.” Feather introduced herself, then gestured to Crosshair. “And this is–”
“Doesn’t matter.” he growled, not lowering his weapon. “I don’t trust them.”
Feather glared at him. “You don’t just say that when they’re right in front of you, Crosshair.”
Someone else snickered as the rest introduced themselves.
Crosshair
They didn’t look trustworthy…..
Feather had been wary too. What’d happened? Why was she suddenly more open to them?
He’d had enough of these characters……
(Hitchens mostly. Elliot, Elissa, Milo and Cammie were okay.)
And adding these new ones was only going to make the problem worse.
He still didn’t want to lower his rifle.
(I’m thinking one of them says something that sets him off, even if they don’t mean it, and it doesn’t have to be Thor or Loki.)
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
April 26, 2023 at 7:52 pm #141547@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings
Can I break this giant group up now by adding my villains in?
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April 26, 2023 at 8:42 pm #141548Sure! Ik I haven’t been rping a lot recently but however we break it up it would be nice if my oc’s could end up with some new people lol, I don’t think Layson meshes very well with Dante and Serin 🤣
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
April 26, 2023 at 8:56 pm #141550Ooh yeah that sounds fun!
XD yeah we’ve probably tortured poor Layson
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:April 26, 2023 at 8:58 pm #141551Yeah he needs a break from Serin Stabby Stick
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- This reply was modified 1 year, 8 months ago by MineralizedWritings.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
April 26, 2023 at 9:55 pm #141556🤣🤣I’m so gonna use that nickname now
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:April 26, 2023 at 10:07 pm #141557XDXD
It is fitting, if I do say so myself.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
April 27, 2023 at 1:34 am #141560🎵It takes a long time to wait 🌻
April 27, 2023 at 2:07 am #141561@mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 ok!
(Lol Serin Stabby Stick 😂)
@keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76Here’s their descriptions.
Callin Maddox: about 5’11”, bulky, strong, dark skin, intelligent, doesn’t like getting his hands dirty, his species has natural armor plates on their back and arms (kinda like an armadillo or an alligator? Not really sure how to explain that part), wears a white button down shirt with a vest and black pants
Ace (last name tbd): a reptilian looking species, green scales, yellow eyes, uses knives to fight, fast and agile, enjoys the trill of fighting and hurting people, about Dante’s age and size, follows Callin’s orders, wears an all black uniform that allows him to move around easily
I don’t have drawings of them yet, but this is a bit like what Maddox’s hair looks like
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April 27, 2023 at 2:09 am #141562And this picture I found on Pinterest is pretty close to how I imagine Ace
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April 27, 2023 at 3:44 am #141563@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings
You guys can group the charries however you want, but I plan on having my three stay together. Other than that I don’t care.
Dante
For once, things were going well in the castle for Dante. There were no sea monsters, no deep fountains he had to swim in, and, as far as he knew, no one was currently angry with him. Things were almost going too well.
He pushed his worries away and tried to focus on his conversation with Steve.
“So I offered her a handshake like any normal person would, but apparently that was the wrong thing to-”
“What’s that?” Steve interrupted.
Dante looked down to see a small metal cylinder roll to a stop next to his feet. A tiny red light blinked steadily on its side.
“Get down!”
Before he could even think, Dante found himself crouched on the floor with Steve crouched in front of him, holding out his shield. Dante waited for an explosion. Instead, he heard an odd whirring sound. The metal cylinder began to spin on the floor and thick, white smoke poured out of both ends. Within seconds, the smoke filled the entire hall. Coughing and alarmed voices were heard all over, but it was impossible to tell where each individual sound came from.
Then a steady, reasonable voice cut through the confusion, causing everyone to pause and listen for a moment.
“Dante Tucker. You know who we are.”
A chill ran down Dante’s spine.
No. It can’t be.
“We’ve been across half the galaxy looking for you,” The voice continued. “So why don’t you save us some trouble. You owe us at least that. Come on out without putting up a fight, and we won’t be forced to kill your companions.”
Ellie
Ellie coughed and her eyes stung as she walked purposefully with Eddie down the hall.
What is this? What’s going on? Is anyone hurt? Who was that man speaking to Dante? Is he here to kill him? Wait. No. Focus, Ellie. Just get yourself and Ed to safety. Dante will me fine. He can handle this on his own… right?
A scaly face suddenly appeared in the smoke only a few inches away from Ellie’s own. She let out a squeak and quickly pointed her gun at it. Her hands shook. The yellow eyes stared at her and a small red tongue flicked out of its mouth. Then, as quickly as it had appeared, the face was gone.
Heart pounding, Ellie reached back and grabbed her sister’s wrist. Together, they continued through the smoke.
(I hope this rp makes sense… :/ Also, the smoke from the smoke bomb isn’t poisonous or anything, it just stings your eyes and makes you cough.)
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April 27, 2023 at 8:41 am #141565Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@loopylin i’m assuming these villains are going to disappear…?
Or are we going to have a hostage situation or something? 😅
April 27, 2023 at 10:54 am #141577@freedomwriter76 No, I was thinking that most of the characters would run away in different directions, forming the smaller groups. Some of them can stay and fight though, if you want. I’m not sure I know what you mean by disappear?
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April 27, 2023 at 11:02 am #141578Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@loopylin ok, sounds good to me! (the only one of mine that would probably fight would be Steve XD)
but….I want Steve with Dante, if you don’t mind😂
I meant them just leave, but since the group will be splitting and leaving, maybe your villains could meet up with another group or something…cause havoc, cause conflict, get things moving 😉 lol, idk, just throwing ideas out here 😂
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