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March 17, 2023 at 3:04 pm #137438Anonymous
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@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin
ADOLPHUS
Ara came forward a few more steps, gently placing a hand on his arm. “Adolphus…I’m so sorry. I’m sure he passed honorably…”
He closed his eyes, letting out a deep breath.
He hadn’t seen it, but he knew what Dietrich had done.
Everyone did.
Most people said it was scandalous, dying for his Jewish stepbrothers and all, and maybe once, Adolphus had thought the same…but not anymore.
It wasn’t scandalous.
It was…honorable.
Heroic.
Showed bravery in a way nothing else could.
Showed sacrifice…and love.
Adolphus opened his eyes, his grip on Aiden slightly loosening. “It’s…okay. Really.”
He smiled at Arabella. “Really, it’s okay.”
He turned to Jason. “Maybe we should get moving.”
Jason nodded. “Yeah…I’d say so. You,” he turned towards Steve, “are you coming with us, or would you rather be left here?”
Steve blinked, having been glancing between everyone, but he slowly nodded. “Yeah…I’ll come. Can I have my shield back now?”
Jason kicked it over to him. “Sure. But don’t try any funny business.”
“Wouldn’t think of it.” Steve replied quietly, grabbing his shield and standing.
He stood taller than anyone in the room, minus Adolphus.
Adolphus turned to Arabella. “Are you and your friend here, Asher, coming? We might be able to find some others. Eddie saw her sister in one of these…mirrors.”
March 17, 2023 at 3:11 pm #137441Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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lol, poor Steve…no one trusts him in here 😂
March 17, 2023 at 3:22 pm #137444@freedomwriter76
AHH POOR JARED 😭😭😭
ACHERON!!! 😡😤😡😤
Ooh but this will be fun 😏.
And XD Poor Steve 😭😅😆
#HugRikerSquad
March 17, 2023 at 3:28 pm #137450Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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AHH POOR JARED 😭😭😭
I know…the baby…😭😭😭😭
ACHERON!!! 😡😤😡😤
He’s just horrible 😡😭
Ooh but this will be fun 😏.
Lol, for sure XD You wanna RP as Matthew? 🙂
And XD Poor Steve 😭😅😆
Lol, yeah…😂
March 17, 2023 at 6:29 pm #137469@Freedomwriter76 @Mineralizedwritings
Tony will have a FANTABULOUS nickname for Acheron😂
Oh My Gosh CANNOT WAIT for that XDXDXD
And yes, your poor baby!!! 😭😭😭
Ugh yes 😡😡
And sure! 😊
Matthew
Tony stared, eyes wide, mouth slightly ajar for a long moment.
Then his eyes glanced over to Lesli, Hurricane Hair–I mean Tauren–and me. “…What just happened?”
I sighed. “We-we really don’t kn-know. It’s happened b-before. They…they j-just disappear.”
Suddenly, the door opened, and two figures stepped in.
One smiled and lifted a hand in greeting, “Good day.”
I flinched at the sight of the him. He had dark hair…and his piercing black eyes had a dangerous glint behind them. And…
He had weapons.
Two swords, strapped to his back, the hilts protruding from behind him.
The back of my neck tingled at the impressions wafting of off him.
Malicious…cruel…deceiving…dark.
My stomach churned, my eyes wide with fear. I remembered the last person who I had felt like this around.
Vance.
I shuddered, and shrunk back, next to Tauren.
I could faintly hear Lesli say,“Hi. You’re lost here too?”
The man said, “Yes. Do you know why we’re here…or perhaps, how we can get out?”
I ignored him, instead, I studied the second person. He tried to look expressionless…but I could tell something was wrong.
Very wrong.
My brow furrowed, and I looked him up and down. He had curly black hair and orange eyes.
Then I realized what was around his throat.
It was a collar.
A collar?!
My eyes ticked back and forth between the two newcomers, a sick feeling in my stomach.
The younger man’s eyes were sorrowful and he glanced around nervously, jumping slightly at any sudden noise.
I squeezed my eyes shut at the strong feelings coming from him.
Guilt…sadness…and fear.
Opening my eyes, I could feel tears pricking at them as I watched the young man.
Then, a sudden hot anger rose up in me, and I turned and glared at the other man with all the fury I could muster in my small form.
My fists were clenched, and I could feel Tauren’s gaze on me.
I ignored him, only stared menacingly into the other man’s eyes, letting him know exactly how I felt about him.
“A good day,” I muttered sarcastically under my breath. “Yeah, sure, it’s been a good day.”
I raised my voice. “No, w-we don’t know how we got here. I-in fact, we have no clue. And no, we don’t know how to get out.”
Then I said softly, “Like we’d help you anyway!”
I realized how much I was acting like Dylan. I laughed softly.
He’d be proud.
#HugRikerSquad
March 17, 2023 at 6:30 pm #137470@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76
WoW Matthew had enough!! And he barely got any yet! XD My baby is UPSET!!
Don’t mess with angry Matthew 😂🤭
#HugRikerSquad
March 17, 2023 at 6:49 pm #137471Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
Woo, go Matthew!!!!! 😂
Great RP’s, y’all! 🎉
TONY
Tony smirked.
Well, this Matthew kid had some hidden bravery.
The man at the front, the man dressed in all black, turned to Matthew.
There was something…off about him.
But he merely smirked. “Now, now, no need to be rash…”
“Who are you, Crow?”
The man turned to Tony, eyes narrowed. “Crow?”
“Y’know…the black, obnoxious bird that likes shiny things?”
“I know what a crow is.”
Tony nodded. “I’d hope so. You’re wearing all black, you’re loud, and you have those gold things. Thought it was a fitting nickname for you.”
“My name is Acheron.”
“Nice to meet you, Crow. Who’s your companion? Why does he have a collar on?”
Acheron’s eyes narrowed further, black eyes piercing. “You ask a lot of questions.”
Tony shrugged, dropping the man a wink and smirk. “I’m curious, what can I say?”
Acheron chuckled. “No matter. I don’t mind.”
His body language said otherwise.
“This is Jared, a…worker of mine. Now, as for you,” his gaze turned to Matthew, “why would you say that to me? Shouldn’t you be quiet?”
“Why don’t you just let him say whatever he wants, hmm? You just got here, Crow, so what makes you think you can come in here and give orders?”
Acheron’s piercing eyes turned back on Tony, but slowly, he smiled and laughed. “I merely asked a question and he seemed to be…harsh. But if none of you know where we are or how to get out, well, why don’t we help each other? What do you say? I can help you, and you can help me. Now that I have introduced myself, who are all of you?”
“Tony Stark, and they are Matthew, Lesli, and Hurricane Hair. What makes you think we’d want you to come with us?”
Acheron laughed, taking another step towards Tony, their noses almost touching. He smiled sadistically. “Aren’t we all in the same…problem?”
March 17, 2023 at 6:50 pm #137472Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Tony is too much fun to RP 😂XD
March 17, 2023 at 6:59 pm #137473@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6
Tauren watches as Mathew spews angrily at the newcomers. He can’t blame him, they doesn’t look all that nice.
“Good going Mathew!” Lesli leans behind Tauren to give Mathew a hi-five. Her ecstatic smiles says how she feels about the situation.
“Tony Stark, and they are Matthew, Lesli, and Hurricane Hair. What makes you think we’d want you to come with us?”
???
when is that going to stop?
Tauren glances over at Lesli, but is met with an unsympathetic smirk.
“Yeah!” Lesli whispers, reaching over to ruffle Tauren’s curls. “Extra hurricane.”
Tauren sighs.
“Aren’t we all in the same…problem?” The man approaches Tony, standing too close for any normal conversation.
“I’m going to go talk to him.” Tauren says, getting up out of his chair and neatly pushing it in behind him.
“Hey!” Tauren says, casting a nervous glance at Tony’s intense conversation. “Jared, right?”
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
March 17, 2023 at 7:07 pm #137474Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Lol, poor Tauren…sorry buddy, I don’t think your nickname is going anywhere anytime soon XD😂
If ever XD
JARED
“Hey!” the boy, Hurricane Hair, was coming his way, “Jared, right?”
Jared stared at him.
He was trying to talk…
…to him?
Since when had anyone tried to engage him in a real conversation?
When had anyone ever tried to talk to him…a mere slave?
Wasn’t he just dirt under everyone else’s feet.
He cast a furtive glance at Acheron, but he was engaged in a heated argument with Tony Stark…the man seemed pretty…well-matched to Acheron.
Jared faced Hurricane Hair, his voice dropping to a nervous whisper, and he still kept glancing ever so often at Acheron, making sure he didn’t hear…else Jared would feel painful consequences. “…Hello…”
March 17, 2023 at 7:16 pm #137475@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6
“…Hello…” The boy shoots a nervous glance over at Tony and the other man.
Tauren shifts nervously.
Something is terribly wrong here.
“I know he said I’m hurricane hair.” Tauren keeps his voice low, noticing Jared’s nervousness. “My name’s actually Tauren.”
“And that’s Lesli over there. She’s a friend of mine. We just ate, but there’s plenty of leftovers if you want them over there.”
Tauren pauses as the boy stares blankly at him.
(Can Tony just like punch the guy already?! Lol, I want justice for Jared.)
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
March 17, 2023 at 7:23 pm #137477Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Lol, don’t worry, Tony will probably punch him soon enough XD Glad you like Jared ❤️
JARED
“And that’s Lesli over there. She’s a friend of mine. We just ate, but there’s plenty of leftovers if you want them over there.”
Jared stared at him.
He had offered him…food?
His stomach growled at just the thought.
He didn’t eat much.
Normally only crumbs…if even that.
Sometimes even the dogs were fed before he was.
But that was just how the world worked, wasn’t it?
Besides…he was worthless…he was dirt…he was nothing.
“…Are you okay?”
Jared blinked. “…Yes…but I-I really shouldn’t…”
He glanced back over at Acheron, who was still in a heated discussion with Tony.
March 17, 2023 at 7:34 pm #137479@freedomwriter76
Jared blinked. “…Yes…but I-I really shouldn’t…”
Tauren gives a side eye to Lesli, who has been observing the conversation from a distance with a questioning gaze.
“You don’t seem… ok…”
“Hey kid what’s wrong here?” Lesli says, walking up next to Tauren. “You just really shy or…” She nods over at the man talking to Tony.
“Is he a problem?”
Tauren smiles wryly. Obviously Lesli doesn’t care what Archeron thinks.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
March 17, 2023 at 7:42 pm #137480Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Lol, love ya, Lesli!!! <3😂
JARED
Jared blinked a few times.
No one talked about Acheron like that.
Everyone knew how painful the consequences would be if they ever did.
Jared didn’t even know what to say.
“I-I….” he glanced over at Acheron, and Acheron turned to face him, so he instantly looked away, fear filling every vein of his body.
Acheron faced Tony again. “Get out of my way, fool. If you don’t want me around, then get out of my way so I don’t have to be around.”
“Can’t do that, Crow. You’re pretty…suspicious.”
Acheron laughed and grabbed Tony’s arm. “You don’t want to mess with me.”
A blue glow appeared around Tony’s hand.
With a loud blast, Acheron flung into the wall, knocking one of his swords out of it’s sheath. He glared up at Tony. “Why, you-!?”
“Don’t touch me again, Crow, or I’ll make sure you don’t come back from the next hit. You leave me and these kids alone and we’ll have no problems. Otherwise…” the blue brightened, “you’ll be gone forever.”
“You wouldn’t.”
Tony took another step towards Acheron. “Try me.”
(oof…Tony’s serious now XD)
March 17, 2023 at 7:43 pm #137481Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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that escalated quickly….😂
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