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March 16, 2023 at 6:59 pm #137270
@freedomwriter76
Ah yes I can’t wait! *rubs hands together*
Should I do an RP as Uvah? Becasue I’m fine with you going ahead and writing in Viola first! I’m not really sure what i’d have Uvah do anyway
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:March 16, 2023 at 7:02 pm #137274Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@princesachronicle22. I can do Viola if you and your brother are both fine with it! Or you can be Uvah…whatever you want! đ
March 16, 2023 at 7:09 pm #137282@freedomwriter76 sorry Iâve been busy today đ also Iâm good with the doggie! @queen_of_alvastia
AGH ACHERON!!!
AND JARED đ I REMEMBER HIM!!!!!! SOOOOOOB!!!
Arabella
Araâs face paled, her heart falling into the pit of her stomach. Adolphusâ face was torn with deep pain, eyes filling with tears. He clenched his fists, still holding his son, as if clinging to him for life.
Ara sucked in a breath, remember the young man sheâd met. Heâd been soâŠ
BrokenâŠ
She looked down.
âIâŠIâm so sorry. I didnâtâŠâ She closed her eyes, taking in a breath. Met Adolphusâs gaze, and then Steffiâs. âI had no idea. I canâtâŠcanât imagine losing a siblingâŠâ
In truthâŠshe couldnât.
She hadnât had the blessing of having blood siblingsâŠbut thenâŠshe met Paxton.
And now?
She couldnât imagine life without him.
Sheâd only known him a short timeâŠbut it felt like forever.
She took a few steps forward, gently placing a hand on Adolphusâ arm, as he was quite a bit taller then her. âAdolphusâŠIâm so sorry. Iâm sure he passed honorablyâŠâ
Grimm
Grimm turned to Riker and Leon, coming out from the memory. He blinked, fists unclenching from around the locket.
He glanced down, and then over to November, Paxton and YosĂ. Smiled slightly.
Paxton seemed to be eating something, blue eyes bright and wide as ever, listening as November tried his best to start a conversation.
âS-So YosĂ is it? AhâŠthanks for helping meâŠreally. Howâd you end up hereâŠ?â
But before the lad could answer, another figure emerged, setting everyone once again on edge.
âRiker, wait-no!â Leon cried as Riker stumbled to sit up, fists clenching. Grimm glared into the shadows and YosĂ was quickly to his feet, half standing, half kneeling, poised to jump at any would be attacker.
November grabbed Paxton, and the women the other children.
But the guest, seemed to pay them no mind and insteadâŠ
Fell to flat on their face.
Grimm raised a brow.
HuhâŠ
He glanced at November.
Talk about Deja VuâŠ
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#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMarch 16, 2023 at 7:12 pm #137283@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings (Min still wants us to tag her for things, right? Even though sheâs busy?)
I think it would be easier to write what Silvia does from my own charactersâ points of view instead of from her pov
Ellie
Allen and Layson stumbled through the room supporting a half-conscious Serin between them. Maylee clung anxiously to Laysonâs free hand. Ellie walked behind them, carrying the armor Serin had removed to get to the injury.
The sound of Danteâs bare feet running up behind them made Ellie turn around. He slowed and began walking next to her.
âDid you get it?â She asked in a hushed tone.
âYeah.â
Ellie was about to ask him to show her, but Dante suddenly looked up and stared intently across the room.
âWhoâs that?â
A tall woman carrying a staff stood looking at them a ways off. She took a few steps forward, paused, and then rushed over to them.
âWhat happened? Is your friend hurt? I can help if sheâs hurt.â
Everyone took a few steps back, surprised by how fast she had appeared.
âWho are you?â Allen asked.
âOh, sorry I didnât introduceâŠâ the woman looked suddenly flustered and nervously brushed some of her messy blonde hair behind her ear. âMy name is Silvia Spruce. Iâm a healer. Would you allow me to help your friend?â
* * * (short time jump!)
They had agreed to let the mysterious woman help. It wasnât like they had had much of a choice, anyway. Serin was getting worse by the minute.
Silvia now bustled about, asking people to fetch things and attending to Serinâs wound with a mixture strange herbs from her bag. She had asked Dante to build a fire after taking the vial of serpent poison. Dante managed to do so easily, despite his limited resources and broken lighter.
When he finished building the fire, he stuck one hand in the slowly growing flames and wiggled his fingers, letting the heat dry his skin and calm his nerves. Ellie crouched down next to him and watched with a worried expression. He looked at her curiously.
âYou know it doesnât hurt me, right?â
She let out a small sigh. âYeah⊠but still⊠it makes me nervous.â
Dante glanced from her to his hand and back again a couple times. Then he grinned at her and stuck his other hand in the fire.
Ellieâs tail flicked in annoyance and she glared back at him.
Silvia suddenly interrupted by appearing next them and sticking a small pot over the fire. She uncorked the vial of poison and poured it in and then began tossing in several other ingredients from her bag. She was so focused on her work, she hardly noticed Ellie and Dante sitting next to her and watching curiously. Soon, she had ground everything in the pot to a slowly bubbling paste. She pulled it off the fire and began stirring it and blowing on it to cool down.
Serin lay sleeping a few feet from the fire on top of Ellieâs blue hoodie and few other spare garments. Silvia approached her and carefully applied the paste to her wound. Then she snatched her staff and held the end of it over the wound. A crystal in the tip of the staff glowed blue for a few seconds and then faded. Silvia then let out a breath and stepped back. After a pause, she looked up at the others and spoke.
âWe need to let that sit on the injury for a few minutes and then I will rinse it off and close up the wound as best I can. At that point, hopefully, the poison will be reversed and she will start to heal. But for now, we wait.â
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
March 16, 2023 at 7:13 pm #137284@godlyfantasy12 YAY!! I’ll send her in, she’s over here whimpering bc I separated her from Torryn *hugs Tala* *poofs her into the castle*
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March 16, 2023 at 7:13 pm #137285Woah, that was a long rp, sorry
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
March 16, 2023 at 7:16 pm #137287@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Do you want me to put Tala in now so she and Torryn are introduced together or should I wait? I’m still figuring out whose turn it is lol
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March 16, 2023 at 7:21 pm #137290@princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom
hey how do yâallâs charries look again? Also donât be surprised how Corvina reacts too XD
Also! Corvina is around 18 and yes she has black hair, grey blue eyes, and white pale skin.
Corvina
She was on. The. Ground.
How sheâd suddenly ended up there? She wasnât sure.
Nor did she care.
All Corvina knew was that now, someone or something was pressing, hard, against her spine, screaming into her ear.
Her nails scratched against the floor, eyes searching wildly. A growl, like that of a wild animal escaped her throat. She screeched, sounding like a caged bird, and, without hesitation, flipped, gripping the arm of her attacker and sending her spiraling down with her.
A thud sounded to her right, and, using that as her signal, she pushed herself from the ground, heart pounding.
Her black cowl flew behind her and in an instant the room grew cold, the light dimming as the shadows in the corners draped out, obeying Corvinaâs subconscious commands.
Most didnât just come out and attack her like thisâŠ
Most knew betterâŠ
She carried a presence about her that kept people at bayâŠpeople knew who she was.
Or rather who owned her.
ButâŠsheâd been trained at a young age for battleâŠand she could take anyone who dare challenge her.
She screeched again, a mix of agitation, anger andâŠalsoâŠfear coursing through her.
She stretched out her hand to the attacker, a flurry of sharp, needle-like shadows following, flying out in midair before coming to a stop, inches from the womanâs face.
Corvina held her hand out, head tilted slightly. She growled, chest heaving as a strand of hair fell over one eye. Her adrenaline slowly began to waver.
âDonât. You. Touch me,â she hissed.
âHm,â She chuckled. âPerhaps you havenât lost your touchâŠâ
And at that, Corvina couldnât help but smile.
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#ProtectSebMarch 16, 2023 at 7:24 pm #137292@loopylin đ
COUGH COUGH I totally ship Ellie & Dante COUGH COUGH
plus it would be hilarious cuz her sis would be like UMM EXCUSE ME?! *cue hilarious side smirk from Dante whilst Ellie is like HEH SURPRISE???*
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#ProtectSebMarch 16, 2023 at 7:25 pm #137293@queen_of_alvastia we can just say sheâs already there if u like đ maybe bumbling in behind him XD
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#ProtectSebMarch 16, 2023 at 7:29 pm #137294@godlyfantasy12 XDXD She’s like of yup that’s my master XD But it would be interesting to see the charries’ reactions if she just charges in XD
(I hope that doesn’t sound pushy or anything it was just an idea. XD)
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March 16, 2023 at 7:29 pm #137295Ha! Yeah that would be hilarious! Especially since Eddie and Dante have somewhat of a rivalry in the main storyline that Ellie does not approve of.
Still undecided on the ship being cannon thoâŠ
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
March 16, 2023 at 7:31 pm #137296@loopylin it totally should beâŠand not cuz Iâm a sucker for shipsâŠ. XD XD
gaaaasp we should make a Ship Gameshow like one of those couple game shows and get all of our charries to participate BAHAHAH where they have to answer questions about their significant other
Im imagining Dante and Ellie participating in this and Ellie being an unwilling participant the entiiiire time. But Danteâs just going with it and having fun XD XD
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#ProtectSebMarch 16, 2023 at 7:32 pm #137297@godlyfantasy12 Also, Corvina is epic and that scene was real cool
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
March 16, 2023 at 7:34 pm #137299gaaaasp we should make a Ship Gameshow like one of those couple game shows and get all of our charries to participate BAHAHAH where they have to answer questions about their significant other
Im imagining Dante and Ellie participating in this and Ellie being an unwilling participant the entiiiire time. But Danteâs just going with it and having fun XD XD
lol, yes. I love that idea.
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
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