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March 16, 2023 at 3:58 pm #137213
Heey!! XD I love your Charrie!!! He seems fun and, that was fun to read!!!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:March 16, 2023 at 4:03 pm #137214@anyone
I also kinda want to add a couple more characters sometime soon but I can’t really decide who.
I could add a couple characters from my wonderland story (then I could stop resisting my urge to constantly break the fourth wall), Nico and Mags from my cryptid story, or a couple villain characters from Dante’s past.Which ones do you guys think I should do? (If you don’t really care, you don’t have to respond, I just like asking)
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March 16, 2023 at 4:05 pm #137215Oh yeah that sounds good!! I’m especially interested in Dante’s past villains…
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:March 16, 2023 at 4:55 pm #137224Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@loopylin. The villains from Dante’s past would be really cool. 😏
March 16, 2023 at 5:04 pm #137228Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@EVERYONE
Sooo…I’m adding a couple more villains to be spread out, lol, to cause conflicts in different groups, cause I’m ready to get this castle up and moving again, who’s with me? 😉 (no stress if you can’t RP much! I just think having some conflict will help all of us out a bit! ❤️)
Viola is also still wandering around, but I already know which group she’ll run into, lol! 😅
So, without further ado…I introduce my first villain (who will have another charrie with him…)
So, everyone meet Acheron. 😐
Age: 31-ish (somewhere around there, lol! XD)
Personality: Vain, controlling, manipulative, cruel, sadistic, abusive, charismatic, heartless, literally a human representation of darkness/evil
Looks: Long jet-black hair that comes a bit below his shoulders. Pale, almost completely white, skin. Black eyes. Wears an outfit/mask like the pic with black armored legs and black boots. Carries two double swords that have dragon-decorated sheaths that he carries in a double holder on his back.
March 16, 2023 at 5:09 pm #137229Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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The one who will be with Acheron…the baby of this WIP!!!! 😭😭😭
Jared!!!
Age: 24
Personality: Quiet, soft-spoken, guilt-ridden, jumpy, flighty, cautious, protective, has low self-esteem and PTSD
Looks: Curly black hair that comes below his chin, pale skin, orange eyes. Wears a red coat with spiked black armor on the shoulders, overtop of a plain black tunic, black baggy pants, and black rubber boots that come up to his knees. Has a tightened collar around his neck with a golden lock on it.
Other: Acheron’s slave…deeply hurt…deeply broken 😭
March 16, 2023 at 5:16 pm #137230Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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And this guy will be on his own.
A villain that is no longer sure if he’s on the right side…and a villain that is ridden with guilt over something he did/saw…hehe…😉
Name: Peter Nathaniel Petrov
Age: 27
Personality: Serious, stern, cold, unfazed (most of the time…😏), protective, stubborn, hates change (as we all do, lol!), uncertain about everything right now, secretly falling apart inside, questioning everything he once knew, curious, quiet most of the time, hardened by a tragic past
Looks: Bright blonde wavy hair, gray eyes, pale skin, has a bit of stubble on his chin/cheeks. Wearing a 1950s era Soviet Army/Police uniform with long, tall black boots, but isn’t wearing a hat.
Other: Currently ridden with guilt after killing a teenage girl that was trying to escape the prison he works at…😶
March 16, 2023 at 5:19 pm #137232Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Do you wanna RP as Ara? 😊
March 16, 2023 at 6:14 pm #137247Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings. @godlyfantasy12. @lightoverdarkness6. @keilah-h. @theloonyone. @loopylin. @elishavet-pidyon. @queen_of_alvastia. (I think that’s everyone that’s here…???) Is there anyone that has a group that they want a villain/conflict in?
Bc I have Felix/Frida, Hitchens, Acheron/Jared, and Peter all wandering around for conflict purposes, lol.
Oh, and @princesachronicle22, @thearcaneaxiom, Viola is ready to join our group whenever we are, lol! 😂
March 16, 2023 at 6:48 pm #137262@princesachronicle22 Awww thank you! I love writing him and I’m glad you enjoy him XDXD
btw I love your little tag/quote! AMEN! 🙂
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March 16, 2023 at 6:52 pm #137263@elishavet-pidyon Haha this will be fun! 😂😂 Torryn’s a crazy mess so he will feel right at home I’m sure
@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12Y’all I have a question on what’s allowed here….well it’s actually Torryn’s question. He told me he wants his dog in here and I promised to ask you guys!
Tala’s a huge, full grown, pure brown husky mix with ice blue eyes. She’s pretty much one of Torryn’s only friends XD She’s a one-person dog and he can control her literally with a look. BUT…
She’s giant (like over 100lbs), can be barky and energetic. Not like she’d HURT anyone – unless they either threatened Torryn or he commanded her to go into “attack mode” but she can come across as overwhelming. So if any of y’all’s charries would freak out or get scared of that, I can keep her out XD
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March 16, 2023 at 6:54 pm #137264Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. That’s good with me!
Lol, all of my charries’ kids will just want to pet her😂
March 16, 2023 at 6:55 pm #137265March 16, 2023 at 6:56 pm #137267@freedomwriter76
Hehe she’ll love that XDXD
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March 16, 2023 at 6:58 pm #137269Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. AHH, SHE’S SO CUTE!!!! 😍😍😍
Haha, I’m glad!!! The kids will LOVE her! XD
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