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March 14, 2023 at 3:53 pm #136749
Hey @godlyfantasy12
Would you be interested in RPing for Corvina, so she can maybe meet Liren with Namal and Phervin?
He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
March 14, 2023 at 4:17 pm #136751@thearcaneaxiom yup! I’ve got quite a bit of RPing to do 😂 (not technically here but yea lol) @princessachronicle22 (also don’t be surprised if Corvina knows somethings up with Kirrtes. She’s loved herself under dark influences for a long time)
Corvina
Thankfully, the voice inside had gone silent rooms back, allowing Corvina amble time to think. To sort through all of the information she’d just been given…
To decide what she was to do…
Why did things seem easier when she hadn’t had any choices?
When she thought her brother was still…
Her heart quickened, eyes brimming with tears.
No…this…this was all she ever wanted…all she’d ever dreamed about.
To have her brother…
To…to make things right!
A second chance…
To keep him safe…
And…and She was right…if…if it took resorting to…drastic measures…then that’s what she’d have to do.
Though…it hopefully wouldn’t come to that.
Her brother…he was so…sweet. Sensitive. And she knew…knew he loved that girl…the princess.
But Love? Love was fleeting. Corvina knew that all too well.
You had to watch out for yourself.
And once the boy made his decision, she’d never understand. No matter his reasons.
But Corvina would be there…for her brother.
“If he’ll ever forgive you…”
Corvina’s fists clenched, ignoring the whispers as she turned a corner.
She stopped abruptly, paling slightly at the sight of three strangers, all of which looked formidable…
She swallowed, hissing inwardly.
She hadn’t been paying attention to her surroundings!
Foolish!
She turned her head, wondering if she could quickly vanish, but, instead, decided to take her chances.
She could surely take these people…
Though…
The one man…
Holding a rather large sword…
His gaze rested on her curiously.
And the sword…
Something seemed…off about it.
Corvina tensed a bit, gauging everyone’s expression.
This would be…interesting….
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMarch 14, 2023 at 4:28 pm #136754@princesachronicle22 I am good with that!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
March 14, 2023 at 4:37 pm #136757Love it! I’m now curious though about why Corvina notices the giant sword, but not the blatantly broken arm holding it, lol!
He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
March 14, 2023 at 4:48 pm #136761@thearcaneaxiom HA probably cuz her author didn’t realize the arm was broken….that RP was written quickly XD
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMarch 14, 2023 at 4:49 pm #136762@loopylin Considering you pulled out your charries, are you in the group with me and theloonyone anymore?
Speaking of which…
@theloonyone catch my latest RP? It’s your turn……"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
March 14, 2023 at 4:54 pm #136765Whoopsie! 🤣😅 Well, I’m sure she’ll notice eventually! Maybe it’s just the grandeur of the sword, and she hasn’t noticed anything else because of the distraction?
He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
March 14, 2023 at 6:48 pm #136790@freedomwriter76 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings
Matthew
I watched as Carter spoke to the man, Tony, a million questions flying out of his mouth, smiling wryly.
Tony didn’t know what he was getting into.
Glancing at Tauren, or ‘Hurricane Hair’ as Tony had dubbed him, I felt bad for him. But…
His hair did kinda look like a hurricane came through it.
I bit back a laugh at that, barely suppressing a smile behind my hand.
But quickly, the smile vanished.
The bell…the dreaded bell…rang once more. No, twice.
And Carter and Carmen disappeared in front of my eyes.
I sucked in a breath, my eyes wide.
Why does this keep happening?!?!
I glanced over at Tauren, Tony, and Lesli. They gaped at the places where Carter and Carmen had been. Then Lesli glanced at me, giving me a comforting smile.
I squeezed my eyes shut.
Carter…Carmen…Kaine…Everly…and…Lyla.
Would I ever see them again? Where were they being taken?
Were they okay?
I sent up a silent prayer for them, then slowly opened my eyes.
I could feel the panic rising in my chest, but I forced it back down.
Suddenly, I felt a peaceful voice whisper in my mind, letting me know that they were all okay. And I had a peculiar feeling. As if…
We might one day meet again.
#HugRikerSquad
March 14, 2023 at 7:40 pm #136808@lightoverdarkness6 Aww, Matthew! 🥰😢 now I almost want to put them back in again.
🎵It takes a long time to wait 🌻
March 15, 2023 at 12:00 am #136850Sorry, I’m here
And I’m bad at writing emotional scenes 😑😅
Elissa
“But all the same, his advice to stay far away if it ever happened again was probably valid,” Feather finished speaking.
Elissa looked down at her fidgeting hands thinking about what she had just been told. Obviously, some bad things had happened to Crosshair, things that had left a lasting effect on him. It was terrible and she wished she knew how to talk to him or even Feather about it, but- but he had really scared her. She wasn’t sure if she could talk to him or give some semblance of comfort and more than that she was sure he wouldn’t want it from her. “It’s a good thing he has you,” Elissa spoke slowly and carefully to Feather, “You two seem really close.”
March 15, 2023 at 11:17 am #136875Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@lightoverdarkness6. @mineralizedwritings.
Tony
A bell rang twice.
Tony blinked.
Carter and Carmen had been there one minute…gone the next.
He stared, eyes wide, mouth slightly ajar for a long moment, his mind still not quite able to comprehend what he had just seen.
What was this place!?
Meeting random people…people disappearing into thin air?
What, was Tony dreaming that he was in a fairytale!?
Tony’s eyes roved over Lesli, Hurricane Hair, and Matthew. “…What just happened?”
March 15, 2023 at 3:55 pm #136983@queen_of_alvastia here is the castle!!!
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon hey could queenie join our group? Also could we start back up again?? Ik Elishavet is busy some but yea.
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMarch 15, 2023 at 3:58 pm #136986@godlyfantasy12 Aww thanks girl! I guess I will see what the consensus is from the others….
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
March 15, 2023 at 3:59 pm #136987@theloonyone You’re good! I’m not the best at them either, but I try.
It doesn’t help that many of my charries are tough and seemingly emotionless……
Feather
“It’s a good thing he has you. You two seem really close.” Elissa told her.
Feather chuckled. “He couldn’t care less about me following him around at first……then I guess I kinda grew on him. Then came the Empire…We were separated for months…..” She sighed. “But I’m glad we have each other now, too.” She looked around. “Now, where was….”
The person they were supposed to treat wasn’t there. A bell rang distantly.
“Huh. Weird.” She opened the door just to make sure no one else had disappeared. “Crosshair? Milo? Both of you still here?”
“Yes.” came the reply. “Why?”
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
March 15, 2023 at 4:03 pm #136993Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. @queen_of_alvastia. I’d love for Queenie to join!!! ❤️
And I want that group to get moving again…I miss my baby. 😭 And Leon! 😍
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