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February 27, 2023 at 8:06 pm #134864
@freedomwriter76
XDXD Not at all!
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
February 27, 2023 at 8:11 pm #134866@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6
hehe this is fun
Carter
“Anyways…are you sure you want to know?”
“Name’s Tauren.” Tauren muttered off to the side.
Carter opened his mouth to answer.
“Ye-”
“Nope!” Carmen suddenly appeared at Carter’s side and put a hand on his shoulder.
“We’re good. We don’t need to hear it. Excuse my brother. He forgets his manners sometimes.” -at this he gave her a good glare that she pretended not to notice- “I’m Carmen, this is Carter, that’s Tauren and Lesli, and that there’s Matthew.” She finished with a smile.
“It’s nice to meet you.”
Ok, I’ll give someone else a chance to rp now, sorry XD
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February 27, 2023 at 8:11 pm #134867February 27, 2023 at 11:18 pm #134884Elliot
Crosshair stared him down, “You’re welcome to come, but don’t expect me to want to be friends.”
What? Had he done something? “Oh, I would never imagine it,” Elliot mumbled under his breath, keeping himself from saying anything more. They continued down the hall in silence until Elliot spoke up, “So how long have you two been here?”
Milo
Aurivis turned and started walking from the castle and out into the empty field. Milo turned to Feather, “I guess we just go back and wait. Unless you have any other ideas?” He thought for a moment. “Maybe Crosshair and Elissa will be back soon with some supplies.”
February 28, 2023 at 12:31 am #134889@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings
Dante
Dante sighed. The rest of the group was blocked from view from where he was by the serpent corpse. Allen had left to join them, so now Dante sat alone in a puddle of water, damp clothes clinging to his skin, next to the fountain that had almost drowned him only a minute ago.
He squeezed his eye shut against the memory, but it came anyway.
It had been dark. And cold. And silent. He couldn’t run. He couldn’t fight. He wasn’t even able to call out for someone to save him. He had felt completely helpless, more so than he had felt in a long time.
As he thought about it, his throat clenched and his breathing began to speed up. He reached instinctively for his pocket and pulled out his lighter. The familiar weight in his hand calmed him slightly, and he flicked it on with his thumb. Nothing happened. He scowled and tried flicking it on again. It made a strange noise, but, again, no flame appeared.
It doesn’t work. A strange panic suddenly came over him and he started flicking it on over and over.
Click, click, click, click, click, click, click, click… click.
He threw the lighter in frustration and it clattered across the floor, sliding to a stop next to the dead serpent’s head. He buried his face in his arms.
Of course it doesn’t work, Dante. It’s just as soaked as you are. He told himself.
It’s not worth getting this mad about. I can get a new one. Just… calm down…
He stayed frozen for a minute, forcing his breathing to slow to a regular pace. Then he stood, took another deep breath, and went to retrieve the lighter.
It had landed in a puddle of semitransparent green saliva that was leaking from the sea monster’s gaping mouth. Dante picked up the lighter and examined the slime curiously. Then he wiped it off on his pants, dropped it in his pocket, and walked over to the others without giving it any further thought.
When Dante returned to the group, he was still soaked, but his face showed almost no sign of what had just happened. The first thing he saw was Serin, half laying, half sitting on the ground with Ellie, who was helping her clean blood off her arm with a ripped piece of cloth. Serin didn’t look good. She was unusually pale and seemed to be sweating despite the cool air. Of course, the sweat could have just been water from the fountain. She looked up and Dante met her eyes.
“Serin? What happened to you?”
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February 28, 2023 at 12:42 am #134890@loopylin AGHHHHHHHH DID DANTE JUST UNWITTINGLY GET POISONED?!?!?!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebFebruary 28, 2023 at 1:02 am #134891@godlyfantasy12 Uhh, maybe? Does poison work like that?? That wasn’t my plan…
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February 28, 2023 at 2:22 am #134893@loopylin oh idk, I was just asking XD XD if it wasn’t ur plan then nope! That’s why I asked! I wasn’t sure cuz usually uhh green stuff out of a serpent like creatures mouth equals not so great consequences XD XD
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebFebruary 28, 2023 at 1:12 pm #134925Sorry It took me so long to get a chance to read this. I love it though! I don’t have much context, but your doing a good job at showing the turmoil Corvina is under, wanting to do what is best, but how much ‘best’ is really just what she thinks needs to happen? She doesn’t want to do anything bad, but her shadow offers rationalizations, saying it’s not as bad as it seems, or this is just who you are. Good job!
Would you like her to meet Liren with Namal and Phervin like Princess said?
He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
February 28, 2023 at 1:15 pm #134926Poor Dante!! And yes I ship him and Ellie by the way 😉
Yeah I think some poisens can infect just by touching your skin but I think Dante will be fine in this case, right Loopy?
Not sure what’ll happen to Serin though, I think poisoness sea creatures normally paralyze things they bite? I have no idea XD
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:February 28, 2023 at 2:24 pm #134936Oh, sorry! I just saw your message. 🙁
Your good! 🙂
Hm, maybe Destry, Fynn and Skyler can join the group too? Or maybe another group…idk 😅.
They don’t have to join any group if y’all’s group is already pretty big. It was just a suggestion because @godlyfantasy12 had mentioned it. Whatever y’all wanna do is fine with me. 😊
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
February 28, 2023 at 2:27 pm #134937maybe a dragon frozen?! Or a “frozen” in gold (dunno what the word is XD)
Not a bad idea… 🤔😆
It would be really cool!!
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
February 28, 2023 at 6:43 pm #134954Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@loopylin. lol, Carmen!!! 🤣🤣🤣
Also……uhm….I just LOVE Dante, ok??? 😅🤭❤️🤣
February 28, 2023 at 6:49 pm #134957Poor Dante!! And yes I ship him and Ellie by the way 😉
Hehe yeah, we’ll see where that goes…
Yeah I think some poisens can infect just by touching your skin but I think Dante will be fine in this case, right Loopy?
Not sure what’ll happen to Serin though, I think poisoness sea creatures normally paralyze things they bite? I have no idea XD
Yeah, let’s just say Dante’s fine.
I think the effect completely depends on the animal it comes from, so you can decide what happens to Serin. If you want it to be less severe, maybe she could just get really weak and have a fever as her body fights it off? If she gets paralyzed, though, that usually means the nervous system is being attacked, which is not something I think she’d survive. But I don’t know. Anything works since this is just fantasy.🎵It takes a long time to wait 🌻
February 28, 2023 at 6:54 pm #134961@freedomwriter76 Thanks! He’s very fun to write
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