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February 16, 2023 at 8:44 pm #133324
@freedomwriter76 Sure!
Eddie
Eddie squinted, trying to think. “Two, or maybe three days? This must be a large planet because the sun was up for a long time. I don’t like this place either. It’s really disorienting…”
She took another large bite of her bread and glared grumpily ahead of her as if the castle itself would be able to sense her disapproval.
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
February 16, 2023 at 8:45 pm #133325@freedomwriter76
Ooooh! Perfect! *rubs hands eagerly and cackles*
I’ve been looking for some conflict! The hostage idea sounds fun
- This reply was modified 1 year, 9 months ago by PrincesaChronicle22.
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:February 16, 2023 at 8:46 pm #133328@freedomwriter76 which group is Hitchens joining? Or rather, which group is he going against
- This reply was modified 1 year, 9 months ago by Loopy.
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
February 16, 2023 at 8:47 pm #133331Whoops I misunderstood. XD Sorry about that.
Gotcha now. *thumbs up*
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19February 16, 2023 at 8:48 pm #133332Your all good! *Gives cheesy grin and thumbs up back*
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:February 16, 2023 at 8:49 pm #133333Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@loopylin. Well…the plan is for him to be holding a few of my charries hostage as of this moment, but he can run into whatever group everyone wants! 😀 He won’t mind hurting plenty of people. 🤐
@princesachronicle. Yesssss….conflict, here we come!!! 😆
February 16, 2023 at 8:50 pm #133334Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@princesachronicle22. I always get your tag wrong! 😅🤣
February 16, 2023 at 8:52 pm #133335Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@loopylin. Conflict, here we COMEEEEEEE!!!! 😅😆
Steffi
“Two, or maybe three days? This must be a large planet because the sun was up for a long time. I don’t like this place either. It’s really disorienting…”
Steffi nodded in agreement, looking ahead, pushing herself forward.
She couldn’t imagine being stuck in this dark place for more than a day.
But then again…there were darker places.
Steffi faced Eddie again with a smile. “So, Eddie, where are you-”
She was interrupted when Henry’s scream carried down the hall.
Steffi abruptly turned, grabbing the wheels of her wheelchair, spinning herself around.
Henry clutched for Adolphus’ pant leg as Jason held Aiden, sobbing, screaming, trying to get Adolphus’ attention.
But Adolphus was frozen…staring down another hall.
Steffi almost went over there, to help Henry and get Adolphus out of it, when footsteps sounded…
…and Frida and Felix came around the corner.
February 16, 2023 at 8:53 pm #133338@freedomwriter76
Same! For some reason I always want to write 27 instead of 76 XD
😀 He won’t mind hurting plenty of people. 🤐
@princesachronicle. Yesssss….conflict, here we come!!!
XD Excellent! The charries better watch out! I mean, we gotta keep them on their toes right?
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:February 16, 2023 at 8:54 pm #133339Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Same! For some reason I always want to write 27 instead of 76 XD
Lol, see, we’re in the same boat!!! XD
XD Excellent! The charries better watch out! I mean, we gotta keep them on their toes right?
Yes…yes…we must… *rubs hands together evilly, manically laughing* XDXDXD
February 16, 2023 at 8:57 pm #133342@freedomwriter76
*joins in evil maniacal laughter* Bwhahahaa!!!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:February 16, 2023 at 9:01 pm #133345@princesachronicle22 ZYRIN!!!! AHHH HE IS SO CUTE/SWEET 😍😍
also…it may have just been me so feel free to tell me if so but did I kinda get the hint that Zyrin was a bit flustered at Lyn’s presence?
Jocelyn
“Colored? What’s that supposed to mean.”
Lyn shot him Nyx a small look, still smiling. “Nice to meet ya, Dylan and Zyrin! That’s quite a glow you have,” Jocelyn commented, pointing at Zyrin’s chest.
The young man blinked, looking down, seeming a bit confused.
“Is it part of your race? My friend Luna would probably love to meet you,” Jocelyn then stood, dusting herself off. She then laughed slightly. “Sorry, guess all the questions are a bit…forthcoming. I’m a curious gal!”
The two guys only looked the more confused.
“I don’t think they have any idea what you’re talking about. Why don’t we leave it that way and head out?” Nyx hissed under his breath.
“Ah…” Lyn raised her brows, realizing slightly. “This is…your first time here…” She tugged on her jacket. “Mm, well, guess now’s a better time then any time explain!” She quickly sat down, criss-cross beside them, still grinning like a cat.
Nyx groaned, jumping from her shoulder. “Seriously? May as well have a cup of tea with these guys. Who knows, maybe they’re not crazy psychopaths…” Lyn quirked her lips at the kit before turning her attention back to Zyrin and Dylan.
“So…this castle’s a bit…of a conundrum. Long story short, it brings all sorts of different people here from different worlds. Meaning different races, breeds, creatures. Ya know, a couple of your average dragons sometimes…”
The two boys didn’t look any less confused. If anything they now just looked like they had major headaches.
“Great…”
“Anyway! The castle basically has a mind of its own, so my guess is, your a race from a different world, brought here…well…who knows why. I don’t even know why I’m here. As for you,” she pointed to Dylan. “Not sure what you are.”
Dylan’s eyes widened. “Uh! Um…h-human?!”
“Oh same! Well…Cirquian, but yea.”
Dylan rubbed his head.
Nyx placed a paw on his head. Sighed. “Lyn…you’re not the best at explaining things…”
“Well I’m trying aren’t I! I don’t see you helping.” Lyn sighed.
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebFebruary 16, 2023 at 9:05 pm #133347@freedomwriter76 what group u thinking??
im just thinking it’d be something for Hitchens to meet Paxton again 😬
last time he saw November, November burst into flames
Grimm nearly broke his wrist 🤣
im thinking November will probably try to have more control….or someone will have to knock him out
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebFebruary 16, 2023 at 9:07 pm #133349@freedomwriter76 FELIX AND FRIDA NO!!
IF THEY HURT THOSE BABIES!!!
gasp…do those babies know they’re grandparents…IS THAT WHY THEY WERE CRYING?!?!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebFebruary 16, 2023 at 9:09 pm #133350ZYRIN!!!! AHHH HE IS SO CUTE/SWEET 😍😍
Thanks! He his a very frsh character so I’m kind of seeing how he developes as I go along
also…it may have just been me so feel free to tell me if so but did I kinda get the hint that Zyrin was a bit flustered at Lyn’s presence?
Yes he was, he hasn’t really interacted with cute girls before XD and Jocelyn is just so sweet and outgoing!
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