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February 3, 2023 at 3:57 pm #131440
@thearcaneaxiom I know! So cool!! And she does find healing thankfully!!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebFebruary 3, 2023 at 4:03 pm #131448*dies laughing*
…both of my characters in your group are non-human boys. XD I don’t think Fynn would find them very attractive…
XD It’s okay though, I’ll have them roll with it. I’m sure Derek has a snarky comment somewhere… and Luca doesn’t understand flirting and will just…I dunno. He’ll do something. XD
- This reply was modified 1 year, 9 months ago by Gwyndalf the Wise.
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19February 3, 2023 at 4:05 pm #131449I’m fine with my characters going with Fynn and meeting Luna. =)
XD Luna might not like meeting Derek, but I think she and Luca will get along.@freedomwriter76
XD I’m so confused as to who these characters are with so I’m sending Teilo, Evander, and Zules to your group with Leon if you’re still okay with that.
- This reply was modified 1 year, 9 months ago by Gwyndalf the Wise.
- This reply was modified 1 year, 9 months ago by Gwyndalf the Wise.
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19February 3, 2023 at 4:09 pm #131455*blinks*
*dies laughing as well*
My bad! XD
@godlyfantasy12 can add in Luna if she wants and that can be who Fynn is talking too instead.đWrite what should not be forgotten. â Isabel Allende
February 3, 2023 at 4:17 pm #131464@princesachronicle22 @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @grynwdalf-the-wise anyone on?
do yâall mind if Luna joins the group Fynn is in instead Princess?
also @freedomwriter76 I just remembered I gotta RP as ma boys XD⌠Iâm kinda at a bit of a loss to what to RP for Grimm and November đ
Paxton
A monsterâŚ.
Paxtonâs hands trembled as he brought Hope closer to his chest.
Inky black tentacles, reaching outâŚgraspingâŚgropingâŚpulling at his skin. The sticky saliva that dripped from the beastâs teeth. Itâs foul breath, heating Paxtonâs face.
The blood from his palm that circled about themâŚtaunting the creatureâŚdrawing him closerâŚand closerâŚ
A scar given to him by the one whoâd been supposed to care for himâŚ
The one whoâd been supposed to love him the mostâŚ
âSacrifice isnât about loveâŚitâs about power.â
And before Paxton knew what he was doing, he was folded against himself, crying.
âPaxton!â He tensed as a hand gently touched his shoulder, jerking away. He shook his head, covering his ears as he began to rock back and forth.
No! Quiet! No more noiseâŚno more lies!
âShhâŚitâs alrightâŚitâs alright, SnowâŚitâs alrightâŚâ The voice softened, nothing but a whisper, though he still couldnât put a face to it.
SnowâŚ
White. Soft. Fluffy.
But sometimes cold. Frosty. Distant.
Never the same. Always different. No two were alikeâŚ
SnowflakeâŚ.
âSnowflakeâŚeasyâŚ.â
He opened his tear-stained eyes, blurry vision clearing slightly. Wulf knelt in front of him, along with a crying EmberâŚ.
Why was Ember crying?
Paxton uncovered his ears, feeling the dampness beneath his cheeks.
OhâŚ
âSnowâŚ?â Grimm whispered, not daring to reach out a hand, which Paxton was thankful for.
Paxton took up his bear again, nodding slowly. He wiped his eyes with his sleeve, reaching out with on arm for Ember. He made contact, quickly leaning into the ginger.
The teen blinked in surprise, flushing. He looked at Grimm, eyes wide. The dark-haired boy merely smiled.
November slowly wrapped his arms around Paxton, pulling him into his lap and whispering in his ear.
âI-Itâs alright nowâŚyouâre safeâŚâ
YALL MY HEART đ
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebFebruary 3, 2023 at 4:20 pm #131466AWWWW PAXTON!!!! *sobs* …I love those three so much together.
XD and since you asked, although you can already tell, I’m on.
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19February 3, 2023 at 4:24 pm #131470@esther-c BAHAHA ok Iâll RP as her and yâall can just pretend Fynn was flirting with her if youâd like XD @gwyneth-the-wise
Luna
Luna peeked her head around the corner, voices buzzing in her ear. A faint smile twitched at her lips, though she knew she should keep her optimism in check.
There wasnât a huge chance it was her friendâsâŚbutâŚhopefully whoever it was was friendly.
Luna followed the stream of voices until she ran into a small group of curious looking young men. Or who appeared to be young men.
Two seemed to be of different races. The one, however, who appeared to be her age, looked perfectly human.
Luna smiled politely as the group turned to her. She waved, laughing a bit awkwardly.
âUmm⌠helloâŚ?â
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebFebruary 3, 2023 at 4:41 pm #131479@loopylin @theloonyone Not trying to be pushy or anything, but did anyone see my last RP? it’s back there somewhere….
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
February 3, 2023 at 4:44 pm #131480@keilah-h Yeah Iâm working on it rn
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
February 3, 2023 at 4:48 pm #131481@loopylin Ok great! I won’t be on for much longer so I might not write a reply until tomorrow. But I’d like to at least read it!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
February 3, 2023 at 5:11 pm #131489BethÂ
A dragon? No⌠there was no way.
Both siblings stared at Feather, Beth in disbelief and Simon in complete fascination.
âBut dragons are extinct.â Beth said.
Simon looked at his sister with a grin. âI want to see the dragon, Beth. My head is fine for now.â
Beth glared at him, but then slowly her own sly smile spread across her face.
âWhat dragon? You know dragons donât exist anymore, Simon. Clearly youâre delirious. You need rest.â And, before he could protest, she led him down the hall.
They found a bedroom easily. They seemed to be numerous in the castle. Simon fell asleep quickly after Beth made him drink some water. Once he was asleep, she slipped out into the hall, and closed the door noiselessly behind her. She turned to the others who had waited outside.
âSo, who wants to stay here with me and who wants to go look for medicine?â
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
February 3, 2023 at 5:18 pm #131490@princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h
Do the group in the armory and the group in the portrait hall still exist?
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
February 3, 2023 at 5:30 pm #131492@godlyfantasy12 @esther-c AGH sorry I didn’t see the RP you did before the one with Fynn so I’m starting from that point @princesachronicle22
XD Yeah I’ll pretend Fynn was talking to Luna…
Derek
A group of people was standing near the windows in a almost observatory-like room. A human girl smiled and waved them over.
Luca immediately ran over to them and almost tripped over himself in his excitement.
Typical.
Derek walked over, arms crossed.
“Hi! I’m Skyler,” the girl said. She motioned to the older boys behind her. “These are my older brothers Destry and Fynn.”
I’m not falling for that, thanks.
Luca waved. “Hi! I’m Lucaandwejustgoteatenbythefloor,” he paused and thought a moment before continuing. “…whichmeansyoumust’vegotteneatentooand-”
Glaring at the group, Derek took his knife and piece of wood out of his belt and began whittling. He sighed. It was gonna be a long day.
Luca
After telling the Nadir family all his best secrets, inside jokes, and made Derek roll his eyes fifteen times, a girl with purple hair walked around the corner. She laughed and waved at them. “Umm… hello…”
Luca waved ecstatically.
However, before he could say hi, Fynn beat him to it. He ran his hand through his hair and said, “The name’s Fynn.” XD is anyone else getting “The name’s Bond… James Bond.” vibes from this??
Luca took his hat off. The flower…her hair..
He hurriedly took his flower out of the hat, and held it out to the new girl. “I’m Luca and this flower matches your hair!” He put his hat back on. “What’s your name?”
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19February 3, 2023 at 5:33 pm #131494@gwyneth-the-wise OH GOSH IS LUCA A FLIRT TOO?! BAHAHAHA
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebFebruary 3, 2023 at 5:34 pm #131495@freedomwriter76 Sorry, I am so behind in the castle right now.
EddieÂ
Eddie froze. In front of her was a group of five people: three adults, one in a wheelchair, and two little boys. The oldest boy was almost as tall as her. She quickly wiped away the tears that had been welling up in her eyes and then took a few steps forward.
âErm⌠Hello. Iâm Eddie. Have you⌠have you seen two men of your race walking past here? Or maybe a girl who looks like me?â She looked up at them hopefully.
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
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