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Aww, thanks for sharing (:
That’s really sweet, and I’m sorry if you ever feel alone, we all do
but just know that you have such an energetic and happy soul that is displayed through your writing! And it’s been awesome to get to know you through that C:
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:@thearcaneaxiom YESSSSS XD XD XD *gives beat XD XD*
@princesachronicle22 thank you! I don’t feel alone so much now as I used to a few years back, but the leader part was definitely…yea…I felt that…Parts of Ara are tied very closely to personal struggles.
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebAre Dylan and Liren gonna have a rap battle about how much they don’t deserve redemption? Lol
XD that would be hilarious!!
But do either of them even know how to rap? Dylan maybe
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:Yes, being a leader is really hard, being expected to have it together all the time, fear of failure
It’s just really really a lot of pressure, sorry you’ve had to go through that, I understand it though *hugs*
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:Amidala
Ami looked around. What had just happened? Lyn, Grimm, and Nyx had just… disappeared! That was impossible! But throughout her journeys, Ami had learned not to think that the impossible couldn’t be done.
She walked over to Uvah. “They just… vanished!” She said. “What are we going to do next?”
(Sry that was short.)
@gwyndalf-the-wise @princesachronicle22Ok… so I can’t remember what had happened last, so I’m just gonna make something up real quick. Here we go:
Fynn
Fynn cocked his head as Skyler introduced herself, him, and Des. He smiled when he saw that a couple of girls were in this group.
Walking up to one of them, he ran a hand through his hair and flashed her a smile. “The name’s Fynn.” He said.
(Fynn… seriously dude? Like, for real. They’re older than you!! XDXD Fynn is more hilarious than I thought. XD) (Gwyndalf, you can pick whoever of your girl characters that are there to react to Fynn. FYI, Fynn is only 14)
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
@lightoverdarkness6 u wanna RP as Asher??
I think he’s adorable btw lol
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebXD XD Fynn’s already got a goal here
I’ll RP as everyone in a few hours if I can
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:OH MY GOSH THAT WOULD LEGIT BE ADORABLE!!! I am so okay with that!!!
Yay!!! IKR!?!? Ahhh can’t wait XDXD
what’s crazy is Ara won’t be oblivious to this one probably cuz he’s younger then her XD XD
Ahhh poor November!!! XDXD It’s SO sweet!! I love the Aravember ship ❤
Also that RP with Ara…I wrote that and it got a bit personal and…well she is pretty much my alternate self. Every Charrie has a piece of me but Ara is pretty much… me (except for some differences obviously. She’s a lot more perfect after book 1 lol)
Aww yes!! I get that. 🙂 Both the things you mentioned in the RP, and having an alternate self charrie XD. Iris is pretty much me haha.
But yes, I feel you Godly (and Ara) :).
XD XD That is sooo cute
Ikr!? Lol and he teases Matthew on having a crush on his older sister (Iris) and now he can get a taste of his own medicine (probably whenever Dylan gets a chance to talk with him XDXD).
Also, I loved reading Dylan’s Rp!!!!! I still feal bad about Zyrin but he’ll be fiiine
Thank you!! I luv him <3. Lol, sorry Zyrin! XDXD
I can’t wait for them to actually start talking lol.
Are Dylan and Liren gonna have a rap battle about how much they don’t deserve redemption? Lol
XDXD lol maybe! Haha, I feel so bad for both of them :'(
#HugRikerSquad
Yes it’s gonna be so fun XD
Oh hey! So you know how Serin keeps calling Corvina a Hole? Well its a term for an ancient group of people with powers who can steal and emit light, which I think I mentioned.
Anyway, I just added in a charrie, Namal, and she is an actual Hole, though she doesn’t refer to herself that way because she is in a time waaay before Serin
so yeah! They have kind of similar abilities and I thought that was fun
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:@lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12
N’nesha
Reminder: Neshe and Nele are just two half’s of the same person thinking independent of one another at the same time.
Neshe: Something’s wrong.
Nele: Where’s my blanket?
My eyes fluttered open… I could only see dark.
Neshe: Something’s wrong. Get up. We’re on a stone floor.
Nele: Why do I feel like I went to sleep in my bed, only to wake up on a pile of rocks?
My legs were sore, but I got up anyway. My back felt worse. I grimaced.
Neshe: This is bad… the T’ashin only hit in the outskirts of Shal’le. Feel for any walls.
Nele: Ouch, why does that hurt so bad. Oh no, does this mean I’m gonna be late for that party?
I agreed with myself that I needed Neshe more right now. But I really needed both my sides if I’m going to get away from the T’ashin.
Neshe: I must look too young for them to think I got Rrachelek. Let’s get out of here.
Nele: Is this gonna be like some kinda escape room, let’s do this!
I eventually felt brick stone like the floor on the walls. I traced it along until I felt some wood.
Neshe: Wait… wood. I thought the T’ash didn’t have wide access to trees in the desert pole.
Nele: Wood doesn’t make sense. Maybe they bought it off some merchants to accent the price for their cool new slave?
I felt for any sign of a door knob of any kind without success. I listened carefully for any sign of life on the other side. Satisfied, I rammed my shoulder into it, despite Neshe saying it wouldn’t work. It worked a little. Small pinpricks of light flew through, but my shoulder probably will be bruised…
Neshe: That was stupid. Now they’ll hear that, and will put us in a tighter room.
Nele: Never done that before… it felt good. Let’s do it again!
I breathed. I have Rrachelek, I don’t need to contradict myself. I can’t take that back, so I either need to finish it off quickly, and make a run for it, or play dumb. Neshe didn’t like the idea of playing dumb, so Nele won this one.
I backed up, the bits of light letting me see the door much more clearly, and charged…
Note: This is very experimental for me. Writing a Shal’le character has been something I’ve intimidated myself for a while now. So I’d like to hear any thoughts on it. Any critiques or recommendations?
He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
XD that would be hilarious!!
But do either of them even know how to rap? Dylan maybe
Yesss!!! Lol Idk, Dylan probably could do it good XDXD
Working on it right now 🙂 I’ll try to post it within an hour or two
I think he’s adorable btw lol
Aww Thank you!! (Ikr!? He is XD)
Omg Fynn!! *Face palm* He’s hilarious XDXD
#HugRikerSquad
@thearcaneaxiom That was very interesting! I like where you’re going with the two different personalities. Kinda reminds me of the way a character might speak to their conscience in some of the old cartoons….?
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
@esther-c AHHH FYNN!!!! I do badly want him to meet one of my charries now.
AND LUNA IS NEAR HIS AGE THAT WOULD BE SO FUNNY!!! 😱 @princesachronicle22 would u mind if I changed plans a bit and had Luna meet Fynn and the others he’s meet? If Esther and @gwyndalf-the-wise are okay with it of course.
Also Luna was raised by a race not her own, and so is pretty naive, so she’ll probably just think he’s extremely friendly, respond in turn XD. She might actually make him a bit flustered (Idk exactly his personality) because she’ll be very eager to return to his kindness, not understanding he actually is flirting with her 🤣
also I feel I should post a pic reference for Luna
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSeb@thearcaneaxiom THAT WAS AWESOME!! I love her!!
ok…
so…
I have a character who isn’t like this…but is? XD it’s kinda weird.
some would think she has DID, but I researched it, and she doesn’t. She has Psychosis and c-PTSD due to childhood trauma.
Her name is Corvina. When she was young she went through a lot (and still does) of abuse and trauma, and as a girl made an “imaginary friend” of sorts as a coping mechanism.
It’s sorta her “Shadow self”
I write fantasy but There’s like idk if it would be called allegory? Tied in, so it grows to become a literal inner demon that drags her down.
Anyway, no one can see her or hear her, except Corvina, but she does take shape of a visible form a lot of times, sometimes shadowy wisps, sometimes very visible, looking like Corvina herself only darker, and Corvina has mental conversations with her (and sometimes verbal)
She gets lost in the conversations oftentimes, and can be tormented by…
Well…herself.
Your character just made me think of that even tho it’s definitely not the same, because this is something she has to break free of (though it does crop back up and it’s a battle she fights throughout her life, as her brother does as well)
Oh and she also has shadow powers (can manipulate and control shadows)
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebThat’s really cool!
Yeah, as a shal’le, this is just who N’nesha is, it’s in her biology, race, and culture. It still comes with huge issues that every shal’le has to face eventually, which is self mastery, and N’nesha only recently had her ceremonial celebration for that. So she new to proper self control. So there’s a lot of really interesting things you can get into when it comes to the mind and worldbuilding. It’s cool to think that in N’nesha’s case, it’s just life, but for Corvina, it’s a trauma hammered into her, there are countless routes to could go with those sort of things. I hope Corvina finds healing eventually tho!
He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
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