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February 3, 2023 at 11:17 am #131332
@freedomwriter76
I’ll wait until @godlyfantasy12 responds. If she’d rather just continue with you, I’ll get them to join Leon and his family. =)
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19February 3, 2023 at 11:24 am #131337Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@gwyndalf-the-wise. Sounds like a plan! 👍🏻😊
@lightoverdarkness6. @princesachronicle22. IKR!? 😍🥰💖February 3, 2023 at 12:07 pm #131344@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6 @gwyndalf-the-wise
ALRIGHTY I THINK THAT IS EVERYONE XD so here’s what I’ve got so far to make sure I’m correct
Ma boys (other then Nyx) is with Riker and his fam.
Lyn and Nyx are about to meet Leon and his fam.
Ara is gonna meet Asher and whoever else
Luna is alone and might meet Mayvee and Gwyndalf’s charries
Corvina is…alone XD
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#ProtectSebFebruary 3, 2023 at 12:25 pm #131348@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 @esther-c
XD I’m confused.
The group with Derek and Luca is: Skyler and others of Esther’s characters that I don’t remember the names of sorry!, and Princesa’s prince dude, the prince’s sister, and Mayvee? At least I think this was the group originally. XD
Aaaand now for the more confusing arrangement:
Teilo and Evander were originally by themselves, but now I’m gonna put them with whatever group Zules is in cause I can’t RP as her by herself.
Zules was originally going to be in the group with Riker, his family, November, Grimm, and Paxton…but then I found out that I can’t roleplay as her by herself (I haven’t developed her far enough yet to do that), and haven’t written any RPs for that group. That being said, I don’t know if we decided that there were too many characters in that group for three more to join that one…
So the backup option for my characters is the group with: Leon and his family and whoever else is to join them.
But…now Godly, you’re saying that they may end up with Luna and Mayvee? Or are you talking about Derek and Luca? Or am I misunderstanding you entirely???
XD I think y’all’ve broken my brain…XD
- This reply was modified 1 year, 9 months ago by Gwyndalf the Wise.
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19February 3, 2023 at 12:34 pm #131350Imma RP now XD @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @gwyndalf-the-wise
Arabella
It seemed to be her lot in life to go from one extreme to the other.
Leader of many,
To leader of none.
Ara pushed a loose strand of hair behind her ear, a sigh escaping her lips.
She couldn’t exactly say she was surprised. It seemed life always had her going from one thing to the next. Jumping from one hill to the other.
Or perhaps it wasn’t life…
But whatever it was…Ara had to admit, she was a tiny bit grateful for this moment of solitude…
Though she worried about her companions…her newfound family…it was rare to find such alone time among them.
Yes, she knew they’d give her all the time in the world if she only asked…
But they didn’t have that time back home…
And Ara?
Didn’t have time for solitude.
She was a leader now.
Place into this position for…who know what reason.
Why the Light One had chosen her was beyond reason…but, He had.
In charge of…so many broken hearts…
When hers was still trying to mend…?
Ara slid down the wall she leaned against, laying her head against her knees.
The dreams…the visions…they took a toll. Ara paid a price that…no one would ever fully realize.
The pain of seeing a future you don’t understand…
And the despair in seeing a past you can’t fix…
Ara didn’t always get moments of solitude anymore…but when she did, they often gave her time to think.
To reflect.
And…
To realize just how alone she felt.
She smiled a bit.
Perhaps being around people all the time wasn’t all that bad…
“Um…H-Hello?” A soft voice called out, making Ara’s head snap up. She blinked into the darkness, spotting the small form of a boy.
Paxton?
No…he was bigger then Paxton.
And no bear.
The boy eyed Ara apprehensively, as if he might bolt any second. Ara slowly reached out, a smile on her lips.
“It’s alright, I won’t hurt you.” She spoke. “I’m Arabella. You can call me Ara though, if you’d like…”
Well…
As said…
Finding people just…seemed to be her lot in life.
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebFebruary 3, 2023 at 12:37 pm #131351I’ll make the other RPs later today (hopefully XD)
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#ProtectSebFebruary 3, 2023 at 12:39 pm #131353@gwyndalf-the-wise oh I was just talking about whichever charries of yours was with Mayvee.
@princesachronicle22 said Mayvee was with some of ur charries rn, so I was like “OH OK! Luna can meet them too then!” But if they’re leaving then that’s fine lol#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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#ProtectSebFebruary 3, 2023 at 12:45 pm #131354@princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12 @thearcaneaxiom
I’m gonna do Dylan’s RP ;).
Dylan
As I trudged down the long hall of this place, this accursed place, I rubbed my arms quickly, trying to warm them. A wish for my jacket shot through me, but I pushed it away.
He needs it more than I do…
After all, a mistake, a miscreation like me doesn’t need warmth…
I slowed, head down.
…If my soul is already cold and dark.
I gritted my teeth and forced my arms to my sides.
I didn’t deserve warmth.
I didn’t. I didn’t.
Suddenly, I heard the familiar young, earnest voice in my mind.
“You’re not a miscreation…God doesn’t make mistakes!”
My mind reverted back to the memory and I stopped completely.
Asher looked up at me, eyes wide.
“No,” I said tearfully. “God doesn’t care about me…no one does.”
The young boy came over and laid a hand on my shoulder.
“He does, Dylan. He cares about you…”
Slowly, I looked up at him.
He smiled kindly. “And I do too.”
No. No. NO!
I am. I am.
There’s no God for me.
Another voice in my mind, smaller than the other, but much more peaceful, spoke. “God does love you and cares about you. And Asher has forgiven you for everything. You just have to forgive yourself.”
“…But it’s so hard,” I whispered softly, despairingly.
Suddenly a warm feeling wrapped around my heart, and spread through my body. My arms were no longer cold.
My mood warmed as well. I continued walking, searching the different rooms for food and water, but mostly, I was just thinking.
About my brother.
* * * * * * * *
I closed the door to one of the many rooms that I had looked in and huffed exasperatingly. I had been exploring for close to twenty minutes and I had found nothing.
I should probably get back to Asher.
As I turned to re-trace my steps to the room where I had left him, I heard a commotion in one of the rooms up ahead that I hadn’t checked yet.
I froze, and I listened carefully for further noise. My hand swiftly reached into the folds of my shirt, and I drew out my hidden blade.
My skills as a *(insert rank that I haven’t come up with yet lol) would prove me to be a formidable opponent if it came to fighting.
Slowly, I crept closer to the door, and stood a few feet away, listening intently.
My ears caught the the several smaller noises and a quiet voice exclaim softly, “Ouch!” It sounded young, maybe around my age, and male, but I wasn’t entirely sure, given the thick door that muffled it.
Backing away a little more, I watched as the door knob began to turn, then suddenly, out tumbled a figure, thudding onto the floor.
I blinked.
My eyes grew wide and my brow furrowed.
What happened? He’s not moving…
I took a hesitant step to the still figure sprawled on the floor. He didn’t move.
Still brandishing my dagger, I quickly crossed the distance between the two of us and knelt down. Slowly, I turned him over and studied him.
He was out cold, mouth slightly open. His chest glowed with a faint (what color would he be while passed out lol?).
Glowed?
I did a double take, wondering if my vision was playing tricks on me. But no, he was indeed glowing.
He didn’t look to be a threat, but you never know. I sheathed my dagger, but kept it close in case I needed it.
How did he pass out? Wait…how do you wake up someone who’s unconscious?
I racked my brain, thinking, but nothing came to mind. Training as a *(same rank) was more learning how to kill someone, not revive them.
Guilt flooded into me, thinking of the things I had done. How deceived I had been.
I pushed it away, and focused on reviving the young man.
Um, what am I supposed to do?
I shook him gently. “Uh hey.”
He didn’t move.
I exhaled and shook him more forcefully. He still didn’t move at all. I sighed and ran a hand through my dark hair. Then I nearly shouted, “Hello?!”
- This reply was modified 1 year, 9 months ago by Light.
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February 3, 2023 at 12:47 pm #131356Aww poor Ara!! She’s so sweet <3<3
Asher’sgonna have himself a little crush XD#HugRikerSquad
February 3, 2023 at 12:56 pm #131357@lightoverdarkness6 OH MY GOSH THAT WOULD LEGIT BE ADORABLE!!! I am so okay with that!!!
what’s crazy is Ara won’t be oblivious to this one probably cuz he’s younger then her XD XD
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#ProtectSebFebruary 3, 2023 at 12:57 pm #131358And they haven’t been besties for years 🤦🏻♀️
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#ProtectSebFebruary 3, 2023 at 12:58 pm #131359@gwyndalf-the-wise @godlyfantasy12
I think you had everything right Gwyn, I have my prince Everi and his younger sister. Esther has two brothers and Skyler, I think. And I think Mayvee will somehow get lost and find Luna.
I thought that Ara and Luna were together, and they were both gonna meet Asher but it seems that Ara is by herself (poor girl *cries*) but just ran into Asher.
@godlyfantasy12 so is Luna only meeting Mayvee or was there someone else? I think that Light’s other charrie Dylan is still by himself right now, but he might later run into my charrie Zyrin and they’ll all join as a group with @thearcaneaxiom me and @lightoverdarkness6 ‘s group withLiren- Arcane’s charrie
Dylan and maybe Asher later?- Light’s
Phervin, Namal and Zyrin- mine
Did I get that right? Or did I just make everyone more confused?
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:February 3, 2023 at 12:59 pm #131360Also that RP with Ara…I wrote that and it got a bit personal and…well she is pretty much my alternate self. Every Charrie has a piece of me but Ara is pretty much… me (except for some differences obviously. She’s a lot more perfect after book 1 lol)
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#ProtectSebFebruary 3, 2023 at 1:06 pm #131361@godlyfantsy12 @lightoverdarkness6
Aww poor Ara!! She’s so sweet <3<3 Asher’s gonna have himself a little crush XD
XD XD That is sooo cute
Also, I loved reading Dylan’s Rp!!!!! I still feal bad about Zyrin but he’ll be fiiine
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:February 3, 2023 at 1:08 pm #131362Are Dylan and Liren gonna have a rap battle about how much they don’t deserve redemption? Lol
He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
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