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February 2, 2023 at 11:49 pm #131289
@princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6
Liren
Man… Murderer… … Monster… … … I’m sorry…
He could never be sorry, he was a monster… … … I’m sorry…
He killed me… the monster… he killed me … … … I’m… sorry…
… … …
Breath. I’m sorry… My eyes shot open, though I only saw smudges of light. Pulsing, stinging awareness flooded into my mind.
Where am I? An urge to find out what was happening began to swell from Kirrtes, making itself known in my left handed grasp, furthering my wakefulness.
I tried to move, but found I was restrained somehow… restraints are good. The smudges began to clear, they weren’t restraints… I seemed to be tangled in… branches? Kirrtes sent me a strong feeling of frustration, so I attempted to unwind myself from the knot of branches unsuccessfully. The frustration grew even more. Kirrtes urged me to begin swinging at them with it. They easily gave way to its blade. I felt the little stabs of pain from the tree as each branch was sized. Confused… pain… hurt… why? The tree thought. Part of me wanted to give in to the numbness of the pain, but no. I needed to feel every hurt, it’s what I deserved.
Finally, the piling branches and my weight added up to the branches bellow me, they let out a loud crack. Kirrtes wasn’t piercing the tree at that moment, but it didn’t need to for me to know how much that must have hurt. Confused… pain… hurt… why?
I fell. It was nice and short. Grass at the bottom. Dazed, I tried to get up, only to discover a sharp pain became apparent… I broke my arm… a broken arm is good. That’s a pain I could shrug off, it was my left arm. A great wave of anger swelled from Kirrtes. Kirrtes and I both knew that it was useless if my arm was broken. A short time of peace while it leads me somewhere to heal.
I got up on my other arm. Kirrtes had me immediately tear a peace of my cloak and form a makeshift sling. The next urge was find shelter, I looked around, it hardly took me turning my head a few degrees to see a grand stone castle, that’ll work. Kirrtes didn’t hesitate, pushing me along, foot by foot towards the mysterious building…
He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
February 2, 2023 at 11:53 pm #131290@princessachronicle22 thatβs fine! U donβt have to make her leave rn, I didnβt realize she was with others lol!!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebFebruary 2, 2023 at 11:54 pm #131291@thearcaneaxiom so does the sword make him kill anyone he comes across or is it certain people?
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#ProtectSebFebruary 3, 2023 at 12:02 am #131292Lol, yeah we’ll see how it plays out!
Mayvee could easily get lost, but I’m not sure if she would leave the group because she wouldn’t want to offend anyone. But she probably would if she felt unsafe or threatened
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:February 3, 2023 at 12:05 am #131293Kirrtes doesn’t simply kill anyone, though it probably would in many cases. Kirrtes is highly intelligent, and has particular intensions and plans. The biggest thing about Kirrtes stabbing sprees however (unknown to even Liren) is that this is actually how it interacts with the world. It’s not just a cruel torture to its wielder to know the pains of their victims. Kirrtes itself is trying to learn what’s going on through finding the thoughts of its victims. This is how it learns, and how it interacts. This is in no way a defense, Kirrtes is evil in nature, but it has purposes in its destruction.
He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
February 3, 2023 at 12:56 am #131300@princesachronicle22 I gotcha
@thearcaneaxiom wow! Interesting!!#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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#ProtectSebFebruary 3, 2023 at 7:50 am #131303@princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12 @thearcaneaxiom
Okay! So I think Dylan’s going to find poor Zyrin lol. And then, Godly, did you want Arabella and Asher to meet? And then after they meet up, they can try to find everyone else. Does that sound good??
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February 3, 2023 at 7:57 am #131306@princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6
Sounds good to me. I think Liren is first going to meet Phervin? But who wants to meet N’nesha? I guess I’ll write her first, and we’ll see how that goes.
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He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
February 3, 2023 at 8:37 am #131309@princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @godlyfantasy12
Hmm, maybe after my character Asher meets someone, we can have N’nesha and Asher and maybe Arabella? Idk. lol I guess we’ll figure it out π
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February 3, 2023 at 8:56 am #131312Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@lightoverdarkness6. @mineralizedwritings. AGHH, IKR!?!?!?!? ππ
@godlyfantasy12. Sorry this is so late!!! π And yeah, Leon can meet Nyx and Lyn! ππIris
βEight.β
Iris felt a tear trickle down her cheeks. An eight-year-old little girl…who was deaf just like Iris’ little baby boy…wasn’t around anymore. But she didn’t have the words to say to Grimm.
She had learned that as one person…she couldn’t fix all of the problems in the world.
Only God could do that.
She faced Grimm again with a small smile. “…Thank you…f-for opening up, I mean…”
Naja
βG-Good, you?β
November wasn’t very convincing. But Naja knew to not push, so she merely smiled. “I’m doing pretty well. I’m a lot older than I was then…and I’m doing pretty well. Life is good…I have Eli and Lily as baby siblings…and Mom is going to have another baby sibling…” She smiled.
She couldn’t wait until the new baby was born…she always LOVED babies.
“But what about you? How’s life different these days?”
Riker
Paxton’s gaze fell to his shoes. βSheβ¦theyβ¦they s-saved me.β
Riker raised one eyebrow. Saved him from…what, exactly? A bad family…or something…else?Β
Lily raised her eyebrows. “What did they save you from? Was it a big, scary monster!?”
“Lily…” Riker sighed. She was energetic, but Paxton seemed pretty shy. “He still seems a bit overwhelmed…let’s not question him about everything…”
February 3, 2023 at 9:06 am #131314Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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And…bc I want another group…here’s another family collage. π
From left to right:
Top Row- Leo, Talia
Bottom Row- Ella, Sadie
Info!!!
Name: Leo Noam Baumann
Age: 35
Personality: Protective, courageous, loving, kind, sweet, generous, devoted, stubborn at times
Looks: Dark brown wavy hair that’s cut fairly short, tan skin, dark brown eyes. Wearing a 1950s-era US Army Dress Uniform and dark brown dress shoes.
Next!!!
Name: Talia Elizabeth Baumann
Age: 32
Personality: Kind, loving, sweet, compassionate,
Looks: Dark brown, long straight hair that comes about two inches below her shoulders, dark brown eyes, pale skin. Wears a 1950s-era blue dress, black heels, a black jacket, and a white cross necklace.
Next up!!!
Name: Ella Ellie Baumann
Age: 12
Personality: Loving, sweet, a wonderful older sister, protective, brave, stubborn like her father, XD,
Looks: Light brown, wavy hair that comes down to almost the middle of her back, bright blue eyes, pale skin, and freckles. Wears a light blue sweater over a black plaid skirt that comes to her knees, white socks, black flats, and a small white pearl necklace
And, finally!!!
Name: Sadie Adinah Baumann
Age: 5
Personality: Loving, sweet, silly, pretty outgoing, shy at times, honest (sometimes brutally…XD), always does her best, creative, great at problem-solving.
Looks: Dark brown straight hair that’s in a bob style like the picture, dark brown eyes that are cloudy, lightly tanned skin. Wears a 1950s-era red plaid dress with a gray coat overtop, white knee socks, and black mary janes.
Other: Blind from birth, Sadie is completely unable to see.
February 3, 2023 at 9:14 am #131316Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Time to be the new family/group!!!
Leo
Well…he was back at the castle.
He hadn’t been here for…well…years.
Ever since little Ella was five…that seemed like a lifetime ago.
“I remember this place…” Ella whispered, looking around the dimly lit hallway, and Talia nodded in agreement.
“I remember it too…that was so long ago…”
Leo nodded in agreement, just as he saw Sadie running her fingers over the rough stonework. “…Where are we…?” She whispered, feeling over the stones again.
Leo carefully came up behind her and lifted her up into his arms.
Sadie faced him, but she couldn’t see him. She reached her small hands up to his face, feeling it, and when she felt his beard and moustache, she smiled. “Daddy.”
Leo smiled and kissed her cheek. “I’m right here. We’re in a castle right now, sweetheart.”
“A castle? Like in the storybooks!?” Sadie asked, interest piqued.
Leo nodded. “Just like in the storybooks. Here, do you want to walk?”
Sadie nodded, so Leo set her down, but he held onto her right hand, letting her feel the walls and floor with her other hand.
He glanced over at his wife and older daughter. “Should we keep going?”
Talia nodded and smiled. “We probably should. Ella, do you want to walk with me?”
Ella nodded and took Talia’s hand with a smile. “Let’s go, Mama.”
February 3, 2023 at 9:21 am #131319Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@gwyndalf-the-wise. You’re totally fine, girl!!! πππ
You can still join with the other people if you want if @godlyfantasy12 is fine with it! ππ
Or you can have your charries meet up with Leo, Talia, and their two girls…they are currently alone. π π
February 3, 2023 at 10:37 am #131325@freedomwriter76
AHH LEO!!! TALIA!!! ELLA AND OH MY GOODNESS SADIE!!! Oh my gosh Sadie looks exactly like my little cousin!!! SO CUTE!!!
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February 3, 2023 at 10:41 am #131327@freedomwriter76
Aww they’re all grown with their family and it’s so cute!!!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
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