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January 30, 2023 at 5:29 pm #130760
Beth
“In any case, we can’t go looking for them now. This one–Simon, right?–he needs medical attention.” She looked around. “Any idea where we can find that? I’m assuming there’s an infirmary somewhere, for whatever guards once patrolled this castle.”
“Carter has something that might have been able to help.” Beth responded. She thought hard, considering all their options.
“But since he’s not here… An infirmary won’t be much use unless it has some willow bark… He isn’t bleeding. What he needs most now is water and sleep. Can you help me find a bedroom? After that I can go look for medicine.”“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 30, 2023 at 8:49 pm #130789@princesachronicle22 @freedomwriter76 @Idk-who-else-to-tag
Okay, here are two of my favorite charries <3<3!!
First of all!!
Name: Asher Brooks (His real parents last name is Brooks. His foster parents last name is Johnson)
Age: 14
Personality: Fun, happy, upbeat, loving, serious when the situation calls for it, hard working, trustworthy and faithful.
Looks: Light brown hair, slightly wavy like in the picture. Blue eyes, tan skin.
Wears: A blue hand-me-down T-shirt with jeans, scuffed up sneakers and a black jacket.
#HugRikerSquad
January 30, 2023 at 9:26 pm #130797Love the picture of him!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 30, 2023 at 9:47 pm #130801So I already posted this a while ago but wasn’t able to add them in so, here they are again!
Esrian- Age 19 (still not entirely sure but that’s the age I’m going with). Description- hmm, all I know for sure is that his chest (his spirit) glows different colors based on his emotions. Character- He is one of my least developed so I’ll work on it
Phervin- Age 35. Description- reddish hair and freckles. Pale greenish eyes. Has oddly shaped ears with two curving points like cyclones. Character- Loyal and funny, will take any chance he can to make a pun or a joke. Has the ability to absorb and emit sound. He is a guard and spy hired by a noble family.
Namal- Age 32. Descrption- Short with bronze skin and dark black hair often put into a low bun. Light brown eyes. Character- Curt and serious. Has the ability to absorb and emit light. Phervin’s partner as a guard and spy.
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 30, 2023 at 10:23 pm #130803@freedomwriter76 HERE lol!
November
November smiled as Riker appeared in the doorframe, eyes bright as he recognized the Ginger’s face. The man smiled.
“November!”
He was older once again, a few wrinkles on his skin, but still handsome as ever. He let out a laugh, arms outstretched in mirth as he stepped through the door.
It was then he spotted Grimm, eyes widening slightly.
Grimm backed away, still wary, eyes narrowed.
“I…” Riker paused, eyes roving back to November, then spotting the boy wrapped around his leg. He blinked, mouth half open. His eyes softened as Paxton let out a small breath, shuffling behind November slightly.
Riker smiled. “And…these must be some of your friends…?”
November smiled, nodded. He turned to Grimm, chuckled. “Ah…Grimm? This is Riker. He was here the very first time Ara and I arrived at the castle. He’s…” He met the man’s bright eyes, heart filling with warmth at all the memories.
“A good friend.” The man gave a small nod in Grimm’s direction. Grimm relaxed a bit.
“And this is Paxton.” November placed a hand around the white-haired boy’s shoulder.
Paxton frowned slightly, squeezing November’s leg tighter. Riker gave a small wave, “Hello there, little guy.”
November glanced down, whispering, “Hey…it’s alright. Riker’s…really nice.”
Paxton looked up, blue eyes meeting November’s own. He turned to meet Riker, removing a single hand from where he gripped November and Hope, giving a small wave.
“Nice to meet you, Riker,” Grimm said.
“And y-“
“Daddy?” A voice called from the hall behind Riker.
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 30, 2023 at 10:24 pm #130804@lightoverdarkness6 AHHH ASHER IS SOOO CUTE!!! Gasp if u have kept Matthew u should have Asher and Matthew together, BESTIES!!!
and we can have them meet Luna and Arabella if you’d like??
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 31, 2023 at 8:04 am #130823Thank you!! Okay cool! Love their descriptions :)!
AHHH ASHER IS SOOO CUTE!!! Gasp if u have kept Matthew u should have Asher and Matthew together, BESTIES!!!
Aww Thank you!! Ikr!?! Yes!!! They are best friends, and it’s SO SWEET <3<3<3! Yeah, I kept Matthew in, but took out Lyla.
and we can have them meet Luna and Arabella if you’d like??
Okay! @princesachronicle22 is adding 3 of her characters so Asher won’t be alone, and then, if it’s okay with Princesa, I’d love for them to meet Luna and Arabella!
I’m adding Dylan too, but I think he’ll be separate from Asher and Matthew for a while. He’s more of a loner. Kinda like Corvina ;).
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January 31, 2023 at 8:05 am #130824@princesachronicle22 @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @Idk-who-else-to-tag
Second!!
Dylan Brooks!!
Age: 19
Personality: Serious, kind, sweet, (At this point in his life he’s also doubtful, sad, quiet, and can have an attitude.)
Looks: Dark hair, not as wavy as Asher’s and icy blue eyes.
Wears: White T-shirt with Blue jeans and blue jacket over it. Wears high-top sneakers.
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January 31, 2023 at 11:01 am #130830@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12
Fine with me if they want to meet Ara and Luna!
Also that picture of Dylan? I am fanning myself because he looks good.
I think he’ll get along with Namal pretty well
So excited!
- This reply was modified 1 year, 9 months ago by PrincesaChronicle22.
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 31, 2023 at 2:06 pm #130837@princesachronicle22 @gwyndalf-the-wise
I cannot write a RP today because I need to get some writing done. But I should be able to tomorrow!! 🙂
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 31, 2023 at 2:20 pm #130844Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Riker
“Daddy?”
Riker instantly turned, distracted from November, Paxton, and Grimm by his baby girl.
“Oh. Iris, Lily, Jonathan, Naja, Eli…come on…it’s safe. It’s an old friend of mine…” He motioned for them to come over, and signed to Eli that it was safe to come in.
They nodded and all followed Riker into the room.
November, Paxton, and Grimm all stared for a minute, surprised, maybe. Shocked, possibly.
Riker smiled. “This is my family. This is my wife, Iris, and these are my kids, Jonathan, Naja, Eli, and Lily.”
Naja smiled softly at November. Laughed quietly. “Hello again, November. It’s been a very long time since I last saw you.”
(also, just realized that both November AND Jonathan are both 17…they’re the same age!!! 😅😂)
January 31, 2023 at 2:26 pm #130846@princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12
Fine with me if they want to meet Ara and Luna!
Okay!!
Also that picture of Dylan? I am fanning myself because he looks good.
IKR?!? He is my super handsome broken baby ❤️❤️😂😭
I think he’ll get along with Namal pretty well
So excited!Yeah they probably will 😉! I can’t wait either!!
Also!! Dylan is going to be alone for a bit, maybe a few RPs. He’s gonna need to be alone while he processes a few things 😉.
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January 31, 2023 at 2:43 pm #130850@freedomwroter76 bruh!! That’s crazy!
November
November blinked at the young girl standing in front of him. The same little girl he’d met all those years ago, who now, was much older.
Then again…so was he.
He gave a lopsided smile. “Naja! Its good to see you…” Naja smiled big, eyes crinkling. “How old are you now?”
“12” She replied.
November blinked. That would mean, for Naja, it had been 7 years since she’d last seen him and Ara. (She was five last time right?)
“Iris,” Riker turned to his wife, then motioned at November and the others. “This is November, and his friend’s Grimm and Paxton.”
Iris waved, holding the youngest boy by the hand. “Nice to meet you all!” She looked at November sweetly, “My husband’s talked about you quite a bit.”
November blushed slightly.
Suddenly, the youngest little boy, Eli, tugged at Iris’ blouse, eyes furrowed in what seemed to be confusion.
He pulled his head into her leg, looking warily at November and the others, just as Paxton had at Riker.
Iris ran a gentle hand through his hair, bending down to his level. Her hands began to move in a way that November had seen once before, years back when he’d been in Grimm’s homeland.
Grimm raised a brow.
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#ProtectSebJanuary 31, 2023 at 2:43 pm #130851It’s all good!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 31, 2023 at 2:45 pm #130852Yeah! Poor guy will definatley need some processing time before he has to deal with Phervin XD XD
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (: -
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