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January 29, 2023 at 5:10 pm #130532
Cammie
The door flew open and a blast of air pushed them out of the small room. Cammie glanced up and saw Milo along with two strangers. Behind her, she could hear Beth talking, but Cammie focused on her friend. She stepped forward and threw her arms around Milo in a hug. “Hi,” she murmured.
“Hi,” he answered, “Are you okay?”
Cammie shrugged.
Milo glanced up when one of the strangers introduced him to Beth and Simon, causing Cammie to start listening too.
“Beth,” Beth said, introducing herself. “And this is my brother, Simon.” Cammie looked from Beth then to Simon and frowned. She was practically carrying her brother, Simon grimacing in pain.
“How was he hurt?” The same girl from before asked. Cammie’s eyes widened. Before they got stuck in that room, the wind had been hurling them into walls and throwing them to the floor. It wasn’t a surprise that one of them had gotten hurt. Had he hit his head?
January 29, 2023 at 8:05 pm #130553@freedomwriter76
November
Grimm headed for the door, turning the knob. But before it ever fully opened, a shadow appeared and a voice called through the shadows;
“Whoever’s in there: come out with hands up!”
Grimm tensed, a fist at his side. He reached for the metal claws hanging on his belt.
November felt as Paxton’s fingers gripped his pants’ leg, head burying into him. November blinked.
Wait…
Grimm narrowed his eyes, preparing himself for conflict, until November stopped him, wrapping a single arm around Pax.
“Wait! I-I know that voice…”
Grimm turned with a raised brow as November slowly approached, practically having to drag the leg Paxton had hold of.
“R-Riker?” November called out.
Silence.
November swallowed, anxiety rising to his chest. Was he wrong? Had it been his imagination? Maybe it was someone else…
“Riker?”
Paxton looked up at November, still gripping his leg, along with Hope. He buried his face deeper, brows furrowing.
“E-Ember?” He whispered.
also @esther-c @princesachronicle22 btw my charries aren’t in that group anymore just so u know 😊
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 29, 2023 at 10:25 pm #130613@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
I’m working on a roleplay, but I probably won’t have it finished until tomorrow, sorry. *grimaces cause I have the writing speed of a snail in hundred degree weather* 😅
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19January 29, 2023 at 10:36 pm #130616Beth
“How was he hurt?”
Beth’s eyes softened as she looked at her brother.
“The wind threw him against a wall. I think he has a concussion.”
“ ‘m fine.” Simon grunted.
“Clearly.” Beth scoffed.
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 29, 2023 at 10:40 pm #130617@anyone
My poor Eddie is all alone again. Anyone want another character in their group?
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 30, 2023 at 8:01 am #130621@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Hey all! I’ve been thinking, and I think I might take out Matthew and Lyla (or just Lyla, heh) and add Dylan and Asher. I really need to be Role Playing as those two, maybe Matt too, because I’m writing more of their part in my book. Is it okay if I add Dylan and Asher somewhere and just meet up with any characters that need a group?
#HugRikerSquad
January 30, 2023 at 8:31 am #130623Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@loopylin. She could meet Adolphus and his boys and Steffi and Jason if you’d like. 😉
@lightoverdarkness6. Totally fine by me!!! It’s whatever you wanna do! 💕😁
@gwyndalf-the-wise. You’re good!!! Take your time!!! 💕💕💕 @godlyfantasy12.Riker
“R-Riker?”
Riker paused.
That voice…it sounded vaguely familiar…but he hadn’t heard it in years.
“Riker?” Someone called again.
Riker slowly inched forward…cautiously.
He slowly stepped into the room, and instantly stepped into candlelight…when he saw a familiar head of orange hair. “November!?”
January 30, 2023 at 9:04 am #130625Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Soooooo…I wanna add more charries, lol. 😂😅 In a group of their own. 😉
Soooo…since it’s another family, another family collage!!! 💕😂
From Left to Right:
Top Row-Leon
Bottom Row-Isabel, Albert, Elias
Now, to introduce everyone!!! Though y’all DO know Leon, but he’s older now, so I’ll introduce him as if he was new, lol. 😂
First up!!!
Name: Leon Jedidiah Wagner
Age: 32
Personality: Loving, sweet, kind, courageous, devoted, serious and stern when he needs to be, a faithful man of God, forgiving, compassionate, generous, a wonderful father to his three kids, protective
Looks: Black, straight hair in the style of the picture, tan skin, dark brown eyes. Wears a light brown and beige 1950s era suit, much like the one in the picture, with brown pants and dark brown dress shoes. Has a beard like the picture as well. About average height, about 5’10”.
Other: Wears a silver wedding ring on his ring finger so people assume that he’s married, when he’s not anymore. Still struggles, some days, with the grief from his wife’s death, especially when it gets close to her birthday and the month she died. Working extremely hard to raise his 3 kids as a single dad. And has the numbers “55463” forever tattooed on the underside of his left arm from his time in the camp. (which no one will be able to see unless he rolls his sleeve up, btw)
Next!!!
Name: Isabel Lily Wagner
Age: 14
Personality: Loving, sweet, gentle, protective, compassionate, forgiving, generous, has a servant’s heart, hard-working, a wonderful older sister to her two baby brothers
Looks: Long, curly bright blonde hair that just rolls down her shoulders, bright blue eyes, pale skin. Wears a light pink sweater, a white cross necklace, a black plaid skirt, white ankle socks, and black flats. Looks almost exactly like her mother.
Next!!!
Name: Albert Erik Wagner
Age: 8
Personality: Silly, a bit of a prankster, loving, sweet, laughs a lot, makes others laugh a lot, almost always smiling
Looks: Black, wavy hair that’s messy, like in the picture, tan skin, freckles, dark brown eyes. Wears a simple white short sleeve shirt with a black vest overtop, black pants, and white 1950s style sneakers
And finally!!!
Name: Elias Abelard Wagner
Age: 7
Personality: Silly, loving, sweet, generous, loves to help out, VERY shy
Looks: Bright blonde straight hair that comes right below his ears, bright blue eyes, pale skin. Wears a simple white button up shirt, brown shorts, white ankle socks, and white 1950s style sneakers.
January 30, 2023 at 9:30 am #130627Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Leon
They walked down the hall, Isabel holding Albert’s hand, walking beside Leon, Leon with Elias in his arms.
He’d been here before…but that was long ago. A long, long time ago.
Back before the war was completely over…back before Leon had forgiven Riker.
“Dad…how do we get out of here…?” Isabel asked quietly, turning to face him, her bright blue eyes meeting Leon’s dark brown.
Leon smiled faintly. “We’ll get out, I promise…don’t worry.”
Isabel nodded. Albert, skipping beside her, let go of her hand and rushed a little bit up ahead. “We can be explorers, Isabel! Daddy, we can be explorers!”
Leon laughed and nodded. “I suppose we can, can’t we, Albert?”
“Uh huh!!! Isabel, come help explore with me!”
“You’re forgetting a word…” Leon hinted.
“Please, Isabel? Will you please help explore with me?” Albert asked.
Isabel nodded and smiled. “Of course, Albert. Elias, do you want to come?” She held out her hand to her baby brother.
Elias shook his head and laid his head on Leon’s shoulder, his arms wrapped around Leon’s neck.
Leon smiled softly at his daughter. “I don’t think he’s in the mood for exploring right now. You and Albert can go ahead, but don’t go too far, alright?”
“Of course, Daddy.” Isabel replied with a smile.
She walked ahead and grabbed Albert’s hand. “Let’s explore this castle, Albert.”
“Yeah!” Albert cried, and they walked a bit more ahead, but not too far.
Leon moved Elias over to his other arm, his right arm getting tired, and smiled faintly.
He’d let them keep the joy of childhood as long as possible.
“Do you not want to go play with Albert and Isabel?” Leon whispered to Elias.
Elias shook his head. “…I don’t want to…I’m tired…” He whispered, whined, almost.
Leon held him closer and watched as his older children played.
He smiled.
January 30, 2023 at 12:12 pm #130657Yes!! I have some charries I wanted to add but it didn’t end up happening, I could put them in to meet yours!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 30, 2023 at 12:36 pm #130661@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22
Okay then! Thank you!
Princesa, I’ll add Asher and Dylan sometime today! thank you!v
#HugRikerSquad
January 30, 2023 at 12:46 pm #130664@esther-c @godlyfantasy12 mind if I write how yur charries disapear? You don’t have to read it if you don’t want (:
UVAH
A girl approuched her. “How did you do that?” She asked, flurishing a hand to the group, surrounding the Nyx.
Uvah blinked, not expecting the question. “Well, i just used some basic herbal medicnes…” She said, belatedly.
Normally, Vey’blen were the ones to ask all the questions and people just looked at them weird and told them to get out of their business. At least that was what her father had said happened outside of Veynavere. Uvah herself hadn’t gone on her own Collection yet. Though it would be nice to go to someplace to gather more healing knowledge and experiance, she had set her sights on something else.
Her thoughts turned giddy as she touched the betrothal earing on her left ear. But they quickly soured as she wondered again why she was here. Without her husband to be.
“Wait, what the–”
Uvah looked up and around the girl, to see one of the men pulling back, blinking at the air. Someone gasped. It was Uvah herself.
Half of the group was… gone. The creature she had just healed. The girl that had first introduced herself. All gone. She looked around the space but saw no signs of them.
“Did they just…vanish?” Uvah asked the rest of the people that were still there, questioning how it was possible.
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 30, 2023 at 1:21 pm #130677@freedomwriter76 Yeah, that’d be great! I’m going to rp her reaction to the boys disappearing and then she can bump into them.
Eddie
They were gone. Reuben and Jakob had just been standing in the doorway when they had just… vanished.
Eddie’s heartbeat sped up. She shoved her bread into her pocket and rushed out into the hall.
“Reuben? Jakob?!” she called. Where were they? Was this a prank? Neither men seemed like the type to play jokes.
“Hey! Come on out! This isn’t funny!”
“…Reuben?”
The castle was silent except for a faint clanging bell in the distance. Eddie’s eyes began to water, but she quickly rubbed them dry.
Focus, Ed. She thought. You just need to find Ellie. I can do that on my own. I’ll be fine. I can do this.
She stood still for a moment, forcing her breathing to slow down. Then, she looked up, clenched her hands into fists, and continued walking down the hall.
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 30, 2023 at 1:27 pm #130682@theloonyone @keilah-h I’m adding to my previous rp.
Beth
“Clearly.” Beth scoffed. Then she turned to Milo with a suspicious look.
“Milo. Where’s the rest of our group? Why aren’t Carter and Carmen with you?”
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 30, 2023 at 3:59 pm #130737@theloonyone Just to be clear, I noticed Cammie called Feather a “girl”….Just to be clear, she is an adult. Sorry if it sounds like I took it the wrong way, I was just making sure you knew.
Feather/Crosshair
“The wind threw him against a wall. I think he has a concussion.” Beth explained.
“I’m fine.” Simon mumbled.
“Clearly.” Beth growled. She turned to Milo. “Where’s the rest of our group? Why aren’t Carter and Carmen with you?”
“There were more of you?” Crosshair didn’t look excited to go looking for more new people.
“Shh.” Feather hissed at him. “In any case, we can’t go looking for them now. This one–Simon, right?–he needs medical attention.” She looked around. “Any idea where we can find that? I’m assuming there’s an infirmary somewhere, for whatever guards once patrolled this castle.”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
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