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January 27, 2023 at 7:25 pm #130360
@godlyfantasy12 Fine with me–none of my characters are in your groups, so it should be good.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 27, 2023 at 7:44 pm #130361Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Now time to be the Schind Family!!! 💕💕💕💕
Riker
“I remember this place…” Naja whispered, looking around at the walls and candles. “…I don’t remember everyone though…except November and Bella…I remember them a lot…”
“Daddy, Mama, are we the only ones here!?” Lily asked, turning around to face Iris and Riker, who walked behind their kids, hand in hand.
Iris smiled and raised an inquisitive eyebrow. “What do you mean, baby?”
“Is Ean here…or Emilia?” Lily asked, asking about her younger cousins, “or Auntie Angelina or Uncle Jakob?”
Iris slowly shook her head. “I don’t think they’re here, baby duck.”
“What about Leo? Or Talia? Or Ella and Sadie? Or Wolfgang? Or Reuben? Or Joshua? Or Adela? Or Amy and Lizzy? Or Memaw Adinah?”
Riker glanced at Iris with a smile. Well, Lily could certainly list everyone in their family off.
And that didn’t even include Iris’ parents. Or Leon, whom Riker counted as family even though they weren’t related by blood. The Leon whom Iris called “Uncle Leon” even though he wasn’t actually her uncle, same as how she called Adinah “Memaw” even though she wasn’t her grandmother.
Long story short, their family gatherings were huge.
Riker laughed and faced his baby girl again. “We don’t know if they’re here yet, cupcake. But as far as we know, they’re not here right now.”
Lily nodded. “Okay then!” And she turned around and began skipping, just as footsteps and the slam of a door were heard.
Jonathan reached out and grabbed Eli’s shoulder, stopping him from continuing forward.
Eli raised an eyebrow, turned around, and signed; What is it?
Jonathan signed back that they had heard something, and Eli inched closer to Jonathan, just as Jonathan and Naja came back closer, Riker stepped ahead to be at the front, and Iris lifted Lily into her arms.
Someone was close by…but who…and were they friend or foe?
January 27, 2023 at 7:50 pm #130362Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Anyone can meet them, I don’t care who. Maybe a smaller group, tho…because Riker’s family is 6 people in of itself, lol. 😂😂😂
January 27, 2023 at 7:52 pm #130363@freedomwriter76
If you want, I can send in Teilo and Evander in their direction, or plunk two new (girl) characters in there."...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19January 27, 2023 at 7:57 pm #130364Ok I think that’s what I’m going to do. I hope u don’t mind @esther-c @princesachronicle22 @keilah-h (Allen was in Corvina’s group) @loopylin @mineralizedwritings
that should be everyone it will affect.
Ok so just for info nothing has changed with my charries except they’ve “blipped” outta the castle for a bit of time so just a bit more stuff has happened in their own worlds, and they know the castle a bit better because they’ve been able to talk to each other about it all, but other then that not much has changed.
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#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 27, 2023 at 8:04 pm #130365Cammie
Cammie backed up from the shaking door, bumping into Elissa. (loopy, which of your characters were with them?) “Ow,” Elissa hissed. Cammie could hear her shuffling around, but couldn’t see a thing in the dark. Elissa gasped. “The wall… it’s right here.” Cammie listened to her stumble along the wall, running into her and the other two. “This room is tiny!”
Carefully, Cammie stuck out her hand, it immediately hitting the cold stone wall. If she put up her other hand she would be able to touch the door. Cammie stepped back toward the door and it suddenly stilled. It was quiet, just the group’s breathing heard. Slowly, she pushed up against the door, turning the knob. It didn’t budge. Cammie shoved it a little harder, but it felt like she was trying to push a wall. “Guys,” she said softly, “I can’t open it.”
One of the others tried to open it as well, getting no better. She huffed. The air was so still in here. The air was so still. Maybe she was just imagining things, maybe it was just because she was scared, but it almost seemed harder to breathe. Cammie’s eyes widened, breathing faster and heavier. She slammed against the door again. It hurt. Cammie stepped back while the others tried again. “Help!” She yelled. Maybe Milo had seen her text. Maybe he was coming. Cammie yelled again, her voice cracking, and three other voices joining.
Mil0
They rushed down another hallway, stopping when Crosshair pointed at one of the doors lining it. Milo reached forward to open the door, but his hand stalled about a foot from it. He pushed a little further, moving, but barely. Crosshair and Feather both reached toward the door, stopping a little closer than he had. “Cammie?” He called through the door.
The yells stopped. “Milo?” Her voice came back cautiously.
“Yeah,” He told her, “We can’t open the door. It’s like the air is just… stopping us.” Milo glanced to the left to see Crosshair’s hard slowly getting closer to the doorknob. “Actually, I think we’ll be able to. Just wait a moment.”
January 27, 2023 at 8:26 pm #130366@freedomwriter76
Aww It’s Steffie all grown up! Oh she has Polio 😢? I just had an image pop into my head of when she’s little and finds out when Dietrich dies 😭💔
Oh, I love Jason’s middle name! He sounds so sweet ❤.
AWWW Adoulphus and his babies!!!! And RIKER!!! And his babies ❤❤❤
Also! I’ve been thinking about adding Dylan and Asher to the castle, bc I need to work on their personalities and relationship. Is everyone okay with me adding them? @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 I think I’m going to take out Lyla and put in Asher and Dylan.
So I’m not sure if I should “Blip them” out of the castle for a bit and then put them back in. Where like only a bit of time has passed, enough for all the characters to get together in their own worlds and explain the castle to each other should they ever go back, and not be confused and such.
That sounds good! Yeah, I’m okay with it! I think I might do that too, and when I put them back in, I might add a few characters too.
#HugRikerSquad
January 28, 2023 at 10:20 am #130379Alrighty! Sounds good!
@godlyfantasy12 @princesachronicle22Am I supposed to RP next?? I can’t remember. XD
Sorry I haven’t RPed yet!! I will do it today. I promise! 🙂
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 28, 2023 at 11:36 am #130388This RP will probably be short cuz I have to leave somewhere soon. 🙂
And can you remind me who’s joining up with my charries?
Skyler
Sky peeked around Destry, trying to see the group. They didn’t look dangerous at all. Destry’s posture relaxed.
Before Des could stop her, Sky marched forward and introduced herself. “Hi!” She said cheerfully, a smile on her face. “I’m Skyler! These are my brothers Destry and Fynn.” She motioned to each of them in turn. They both waved, Des going forward to shake hands.
Sky thrust out her hand for a handshake to the person closest to her. “What’s your name?”
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 28, 2023 at 3:00 pm #130416Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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If you want, I can send in Teilo and Evander in their direction, or plunk two new (girl) characters in there.
Sure!!! Sounds like a plan to me! Can I have a description of what they look like, tho…whoever the Schind family is meeting?
@lightoverdarkness6. She had polio a few years prior to this present time Steffi, and yes, it did paralyze her, and Frida/Felix kicked her out for being a “cripple”, so she lives with Adolphus.January 28, 2023 at 3:53 pm #130436@esther-c u can probably go ahead and have them react to my charries disappearing 😂
so for everyone’s notice, I think I’m gonna split the groups like this-
Ara with Luna
Lyn and Nyx (MA DUO and he is all better obviously and back to his feisty self)
and MY BOYS TOGETHER!!!!! (Minus Nyx. I think I’m done for now with the Nyx and Grimm banter.)
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 28, 2023 at 3:55 pm #130437@freedomwriter76 soooo as usual (of course it’s up to u, u might be tired of me and my charries XD) but I luv putting my babies with ur characters XD (Paxton and November) and Grimm shall be with them.
so if ur good with it, which group do u think/would like them to meet?
as for my other two groups, anyone else who would like to meet them is good with me!
OH and again…poor corvina is all alone XD. Tho she’ll probs stalk November sometimes lol. The stalker….
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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#ProtectSebJanuary 28, 2023 at 4:00 pm #130438Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. I never get tired of you or your charries!!! 💕💕💕
Well…I do love November with Riker, lol…so maybe that group.
@gwyndalf-the-wise might be having a couple of her charries join too, but we can have both! The more the merrier!!! 😁But in the end, it’s up to you.
I just love Riker and November’s little relationship. 😍
January 28, 2023 at 5:19 pm #130447@freedomwriter76 SAME!!!! ALSO!! Grimm knows ASL!! (His sister was deaf 😭) and so we’re other children and people he knew
and Riker has never met Grimm…
OR PAXTON!!! Ahhhh!!!!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 28, 2023 at 5:24 pm #130448Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. OOH, then this will be GREAT!!! Since Riker hasn’t met Grimm OR Paxton, and since Grimm knows ASL, so this will be EPIC!!!
You wanna RP for your charries, and we’ll have the two groups meet? 😉
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