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January 26, 2023 at 9:20 pm #130287
Ugh, I had a really long rp almost finished, but then I accidentally refreshed the page. š¢ And now I have to get off to go to dinnerā¦
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
January 26, 2023 at 9:20 pm #130288Ugh hate it when that happens! XD
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 26, 2023 at 9:30 pm #130289@loopylin ARGH ITS SO ANNOYING WITH THAT HAPPENS š
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 26, 2023 at 11:16 pm #130291Oh that is so annoying! Sorry, that happened!
Thanks! I love reading your RPs a lot too!! š
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 27, 2023 at 3:31 am #130297@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12
Ellie
āNo glass weapons?ā Serin asked. āInteresting.ā
āPardon me, butā¦. Wouldnāt a glass weaponā¦..break? Quite easily, I might add?ā Allen asked her. Serin didnāt seem to hear, so Ellie answered instead.
āNot really. I mean, yes, glass blades break easier than metal, but they also have the capability to be much lighter and sharper. They were great for people who relied more on their stealth and speed than on their strength. I remember reading about a time when there were assassins who would use obsidian knives that were so sharp, they could cut between molecules. Iām not sure if the molecule part is true, but I thought it was coolā¦ā
Ellie cringed inwardly as she trailed off the end of her sentence. I need to stop suddenly rambling to people like that. Probably sounded like a know-it-all just now. That question wasnāt even for me.
As she stared at the ground in embarrassment, something caught her eye.
āWhat the-ā
(Switching to Danteās pov)
Danteās shadow moved. It grew to an unnatural size and melted into the shadows around it. The darkness grew and twisted around the room. The torches on the wall flickered out to almost nothing. It was dark. And cold. Goosebumps spread down his arms and the hair stood up on his neck.
Suddenly, Maylee shrieked, making him jump. Then, just like that, the shadows were gone.
Everyone stared at the spot where the shadows had been. Danteās nervous energy escaped in a faint laugh as he ran his fingers through his hair. He crouched and examined the spot where the shadows had been. There was nothing out of the ordinary. He looked up at his companionsā pale faces.
āWhat the heck was that?ā
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
January 27, 2023 at 4:04 am #130298Dante was picking his teeth with a small blade,
love this XD
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
January 27, 2023 at 8:07 am #130300@freedomwriter76
Okay girl!! You do whatever you need to do š Yeah, I get that. I’ve been thinking about pulling Matthew and Lyla and entering Dylan and Asher or maybe Iris, bc they aren’t nearly as developed. Ooh, future versions of some of your charries?? Sounds awesome :D!!! Can’t wait to see who they are!
im thinking when the rest of the group leaves, the door shuts and they get locked in the painting room?
Oh okay! Yeah, that sounds good. Aww yeah, I’m sure Matthew will miss Paxton too <3<3!
#HugRikerSquad
January 27, 2023 at 5:24 pm #130330Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. @loopylin. @lightoverdarkness6. @mineralizedwritings.
Alright y’all, I’m pulling everyone out. š
There’s others I wanna use, and so I gotta pull out my charries so I can. š
So yeah.
But now everyone gets to meet (some) new characters!!!!
I’ll first start off with this charrie, a very new one of mine!!!
Name: Jason Grayson Donner
Age: 25
Personality: Devoted, patriotic, sometimes a flirt, XD, protective, loving, courageous, honest
Looks: Dark brown, wavy hair, dark brown eyes, pale skin. Pretty tall, prob. around 6’2″-6’3″. Wears a Korean War Era Army Dress Uniform.
Other: He’s in the US Army and stationed at a base in the American Sector of West Germany. Has a current girlfriend, whom I will introduce in a minute
January 27, 2023 at 5:29 pm #130331Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Next!!! Jason’s girlfriend!!!
Name: Steffi Frida Baumann
Age: 22
Personality: Loving, kind, sweet, honest, can be stubborn, hard-working, never gives up, brave, loves people with a love that knows no bounds, believes in herself when no one else does
Looks: Long, black, straight hair, bright blue eyes, pale skin. Wears a plain 1950s style gray dress, black flats, and a small pearl necklace.
Other: Jason’s girlfriend. Adolphus’ sister. Henry and Aiden’s Aunt. Bound in a wheelchair, being paralyzed from the hips down due to Polio.
January 27, 2023 at 5:34 pm #130332Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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More charries!!! XD This one’s making a comeback!!! ššš
Name: Adolphus Johann Baumann
Age: 38
Personality: Brave, honest, kind, devoted, hard-working, loves his sister and his sons with a love that knows no bounds, does everything he can to help people out
Looks: Dark brown, wavy hair, bright blue eyes, pale skin. Wears a plain 1950s era brown suit without a tie and the jacket unbuttoned, and black work boots. Wears a silver wedding ring on his ring finger as well. Fairly tall, about 6’2″ or so.
Other: Haunted by guilt, still scarred by his abusive childhood, and still dealing with the grief of his brother dying years ago and his wife leaving about a year ago. A man just looking for hope.
January 27, 2023 at 5:38 pm #130333Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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And now, onto Adolphus’ baby boys!!! SO CUTEEEEE!!! AHHHHHH!!!!! ššššš
Name: Henry Dietrich Baumann
Age: 6
Personality: Loving, sweet, VERY SHY, silly, a wonderful big brother to Aiden
Looks: Dirty blonde, short, straight hair, dark brown eyes, pale skin, freckles, has a couple front teeth missing. Wears a simple short sleeve white shirt, a blue vest, brown pants, and brown dress shoes.
January 27, 2023 at 5:43 pm #130334Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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And finally (for now!!!) Aiden!!!
Name: Aiden Bryson Baumann
Age: 1
Personality: Sweet, silly, laughs a lot, a total sweetie pie, outgoing, not shy AT ALL, loves to be held like any baby, and is fine with just about anyone holding him
Looks: Short, messy bright blonde hair, bright blue eyes, pale skin. Wears an outfit just like Henry’s, but with a red vest instead of a blue one.
January 27, 2023 at 5:55 pm #130341@mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin
Allen
āNot really. I mean, yes, glass blades break easier than metal, but they also have the capability to be much lighter and sharper. They were great for people who relied more on their stealth and speed than on their strength. I remember reading about a time when there were assassins who would use obsidian knives that were so sharp, they could cut between molecules. Iām not sure if the molecule part is true, but I thought it was coolā¦ā Ellie explained.
Obsidian blades.
That sounded like something some predecessor of the Jedi would’ve used…….
But it made sense.
He’d have to check his father’s library for information on that sometime.
Suddenly his shadow…moved, morphing into a blackĀ thing.
The little girl–Maylee–shrieked, and the shadows went back to normal.
“What the heck was that?” Dante hissed.
“I don’t know…..” Allen stared at his shadow. “It seems like something the Jedi or the Sith could do…..but I suppose none of your worlds have access to their power….”
Feather
A yell sounded from far away.
“Is that them?” Feather asked.
Milo nodded, his eyes fearful.
“Let’s go then!” Feather darted down the hallway.
The voices got closer.
Crosshair pointed to a door. “That one.”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 27, 2023 at 5:58 pm #130342Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Soooo…IDK who they should meet, but all of my old charries disappeared, and I’m gonna be my new ones. š
Adolphus
“He seems…energetic.” Jason murmured, as Henry squealed and ran up and down the hallway, making whooshing noises as if he was a plane.
Steffi laughed. “Very much so…he’s normally like this, as long as he’s around people he knows…he must trust you now, Jason.”
The American soldier smiled and nodded. “I’m glad. He’s a really cute kid. Most people would try to coral him if he was like this, though…and if he didn’t listen, well…” Jason shrugged.
Adolphus fought back a grimace.
Why did everything have to remind him!? “…Force isn’t exactly the best way to get a kid to do something. If only more people would figure that out.”
Jason nodded in agreement. “Amen to that.”
Henry made another whoosh, and ran back over to them, stopping just in front of Adolphus, his little round cheeks red, arms up. “Daddy! Daddy! Up! Up!”
Adolphus smiled faintly, glancing from Henry to Aiden, who was in one of his arms. Aiden had a fist in his mouth, but he pulled it out, looked around, and crowed, “Dada!”
Adolphus smiled, giving his baby boy a peck on the cheek, and looked down at Henry. “You can come up. But you’re forgetting something…” He hinted.
Henry paused…and looked up at him with big, brown eyes. “Up…please, Daddy…?”
“There we go.”
And with one fell swoop, Adolphus lifted Henry up into his arms, now a son in each arm.
Henry gave him a kiss, and Aiden, watching his brother, did the same, giving Adolphus a slobbery kiss on the cheek.
Adolphus gave them both a kiss on the forehead and faced Steffi and Jason. “Well then, shall we keep going?”
Steffi smiled, and Jason, grabbing the handles of her wheelchair, grinned. “Let’s go.”
January 27, 2023 at 6:00 pm #130343@freedomwriter76 AWW THOSE KIDS ARE SO CUTE!!!
I mean, you’ve got good-looking adults, but those little boys….
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
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